Shivi TS- trouble in paradise part 3 updated on pg 7( complete) - Page 5

Please 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 update the next part soon😭. Eagerly waiting for it.

Pixie.. 🤗 this is the third story of yours I'm reading in the past 2 days 😆

And this is the most difficult one yet! Shiva and Raavi are both right and wrong here.. Shiva hiding things though with good intentions is coming out wrong, and Raavi is mistrusting him and thinking he's cheating on her 😔

all they need is a good conversation in private.. hoping that comes soon and everything becomes alright! ❤️

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Part-3

Raavi entered into the hotel seeing the decorations with a cold look on her face.

Shiva turned around to see her and he was surprised.she is here already? He is not done yet.he panicked seeing the half done arrangements.no.this is not how it was supposed to be.it was meant to be perfect.she deserved nothing less than perfection. He looked at her.why is she not ready? She was wearing her regular yellow suit.Wasn't Rishita bhabi supposed to take care of this? He frowned.

" Tu...tu yahaan abhi? " He said

" Mujhe dekhkar to tujhe accha nahi laga hoga.kisi aur ka jo intezaar tha tujhe " she said with an unfathomable expression on her face.her voice was icy cold and shiva had never heard her like this.

" Wahh shiva.yeh decorations, yeh saari taiyariya.mujhe pata nahi tha ki tu itna filmy hai.aur yahaan mujhe iss baat par aitbaar tha ki mai tujhe bachpan se jaanti hu " she said her voice breaking towards the end

" Raavi...yeh sab Maine..." He said when she cut her off.

" Maanna padega disha ko.pehle tere kapde badalwa diye, phir tujhe hi puri tarah badal diya.kuch to baat hogi usmein.uske liye taaliya to banti hai. " she said clapping her hands.

Shiva was shocked.what the hell was she blabbering? From where did disha come now? Is she drunk or something?

" Yeh tu kya bakwaas kar rahi hai? Bhaang chadhake aayi hai kya? " He spoke holding her shoulders.

" Mai bakwaas kar rahi hu? Seriously shiva? Tu ab bhi yeh bolega? Itna bhi bhola mat ban.tujhe kya laga? Yeh to dobi hai. Isee kahaan kuch pata chalega? To mai iske naak ke neeche se affair karta hu " she said jerking his hands off angrily.

Shiva didn't believe her.here he is putting so much effort for her.he is madly in love with this girl and she is accusing him of something so cheap?

" Dekh raavi, ab tera zyada ho raha hai? " He said pointing a finger towards her.

" Kyu? Sachayi sunne ki himmat nahi hai tujhe? Are meri izzat nahi karta, hamari shaadi ki izzat nahi karta par dhara di aur suman kaki ki izzat to karta hai na.aisi neech harkat karne se pehle Kam se kam unke baare mai soch leta.unke parvarish par lanchan lagaya hai tune " she said poking her finger on his chest.

" Tu ek gira hua, neech

aur ghatiya insaan hai.maine hamesha socha ki tera dil saaf hai.bhale hi tu gussa karta hai,mujhse junglee bhalu ki tarah ladta hai par jaisa tu bahar hai waisa hi andar hai.kitni galat thi mai.ek taraf tu mujhe umeed de raha tha aur dusri taraf tu disha ke kareeb jaa raha tha.chiii shiva.ghin aa rahi hai mujhe Aisa sochte huye bhi." she said pushing him.she was angry and hurt.

Shiva stumbled back.he felt broken. Tears of rage and hurt filled his eyes.he thought that they have come a long way in these months.he had thought that she was also falling for him like he was.maybe she didn't love him like crazy, but still she did feel something for him.that she didn't view him as a junglee, gawar and jaahil anymore but as her partner whom she could respect, love and cherish.was he wrong?

