ShiVi OS - Jail ke Kisse

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Because ShiVi MUs always a cause for writing an OS 😊 Do ignore any mistakes, haven’t proof read.

The OS begins with Shiva in jail. Just my version of what could have been, plus I added some filmy drama which is so unlike me but I couldn’t resist 😆, it is PS afterall.

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Shiva getting flashback of the flask falling on the floor and crashing, he’s thinking "Aaj ek baar phir Dhara bhabhi ka sapna toot gayi, woh bhi woh Bua aur Anita ke wajah se, unn ko toh main nahi chodungi aur woh Maami Ki Behen Ki Beti unn ke saath kya kar rahi thi, kya woh sacch mein unke saath mili hui thi"

Shiva’s alter ego appears and stands in front of looking at him grumpily saying

"Ehh gadhede, ab tu apni Chipkali pe shaq karega, woh Chipkali jisko tune talaak diyaa phir bhi Dhara Bhabhi ki bacche ki baat sunke woh wapas iss ghar mein aayi, tujhe lagta hai woh aisa kuch karegi aur toh aur tujhe itna gussa nahi karna chahiye tha, tune Raavi ko dhakka kaise de diya, agar usse chot lag jaati hoon, tere bheje mein thodi bhi akkal hai ki nahi, agar tu uske saath aise bartaav karega, toh tu uske laayak hi nahi hai" acccusingly.

Shiva hides his face in his palms thinking about all the turn of events of how he pushed Raavi and said such awful things to her and the thought of his behavior due to his anger makes him shudder and guilt, he says "Jab mujhe gussa aata hai, agar koi bhi mere aas paas aaya toh aisa lagta hai woh bhi jal jaayega aur bhasm ho jaayega, mujhe Raavi se door rehna chahiye, agar agli baar mere gusse se usse kuch hua toh, nahi aisa nahi ho sakta, main aisa hone nahi dungi. I promise Raavi aaj ke baad mere gusse ke wajah se tujhe kabhi takleef nahi hogi"

Meanwhile Raavi is found waking alone in the middle of the road, remembering her slapping Shiva and looking at her hands thinking "Yeh tujhe ho kya jaata hai Raavi, jab baat Shiva ki hoti hai, tu itna violent kaise ban jaati hai, maana ki woh galat hai, usse Anita di se aise bartaav nahi karna chahiye tha, but baat jab Dhara Di ki aati hai, usse kuch soojhta nahi hai, woh gusse mein kuch bhi kar sakta hai, tujhe usse samjhaane ke bajai, tune usko jail bhej diya? Last time, jab Shiva ne doctor ko dhamki dene ke koshish ki thi, tab toh tune usse acche se samjhaaya tha naa, usse shaanth karwaaya tha aur woh ho bhi gaya tha, toh iss baar kyun tune aisa kiya"

Raavi contemplates telling her maasimaa that she is going to withdraw the police complaint and calls home, she finds out that her maasi is in the police station and rushes there. On finding her maasi, she tells her that she’s come to withdraw the complaint and bail out Shiva. The conversation goes as follows,

Maami : “Ohh Mara Bhogilal, tu pagal ho gayi hai Raavi, complaint wapas kyun lenge woh jungli ne jo Anita ke saath kiya woh dekha nahi kya tune"

Raavi : "Maasi, maine dekha, but Anita di ne jo Dhara Di ke saath jo dhoka kiya, uske wajah se Shiva ko gussa aaya, yeh shuru Anita Di ne kiya tha, agar sazaa milni chahiye toh dono ko, yaa toh kisi ko bhi nahi"

Maami refuses to let her do so.

Raavi : "Theek hai maasimaa agar aap aisa karengi, toh main bhi police ko bol doongi ki woh Anita Di ko bhi arrest kar le kyun ki yeh sab kuch unke wajah se hi hua hai"

Maami : "Ehh Raavi, tu apni khud ki behen ko andar karna chahti hai, woh bhi uss jangli ke liye, chup chaap ghar chal ne"

Raavi : "Maasimaa aap Shiva ki insult mat karo, aur complaint wapas le lo, warna main toh Anita Di ko jail bhejwa kar rahoongi"

Meanwhile Krish comes to the police station and hears the conversation going between the two and comes to them.

Krish : "Bhabhi aap andar chalke Shiva se toh mil lo ek baar"

Raavi : "Nahi Krish, mujhse himmat hi nahi ho rahi uske saamne jaane ki, kis muh se usse milne jaaon, woh mujhse door hi rehna chahega" recalling Shiva’s words at the hospital and turns her face away to hide her tears.

