Gaura and shivi: Ts : broken hearts part 4 (completed) updated : pg 8 - Page 6

Originally posted by: Tanvi-Agrawal

Amazing!!! You have portrayed raavi's emotion her POV very nicely but I was hopping that shiva will give explaination regarding dishwasher's kiss what he wants to say regarding it. May be in next chapter you can add this

Actually i was writting about it bt then i thought his action to getting angerly itself justify that kiss ... Bcz he wanted to talk to ravi about them not about disha... If it didn't justify enough then tell me i will add that dialogues whicj i thought to write...

Originally posted by: Nicky-nish

"Dushmani nibhani hai magar pyar se"

"Mirchi khani hai magar aam k sath"

Loved this confession of Raavi.😍

Beautiful update ❤️

Thanks for the tag.

Thanks alot dear... 😇😇😇😇

Originally posted by: Radhi12

It was beautiful.

Thank you for the tag

Thanks alot dear 😇😇😇😇

Originally posted by: Khoobsurat123

Last dialogues of Raavi❤️❤️

Loved it beautiful🤗

Thank you so much dear 😇😇😇

ahaa👍😘👌 written well dear...........

Originally posted by: virangna2005

ahaa👍😘👌 written well dear...........

Thanks a lot dear😇😇😇

Thank you for tagging me! Just coming across this FF.. I'll read all the parts in one go and then comment 😆

This was really nice! Raavi’s concern for Shiva and the way she took care of him was beautiful❤️

Dhara pagal ho gayi 🤪

Shiva’s apology and Raavi’s reaction to it was lovely

I loved how Shiva made both Dhara and Raavi understand about the pain that he and Gautam faced, and the pain that men face in general👏

The ending and Raavi’s apology to Shiva was beautiful! ❤️