AbhiRa OS: Second Chances - Page 4

OMG! it's finally here! I will be right back

I am back now! I do not know where to start Mush so I am going to pick randomly and go for it.

THE PANIC ATTACK

It reminded me if "Uski ek aah per meri jaan nikal jaati hai," It was so beautifully written Mush. She held onto him as if he was her only connection to the world. That barely held anger of him, when he is prioritizing her over everything, even him. His anger is minuscule compared to his love and concern for her. I know that he would also react the same way if she got a paper cut. (This BTW just gave me an idea). For Abhimanyu, Akshara's smallest pain would be higher than his biggest pain.

HE OWNS ME

I could imagine Akshara saying this. There is so much emotion pent up in that girl I feel one day it is going to burst out like lava from a volcano and destroy everyone in its path. She knows that she pushing the man whom she loves so much to a point that he is becoming unrecognizable. That is weighing on her too. Aarohi needs to be given a wake-up call and soon.

THE BATHROOM SCENE

Of course he is gonna check his vitals first, Jaan jo atki hai usme. The realization that it was Akshu who saved him was so beautifully written Mush I could see HC playing it out. I loved how he dared to talk to him looking into his eyes. His frustration, pain, and that barely held on anger. And when he pointed out that it was not love on Aarohi's part but lies and deception, he made her see error of her ways.

Now skipping to the good part: CONFESSION AND KISS

I don't know where to start with this one. I loved the shock and dumbfoundedness of his when he realized that she was in his room. Something he must have imagined so many times and he could not believe that it was finally happening. Kudos to you Dr. Abhimanyu Birla for maintaining your stand until she stopped beating around the bush and told you what you needed to hear.

I love how first he demanded the "I Love you: and then ended with a plea. What I really love about Abhimanyu's character is that he is such a man and yet so vulnerable in her hands. You captured him so well. That kiss was too hot to handle. Uff! She is emotionally dominant and he is physically dominant. Kya Jodi Hai.

You need to start writing this show. I would be a very happy viewer. This was fantastic Mush and as I writer I appreciate the pain you go through when you write. So 🤗🤗🤗for you.

I want the next one sooner!

Love Ya,

Blues

Mush mush!my jaan!! How the heck did I miss this one for 8 hours.❤️❤️ Oh my god!!! Can I just say, you are the best in writing this style of toe curling blush worthy abhira scenes! Saba, Utkarsh.. kisko chahiye!! Hamare pas Mush hai!🥳

That scene where Abhi plays it dumb and is still realizing her being in his room, that’s something I m guessing we would see playing out once they confess! No words to describe the story you have told! Too beautiful and I have run out of adjectives all of a sudden!
❤️

Big Big hugs to you for giving into our demands so quickly
https://tenor.com/view/abrazo-embrace-hug-cuddle-squeeze-gif-10910351

Ha.. ab mein kya karoon!🤔I finished reading it so soon and now I want more. I will politely stalk you with nice again 😈😈

Comment for part 2

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the mirror description of how the glass was perfectly intact and yet akshara saw broken pieces because her broken self was making it - what a scene man. what a SCENE!!! the guilty conscience, and the sense of loss she finally felt . it was like how we don't really feel the loss of something until and unless it's fully gone, akshara felt that today. you again proved how different it can be to say something and actually doing it!

the way arohi just barged in and started blasting at her syaing she is placed on a probation and kicked out of abhi's team HAHAHHAHA i couldn't stop laughing 🤣

but the bestestestestestest part mushfika was the flashback!!! Abhi there my god!!! what was he?! it was like he turned into a ruthless boss of the hospital and i couldn't help whistling when he said all that to arohi. and when arohi exposed herself on her own 🤣 trust me in this scene there were so many moments i was grinning like a mad woman and on the verge of dancing and whistling!! and the besttttttttttt dialogue by abhimanyu birla in the history was this:

“I have never despised a woman more in my life than i despise you at the moment. The fact that you can even think of your own sister as low as you do, makes me pity akshara that she got someone like YOU as her sister, who she can give everything up for. EVERYTHING! It’s my bad luck that I can't do anything to change it. But listen to me and listen to me good, if your filthy presence in the Goenka house makes any, and i mean, ANY inconvenience for MY akshu even for once, i swear on my last breath that i will ruin your whole life, your career included. I’m an extremely possessive man Dr. Arohi Goenka. And I absolutely loathe it when someone tries to mess up with something that’s mine. and You seem to have messed with probably the most significant part of my life, my akshu, and made it far too personal for me. It is your lucky day that I haven’t done something even remotely close to what I said I would if she faces any kind of hardship because of you, yet.”,

i think i have lost all my existence to this part mushfika! and especially the part where calls her "MY akshu" . man i seirously thought this was a sad os because of the way they part their way in part 1. never in my dreams could i imagine that you would show this side of abhimanyu!! I mean the way you kept the consistency in his character, how he is so passionate and has this much faith on akshara and no matter what happens to this broken relationship of theirs, is something that messed up my mind big time (in a good way ofc). where do i get a person like this in my life mushfika? please tell me i really need a guy like this who would love me to such extent☺️

andddd this man didn't even hesitate to threaten arohi for causing the slightest inconvinience for HIS akshu in the goenka mansion that's not even his 🤣 uff this is called swag and power that you , mushfika, very well know how to portray in your story!

