Suggestions..needed

Hey guys so i am drafting a story in wattpad and i will post it here too. It is about how Aditya and another Man..connected to Rathore were actually responsible for Arvind's Death..like Aditya actually instigated the workers..so that he can get his big..story.. this way Aryan's revenge makes more sense..

Please suggest some ideas i can incorporate in this..and how should Imlie play a role in this?..

Hi. I read that story this morning on Wattpad. Loved the beginning. I was hoping in this story, Imlie and Aditya are not married in PD instead he brings her over or sponsors her education to assuage his guilty conscience. He off course starts to feel something for Imlie but she does not love him, she is sort of forced by his family to think about becoming his wife because all he has done for her but Aryan comes in to the picture during their so called engagement period and starts unravelling Aditya's past and frees Imlie from the fake relationship...

Please check the link..https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/159960294

i'll think over this... 😊

I thought about this... Going to pm u