Gaura and shivi: Ts : broken hearts part 4 (completed) updated : pg 8 - Page 5

Originally posted by: maanmeet1

shiva and raavi just needs to talk and here u made dem.....this has a beautiful feeling....everything is sorted...

pain is not gender biased....

So true 👍🏼

Shiva once said 'rishta tutne ka dard sirf ladki ko hota hai ladke ko nhi' 😭😭😭

This line really hits hard....

Originally posted by: virangna2005

Ahaa❤️🤗😘lovely yaar written beautifully👍🏼👏

Thanks alot you like it ... 😍😍😍😇😇😇

Originally posted by: virangna2005

So true 👍🏼

Shiva once said 'rishta tutne ka dard sirf ladki ko hota hai ladke ko nhi' 😭😭😭

This line really hits hard....

Exactly if someone is undercover that doesn't mean they didn't suffer ..

Part 4 :

Khairiyat pucho, kabhi to kaifiyat pucho

Tumhare bin deewane ka kya haal hai

Dil mera dekho, na meri haisiyat pucho

Tere bin ek din jaise sau saal hai

Episode started with emotionally shiva coming back to his room bt before he reached the room entrance someone pulled him in room ... And its dark everywhere ..only he can spot ravi who just pulled him n closes the door behind him n face him...

Shiva : aye gadheri pagal jo gai hai...

Ravi : han ho gai hun to...

Shiva : andher kun khencha...

Ravi : meri marzi...

Shiva : kia teri marzi ... Aye teri koi marzi warzi nahi hai... Mn apni marzi s ander aya hun...

Ravi : tu abhi aya kahan tha ...mn n apni marzi s ander khencha tujhe...

Shiva self talk :

Yeh gadheri pagal ho gai hai... Lagta hai dhara bhabhi ka bhoot ab is mn ghus gaya hai... Haye baghwan meri raksha karna is chepkli s...

Ravi self talk :

Yeh bhootnath na aj kal zyada bhashan jhar raha hai ... Ab dekh tu kesay teri bolto bnd karti hn ... Bara aya emotional atiyachar karnay wala...

Shiva : dekh ravi tu na aram kar tujhe aram ki zarorat hai aj ghr mn buht drama ho gaya hai ab na mere mn himat nahi hai teri koi bhi bakwas sunay ki...

Anjaam hai tay mera

Hona tumhe hai mera

Jitni bhi hon dooriyan filhaal hain

Yeh dooriyaan filhaal hain

Ravi angerly holds his collar...

Ravi : yeh sahi hai tera ... Bivi kare to bakwas r wo churail disha karti to us ki awaz to madhur ki traha tere kano mn saz bajati na...

Shiva : yeh ab tere mere beech wo disha kahan s a gai... r wesay bhi tu to meri bachpan ki dushman hai na to us ka r tera koi mail nahi hai smjhi tu..

Khairiyat pucho, kabhi to kaifiyat pucho

Tumhare bin deewane ka kya haal hai

Ravi pulled him more closer their lips were inched away from touch... her eyes were red and swellen

Ravi : to tu bhi ek bat smjh le meri ... Mn teri bachapan ki dushman hn... Tu ek sorry s na hamre bachapan ki dushmani khatam nahi kar skta... Sahi keh raha hai tu ... Us churail r mera koi mail nahi hai ...

Dil mera dekho, na meri haisiyat pucho

Tere bin ek din jaise sau saal hai

Shiva ask softly ...

Shiva : tu chahti kia hai ravi ...?

Ravi : teri meri dushmani nibhana... chal a tujhe kuch dekhna hai mn n..

Tumhari tasveer ke sahaare mausam kayi guzaare

Mausami na samjho par ishq ko humaare

Nazron ke saamne main aata nahi tumhare

Magar rehte ho har pal manzar me tum humare

Ravi holds his hand and took him 2 steps forward..

Spot Light fall on a hanging photo of them from childhood when shiva through drink on her new dress..

Shiva confused...

Ravi : mera fav dress tha ... Suna tu n fav dress jo mausa paa laye thay mere liye ... Lakin tu ... Tu n sb kharab kar dia... Drink gira k us p... magar phir bhi sambhal k rakhai yeh tasveer mn n...

Shiva is about to talk

Ravi : khabardar jo is bar mu khola tu n... Chup chap jo bol rahi hn r dekha rahi hn sun ...

Then she took him 2 step in right direction

Again light falls on other photo of them...

Where shiva n ravi collide n fall with chillies..

Ravi : kia kaha tha dhara di s tu n hamre rishtay ki larai .... Hamre rishtay ki sachai yeh hai k tera r mera rishta mirchi s bhara hai ... Sirf r sirf mirchi s... magar phir bhi roz is tasveer ko dekhti the ...

