Trifle…Tragic ..Trite…Trash

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Posted: 17 years ago
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This is not for any fans, this is not for the Creative minds…

It is just an account of a very invalid and arduous journey onboard a train….

It started as a small joy a Trifle like a truffle. The itenary included hot spots along the way but each jaunt was a beautiful in its own cheerful youthful gay way! At every stop new fellow travelers joined in and shared their stories over coffee and conversations and some compelling thoughts. It made the experience enriching and personal in so many ways… and so together we all laughed….and thought and talked….

Our journey took us to new places which for some of us was a walk down the memory lane and to some experiences which were never felt…but imagined …dream like….and so together we all dreamt….and thought and talked….

The train moved to hilly terrain and though the track went swirling whirling arnd the hills it was a still a beautiful sight to behold…it was green all around..fresh was the mountain air…it made us giddy, we progressed at a slow and painful pace and yet together we all slowed down….and thought and talked….

Tragedy befell as it usually does for no journey is without hurdles. The engine had some trouble or so we speculated…for suddenly it broke away from us…We all waited patiently for sth to lug us along…and so together we pulled each other thru the mundane and kept going…and thought and talked…..

We left the train and now were walking bare foot. Tired and TRITE was all we could feel ... the green hills were long gone lost in our memories yet again….

And yet together we kept walking ..still thinking and talking….

Some of us completely distraught with our own heavy baggages felt even more distraught with the way this journey was beginning to end…wondering how something trifle could end up so trashy…and how we all were are were are part of it…so much of our time ,emotions invested in those talks thoughts and feelings….yet they were real and yet the reality is we are were are walking thru TRASH...

Shameful,distateful,gutteral TRASH!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Shweta...you have completely and aptly put in words what we fellow voyagers have been feeling for some time now. Seeing the beginning of the ending of this journey is painful to us all. Not just because of the time & emotions we invested, but also because it gave us a hope that such journeys can be really beautiful, enriching and meaningful. To see that hope so brutally crushed pains us more doesn't it? To see something so fresh, youthful and cheerful being so wasted, and worse dragged into a cesspit is what is disgusting.

Let me congratulate you on the brilliant post here 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hemangi!

sighh...the heart of the beast who is mercilessly killing something once surreal and beautiful this in utterly disgusting manner....repulsive!
Edited by nottygarfield - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Shweta, the beast is not just one. They move in packs don't they? Only if we could catch the beast(s) and cage him/her/it/them!!!
Edited by hdalal - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Notty: I don't have a way with words...but aptly put...nauseating to see a tender love story turned into a ......
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Posted: 17 years ago
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A very good post, Shweta!! 👏

We left the train and now were walking bare foot. Tired and TRITE was all we could feel ... the green hills were long gone lost in our memories yet again….
And yet together we kept walking ..still thinking and talking….


Gosh, i'd never thought, even in my wildest dreams, that this show will ever become like this! Trash, is such an apt word!!
I mean, this is worst than a Kekta show! Atleast they make sense!!

loved the last line in that paragaraph.. "And yet together we kept walking ..still thinking and talking…"
very emotional!
Edited by ifrahnaqash - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Agree with Iffy, for most of us it has been an emotional journey, hence more the disappointment at the way things have turned out.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Ifrah!
exactly!what we made it out to be...what we thought it out to be...and look what it really is!

Shal...i got no way with words too!thats why this post is as plain and simple as TRASH can be!
Edited by nottygarfield - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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reserved 😊

Maleka/LoveAmmy
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Notty....poignant..post...the lost possibilities..what could have been..to what has it become...

....yet the reality is we were .....we are walking ,feeling and thinking thru TRASH... 👏 👏 👏

Our journey met with an unexpected accident in Patiala...since then ..we are on bare foot..some times walking thru it ..some times crawling thru it...still I wonder why this show affects me..still why...I have no answer...these days reflecting wether people arround me deserve a irritated..frustrated..and dejected me...because of a show...on which I have absolutely no control.
Thanks for this post anyway.
Edited by weltmeister - 17 years ago

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