Krish goes inside the station calling out to Shiva in his cell. Meanwhile Shiva is lying on one of the benches in the cell with his eyes closed.

Shiva : "Aye half ticket, chup chaap mujhe chain se sone de, warna bahar aake aisa maarunga, ki yaad rakhega"

Krish : "Arrey Shiva, mujhe baad mein pithna, pehle sunn toh le ki bahar kya ho raha hai tere naam pe"

Shiva: "Bahar kya ho raha hai matlab? saaf saaf bolna"

Krish : "Raavi bhabhi aap ke bail ke liye Maami se ladh rahi hai, bol rahi hai agar maami complaint wapas nahi lengi toh woh Anita ko bhi jail bhejwa dengi"

Shiva: "Kya? Yeh Maami Ki Behen ki beti, mere liye apni behen ko jail bhejwane ko bhi tayyar hai"

Shiva (in mind) : "Shayad maine Raavi ko phir se galat samajh liya, woh mere liye apne pariwar se bhi ladh rahi hai, aur main..”

Shiva : “Krish, jaa jaake Chipkali ko bol mujhse aake mile"

Krish : "Woh nahi aayenge, bolti hai ki tujhse milne ki himmat nahi ho rahi"

Shiva : "Chal ek kaam kar, usko jaake aisa aisa bol" (whispers a plan to Krish)

Krish comes running out of the police station to where Raavi’s at.

Krish : "Bhabhi jaldi andar chalo, Shiva ko police waale cell mein maar rahi, berehmi se, mujhse dekha nahi jaa raha, aap unko roko please"

Rushing inside, a panicked Raavi, sees her Bhoothnath casually standing against the railings of the cell with as if he has been waiting for her.

Raavi : "Shiva, Shiva tu theek toh hai"


Realizing how much she missed him, his face, his broody eyes, she looks at him longingly and then her eyes fall on right cheek which has turned a shade of red and it makes her wince, thinking about all the slaps he got on his face today and she slowly gathers the courage of raising her right hand, reaching out to his right cheek as if all their animosity is forgotten in that moment and caresses it gently, "dard ho raha hai?"

To which Shiva gently shakes his head into a no, while drinking in her presence and senses all his pain vanish with her mere touch.

He snaps out of his thoughts, when he remembers how he had pushed her away a few moments ago and said such harsh things and yet here she came rushing to him at the mere thought of him being in pain. He wondered what had he done to deserve her, and how unfair was it for her to be tied to him.

Shiva : "Tu theek hai, tujhe kahin chot toh nahi aayi naa, jab maine woh…. maine tujhe dhakka diya, main woh… tujhse kehna chahta Raavi, ki mujhe nahi pata ki mujhe itna gussa kyun aata hai, aur gusse mein humesha tujhe hi hurt kyun karta hoon, I am sorry, I know maafi maangne se halaat badal nahi jaayenge, naa hi main apne harkat ki safai de raha hoon, but jab maine bhabhi ka sapna phir se toote hue dekha, tab pata ni mujhe kuch nahi soojha, aur woh bhi Anita ke wajah se, bachpan mein Maami ke wajah se main apne pariwar ko toothe bikarte hue dekha hai, aur aaj bhi mujhe aisa hi laga ki sab kuch toot raha hai, aur Anita ne jo kiya uske baad mera gussa….." drops down on the floor kneeling and crying with his hands covering his face.

Raavi too kneels down to match his level and asks him to calm down, reaching to his palms and brushing her thumb against them, trying to make him feel at peace. Shiva gazes at her intently saying

"Sunn Raavi, main aaj ke baare mein bohut socha aur mujhe aisa lagta hai, ki tujhe naa mujhse door rehna chahiye, mere gusse ki koi guarantee nahi hai, agar aaj maine gussa mein kuch aur kiya hota, jisse tujhe lag jaati toh main apne aap ko kabhi maaf nahi kar paunga, tu naa mujhse kahi zyaada better deeserve karti hai. Iss liye agar tu chahe toh mere jail se bahar aane ke baad, humein divorce ke proceedings ko jaldi hi aage badake tujhe mujhse humesha ke liye mukt kar dena chahiye, chaahe jitna baar bhi hum kareeb aane ki koshish karein, mera gussa aur humaare Mami ke saath haalat, hum dono ko kabhi bhi sukoon se jeene nahi denge aur har baar tu yeh sab mein phas ke pisthi hai aur main nahi chahta aage bhi aisa ho. Tu bohut acchi hai Raavi, tujhe main aur hurt hote hue nahi dekh paaunga. Jab bhi tu bole khatam karlete hai yeh rishta"