and finally this dialogue:

“And one more thing, Dr. Arohi, I have accepted that my love will never be reciprocated by your sister, thanks to you, but that will never stop me from protecting her from this filthy world. She will always be my priority regardless of where life takes us”

the repsect i feel for this guy is on a different level. you have proved yet again how beautiful love can be.

and finally the sherni in akshara is seen. the transformation from being the tamed down girl who was giving up her love for that witch to becoming a woman of power, a ruthless one just like our abhi who said "I free myself from seeraat moms promise. i now will think about my happiness first" YOU GO GIRLLLLLLLLLLL THIS IS THE AKSHARA I GUESS WE ALL HAD BEEN DYING TO SEE!!!

arohi when she stops her and asks in fearful voice what she means about that she will think about her own happineess🤣🤣 now you will know what it's like to not have your sister have your back girllll!!!!

ok i think i have reached the limit to the length of my comment so the last and the best part will be on the next post. sorry for this.

Originally posted by: Ambajee

Mush mush!my jaan!! How the heck did I miss this one for 8 hours.❤️❤️ Oh my god!!! Can I just say, you are the best in writing this style of toe curling blush worthy abhira scenes! Saba, Utkarsh.. kisko chahiye!! Hamare pas Mush hai!🥳

That scene where Abhi plays it dumb and is still realizing her being in his room, that’s something I m guessing we would see playing out once they confess! No words to describe the story you have told! Too beautiful and I have run out of adjectives all of a sudden!
❤️

Big Big hugs to you for giving into our demands so quickly
https://tenor.com/view/abrazo-embrace-hug-cuddle-squeeze-gif-10910351

Ha.. ab mein kya karoon!🤔I finished reading it so soon and now I want more. I will politely stalk you with nice again 😈😈

Amby yaar mujhe tu sambhal le because i am unable to form any words still. I keep going back and fortth to read this os and reading the comments. You are right btw, utkarsh kisko chahiye. Why fear when mush is here🥳

@bold:🤣🤣🤣this is exactly why i stalk her thread and threaten her because iske os k bina mera sunday incomplete reh jata hai.

Oh and the gif lmfaoooooooooo🤣 too good

Originally posted by: 2TheMoonAndBack

Excuse me? Did you even see how besutiful your comment was? If you can write a simple comment in succh a poetic way and analyse the OS with such perfection, you have no right to doubt your writing whatsoever!! And i read your story ok i know how good you are so shut up

Aey... Aise speechless moments nhi dene hote hai mere ko... Bada aayi.. hatt.

Arreee ab main kya bolu... Aise bade bade lekhak ke saamne aisa feel karna aam baat hai... After all I am Mush pankhi ;)

Originally posted by: 2TheMoonAndBack

Ok noor this comment needs a seperate appreciation and i will do it after i come out of abhiras dreamland. Idk how mush will be feeling reading this comment and all the comments in this thread but i myself am feeling overwhelemed and so much joy seeing these words. Noor the way you just deacribed mush’s story woth your poetic style . I am not even joking i read it twice. Especially the part where you said i wonder how many times he questioned his love or feel like he forced the girl. I FELT that.

I agree with you yaar that thr abhi in mush’s story is just something else altogether. The angst, the security, the protecitiveness and the love and the passion she shows in abhis character is her os is what attracts me to her wroting all the more.

Noor im with you. Lets just secretly send her cv to RS. Our life would be made.

yaar... Tu ne mere ko aise speechless moment dene ka theka le rkha hai kya? Kisne supari di hai tere ko ? Itni baari chup nahi karana hota hai mere ko

I am seriously at loss of words... I never knew my simple comment could really made such a difference... Ab tu bol rhi hai toh lag raha hai... Haan kuch toh khaas hoga :D

When I read that and even when I saw that in episode, my heart goes out to Abhimanyu... And maybe that's why I am protective of him 🙂 nd I will never stop accepting it that I love Abhimanyu Birla for what he is..

I am with you in this sistaaaa.... Maine toh link bhi nikal li hai... Bas Mush Haan bol de.

Kya chal raha hai yaha? Just woke up

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Originally posted by: Mushfika_01

Kya chal raha hai yaha? Just woke up

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Aiye aiye barkhudaar! Isse apna hi thread samjhiye. Aur dekhiye kya bawal macha rakkha hai hum yaha😳

I have updated my reply like a good bacha. And again you are fabulous! Now this is going to be off IF until the episode shows up. I need to finish my TS today and post it before the episode.

Originally posted by: Eternized_Blues

I have updated my reply like a good bacha. And again you are fabulous! Now this is going to be off IF until the episode shows up. I need to finish my TS today and post it before the episode.

Cant wait for your story. Please finish up soon!!!