Originally posted by: Eternized_Blues
OMG! it's finally here! I will be right back
I am back now! I do not know where to start Mush so I am going to pick randomly and go for it.
THE PANIC ATTACK
It reminded me if "Uski ek aah per meri jaan nikal jaati hai," It was so beautifully written Mush. She held onto him as if he was her only connection to the world. That barely held anger of him, when he is prioritizing her over everything, even him. His anger is minuscule compared to his love and concern for her. I know that he would also react the same way if she got a paper cut. (This BTW just gave me an idea). For Abhimanyu, Akshara's smallest pain would be higher than his biggest pain.
HE OWNS ME
I could imagine Akshara saying this. There is so much emotion pent up in that girl I feel one day it is going to burst out like lava from a volcano and destroy everyone in its path. She knows that she pushing the man whom she loves so much to a point that he is becoming unrecognizable. That is weighing on her too. Aarohi needs to be given a wake-up call and soon.
THE BATHROOM SCENE
Of course he is gonna check his vitals first, Jaan jo atki hai usme. The realization that it was Akshu who saved him was so beautifully written Mush I could see HC playing it out. I loved how he dared to talk to him looking into his eyes. His frustration, pain, and that barely held on anger. And when he pointed out that it was not love on Aarohi's part but lies and deception, he made her see error of her ways.
Now skipping to the good part: CONFESSION AND KISS
I don't know where to start with this one. I loved the shock and dumbfoundedness of his when he realized that she was in his room. Something he must have imagined so many times and he could not believe that it was finally happening. Kudos to you Dr. Abhimanyu Birla for maintaining your stand until she stopped beating around the bush and told you what you needed to hear.
I love how first he demanded the "I Love you: and then ended with a plea. What I really love about Abhimanyu's character is that he is such a man and yet so vulnerable in her hands. You captured him so well. That kiss was too hot to handle. Uff! She is emotionally dominant and he is physically dominant. Kya Jodi Hai.
You need to start writing this show. I would be a very happy viewer. This was fantastic Mush and as I writer I appreciate the pain you go through when you write. So 🤗🤗🤗for you.
I want the next one sooner!
Love Ya,
Blues
BLUES!!!!😲 Blu-- okay
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Only a writer (you) can understand the characters and the scenes and say something so beautiful. I'm in awe of your comment honestly.
@Red: Isn't that how he has always been? And isn't that why we have been falling head over heals in love with this man over and over again? 😳
@blue: oh you bet! Going by how protective and possessive he is regarding anything that he considers his, this side is bound to come out - regardless of whether their path is same or not. Soemtimes i feel like even if akshu lived in another part of the world and she faced the slightest of inconveniences, he would just fly out of nowhere, give her an earful for never taking care of herself, resolve the issue, destroy whoever caused the nuisance and then go back to his life again🤣
@green: Absolutely. more than she lets it out on her face. She is just good at handling it all emotionally compared to abhi which is why she doens't come off so intense and broken. Otherwise, she is suffering equally if not more. and yes, she does need that "trigger" to let it all out.
@purple: I'm SO glad you liked the washroom scene. Took me quite sometime to brainstorm it and think about what the dialogues should be that doesn't come off too "needy" and cheesy on either of the individuals, yet is impactful.
@pink and yep, he definitely did. I feel like it wouldn't be enough if abhi just start feeling all the love and again goes into his "begging for her acceptance" mode the moment he learns about the truth. what akshara did is not acceptable whatsoever and something that can be equated to betrayal - which Abhimanyu felt in this OS. Anyone would tbh. hence, he asked those questions and left. It definitely didn't mean he doesn't mean love her anymore but he sure as hell felt the need to let go for once, and have akshu to earn it if and when she feels the need to, which she later on does😉.
OH my god your comment on the last scene made my mouth hurt from the wide grin that took probbaly a permanent place on face!! so many of you mentioned about how he didn't budge until she said 'i love you' and it makes me feel so happy and accomplished ugh!!
@brown: THIS!!!!!! couldn't have been said any better. I absolutely love these two lines blues. and this is precisely what it is between the two. thank you for putting the abhira into such simple yet powerful words.
@Dark mauve: It means a lot. It truly does. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment something so kind. Loved reading it.
if you were beside me, i would have done this:
Kyunki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi 2
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