The minute Shiva completes saying the last line, Raavi leaves his hands and holds Shiva’s collars and pulls him onto the bars close to her with nothing but anger in her eyes flaming "Tu samajh tha kya hai apne aap ko… mujhe kya samajh rakha hai tune, ki jab chaahe apne paas bulaa lega, jab tujhe galat lage tab door karega, main tujhe chodke kahin nahi jaane waali, gaant baandh ke rakh le tuu yeh, main iss rishte mein reh ke tere sar pe naachungi, humesha, humesha ke liye samjhaa, aur yeh kya mujhse door reh, mujhse door reh laga rakha, ab tu dekh"

She gets up from the floor and walks towards the constable's table and picks up a gun from there, and points it at the lady constable who has just entered and says "Agar aapne mujhe mere pati ke saath jail mein nahi daala toh main shoot kardoongi"

Shiva (panicks) : "Aye Chipkali, kya kar rahi hai tu, pagal ho gayi hai, gun neeche kar"

Raavi : "Haan ho gayi hoon pagal main"

In fear, Lady constable obliges and puts her in the same cell as Shiva. And she lunges herself at Shiva and hugs him fiercely like her life depends on it. "Main kahin nahi jaaongi, tujhe jo karna hai kar, dhakka dena hai de, main phir bhi nahi jaaaongi"

In that moment, forgetting everything Shiva protectively grabs her by the waist and hugs her tightly, leaving no space for air to pass between them. He breaks their hug and makes her sit on the bench with him and looks at her with anger and concern and starts telling her off, "Agli baar agar aisi harkat ki naa, mujhse bura koi nahi hoga, samjhi Chipkali, zyaada hero banake ki koshish karegi, toh teri Chipkali waali pooch kaat ke haath mein de dunga, tu kyun meri baat nahi sunti, jab Haveli mein bhi main ne kangan ke chakkar mein jump maari thi, tab bhi tu mere peeche peeche chali aayi thi aise hi, kyun apne aap ko jhokim mein daalti hai"

Seeing that Shiva is back to his angry concerned self, she smiles saying "Ab jahan Shiva hoga, wahin toh Raavi rahegi" while lying her head on his shoulder, wrapping her arm around his, says

“Aur rahi baat tere gusse ke uska bhi koi na koi hal dhoond lenge, iss baar tu akele yeh sab handle nahi karega, main bhi tere saath rahoongi”.

They were both impulsive and said a lot of things to each other in anger but no matter how grave the fights would be, they would always find their way back to each other.

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PS : Appreciate your feedbacks and criticism. I just like seeing ShiVi with each other. Hope you enjoy it. Cheers!

Edited by nolee3097 - 3 years ago

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Loved it Namratha❤️! Although their problems haven't completely sorted out, this conversation is a much required kick start to the whole process of it! Kaash aise scene mil jaata show pe... 😒

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Loved it 😍😍😍😍❤️❤️❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Namrata, this is awesome. Raavi come back to get him out of bail, instead ends up being with him in the jail and their conversation is on the right path. Ot would be nice if it plays out this way but unfortunately the makers have decided to take the path of destruction of the relationship and the bonding.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Namrata loved this ❤️❤️

Beautifully you have written about Shiva addressing his anger issues also Raavi being determined as always at time of engagement too she will always be the one who would put efforts till the very end and would do anything to save her relationship with Shiva .

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Its awesome Namratha..this showcase their understanding of each other....I loved reading it. ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Beautiful yaar. Far better than the show 👍🏼

Would love to read more of your work ☺️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This was very beautiful love.🤗❤️ I enjoyed reading this very much.

Thank you for the tag.😳

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hey Namrata!!!


This is soo soo sooo touching and beautiful thing I've read this morning,i just lovedddd the self realisation part and the way she is being chipkali to her chattan!!!


I only wish for something like this,which ik makers won't so yahi se khush hojati hu😩💖

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Shiva realising that pushing Raavi was wrong on her part and Raavi standing up for Shiva is so beautiful but I've a complaint next time you write something, tag me as well 🥺😛😛😂

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