Agar ishq se hai mila

Phir dard se kya gila

Iss dard mein zindagi khush'haal hai

Yeh dooriyaan filhaal hain

Then they move to next photo

Their marriage photo where shiva ties mangasutr arround her tiny neck...

Ravi : is k bad sb khatam... Sb khatam ho gaya shiva...

a stream on Tears travel through her eyes...

Ravi : tu n is shadi k liye han bol k sb khatam kar dia...

Shiva : mn ne... ?

Ravi : han tu n shiva... Sirf r sirf tu n... pata hai tujhe shadi k bad suhag ki saij sjti hai... Mere liye wo saij nahi maiyat ki arthi the.... bistar p phool nai... kantay thay... Jo mere shareer k ek ek hisay ko zakhmi kar rahe thay... hamara rishta .... Rishta nahi mere galay mn para phansi ka phanda tha ... Us rat tu n mere shareer ko bacha to lia lakin mn ek zinda lash ban gai the shiva... zinda lash bn gai the

O...

Khairiyat pucho kabhi to kaifiyat pucho

Tumhare bin deewane ka kya haal hai

Dil mera dekho, na meri haisiyat pucho

Tere bin ek din jaise sau saal hai

Shiva pulled ravi angerly and hold her from waist...

Shiva : Ravi tu yeh kehna chati hai k hamra rishta ek ghalti hai?

Ravi : ghalti hi to tha na shiva... nahi tha...

Ravi hopefully saw into his eyes this time ...

Shiva lossen his grip and ravi felt this he bow his head and ravi holds his collar

Ravi : meri traf dekh shiva ...

Shiva n ravi have a long eye contact...

Ravi : ghalti kia hai na... To ab nibhani bhi pare ge... Tu ase mu mor k nahi ja skta mujh s ... Suna tu n ... Tu n is bejan shareer mn roh phonki the apnay jhagron s or ab tu sorry bol k in sb p pani pheer raha hai... Tu n is mirchi bhare rishtay mn amm ki methas ghol li the ... R ab us mn disha nam ki karwahat khol k kehta hai sorry... kia lagta hai tujhe k mn sb bhool jaon ... Han ....

Ravi pushed him away hurtly ... And smiles with teary eyes...

Ravi : ja bhool gai shiva... bhool gai sb...

Shiva : ravi....

Ravi : abhi mere bat khatam nahi hui hai... Janta hai shiva jb mn n tujhe thapar mara na tu thapar tere mu p bara tha lakin mere dil p churi chali the... Thapar para tujhe lakin dard mujhe bho hua tha shiva

Ravi cups his face in her soft hand....

Ravi : tere pass bhag k ana chati the ... Kehna chati the i m sorry shiva...

Ravi moves closer to him n place a kiss on his cheek where she slap him

Ravi : Tere dard p dawa lagana chati the... r har bar us dawa k sath tujh s mafi mangana chati the... Smjhana chati the k shiva ghalti hm dono ki hai... Mujhe nahi pata tu ase kun react kar raha hai... Lakin jo bhi ho mn tere sath khari hn...

Lakin shiva hm n waqt gawa dia apna ...

Ravi holds her ears with puppy face...

Ravi : i m sorry shiva....

Shiva : to phir tujhe dushmani jo nibhani hai... Us ka kia...

Anjaam hai tay mera

Hona tumhe hai mera

Jitni bhi hon dooriyan filhaal hain

Yeh dooriyaan filhaal hain

Lights gets on this time and shiva surprised to see the room fully decorated...

Photos were hanged with golden n red balloons roof was full of them ... There room was scented with rose smell...

Petals were scattered all over their bed

Ravi : dushmani nibhani hai... Magar piyar s...

Mirchi khani hai magar amm k sath...

Shiva carries her in bridal style n they both wall toward new journey of ever after ..

Hope guys you like it plz do comments and tell me if anything is missing... R something u wanted which is not present ... I will try to justify ur demands in my next stories..

Tagging you guys

Originally posted by: aimmyangle

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"Dushmani nibhani hai magar pyar se"

"Mirchi khani hai magar aam k sath"

Loved this confession of Raavi.😍

Beautiful update ❤️

Thanks for the tag.

It was beautiful.

Thank you for the tag

Last dialogues of Raavi❤️❤️

Loved it beautiful🤗

Amazing!!! You have portrayed raavi's emotion her POV very nicely but I was hopping that shiva will give explaination regarding dishwasher's kiss what he wants to say regarding it. May be in next chapter you can add this