" Sorry.tere iss romantic evening Mai bhang daalne ke liye.bahut gussa aa raha hoga na tujhe mujhpar.to gussa nikal.chup kyu khada hai? Ya sharam se ankhein nahi mila pa raha hai? Maasi sahi kehti thi. Aakhir tu hai to ek mard hi,hamare beech pati patni ka rishta nahi ban paaya to us disha ke saath..." Raavi said

" Bass raavi " shiva shouted showing his hand

Raavi flinced at his tone.

" Isse pehle ki mai kuch aisa bolu jo mujhe nahi bolna chahiye ya kuch galat kar baithu, chali Jaa yahaan se" he said dropping to the ground on his knees.

Raavi was confused. Why was he not fighting with her? Why was he not defending his actions? Or is there nothing to defend? She wanted him to hold her and tell her that this is all a lie.none of what she thinks is true.she still had a small hope in her heart which was getting crushed by his silence.

" Shiva..." She went forward only to be stopped by him again.

" Jaa yahaan se " he said in a serious tone.

She let out a small gasp and ran away from there.

Shiva sat on the ground and let out a huge shout.

" Kyu? Maine to Maan liya tha na ki mai us maamikibehenkibeti ke layak nahi hu.hamara koi Mel nahi hai. Phir kyu use mere itne paas laakar phir se dur kar rahe ho? " He said looking above.tears of anguish escaping his eyes.no.he looked around and threw the flowers, tables and chairs in anger.he stood up and held his head in his hands.no.he can't lose her now.he loves her like crazy.he was ready to let her go before but now he has fallen too deep to be able to come back.he needed her to breathe, to be sane.he will pull her to him and cage her within his arms forever if need arises.he will knock skme.sense into her matar jaisa dimaag.he has to calm himself first.he took a deep breath and turned around to talk to her.he ran towards the direction she had gone.he found her sitting on a bench in the park and crying holding her knees.there was noone there.

He came and lifted her up by her arms.

" Ho gaya tera.tera yeh hamesha ka hai na.bina kuch soche samjhe, bina kuch jaane mujhpar ilzaam laga dena " he said

" Bina kuch soche samjhe nahi bol rahi hu mai.apni ankhon se dekha hai Maine.usne tujhe call Kiya tha.aur tune call back bhi kiya tha " she said

" To isse kya saabit hota hai? Ki mera affair chal raha hai? Woh baar baar call kar rahi thi.maine use callback karke yeh bola ki woh mera intezaar na kare kyuki mai usse shaadi nahi kar sakta.ki mai tujhse..." He stopped and let her go.

" to yeh baat tune mujhe batayi kyu nahi? " She asked

" Kyuki mujhe zaroori nahi laga.aur iss baat ka bhi darr tha ki Teri ulti khopdi kuch galat na samajh baithe.bahut mushkil se sab kuch sahi ho raha tha hamare beech " he said

" Ulti khodi? Usne tujhe kiss kiya tha shiva.tune uske liye suit pehena.tu uske saath sagayi bhi karne jaa raha tha.to kya samjhu mai? " she said

" Usne achanak se saamne se kiss kar diya.kya karta mai? Isse pehle ki mai kuch react karta tune upar se paani phek diya.aur mai uske liye badla? Jo shiva itne saal dhara bhabi ke kehne par bhi apne kapde nahi badle, woh ek kal ki aayi huyi ladki ke liye badal jayega ? Thoda to apne dimaag ka istemaal kar" he said pointing to his head

" To tu .." she said

" Tere liye pehne the maine woh kapde.kyuki tujhe aise gentleman types suit buit pehene huye ladke pasand hai.tujhe sharam aati thi mujhe apne dosto se milwane mai.iss liye maine ..." He said with his voice choking.

" mai maa ki Kasam se bandha hua tha.aur kahi na kahi mai yeh bhi chahta tha ki tu sabke saamne mujhpar apna haq jataye.are nahi samajh aa raha tha kaise aage badhu, kya karu, kaise tujhse baat karu,kya baat karu " he said

" Us ladki ka mai pura naam tak nahi jaanta raavi.hui hai mujhse bahut galtiyan, maanta hu.apne gusse aur confusion mai bahut uljha di maine cheezo ko.par maine kabhi bhi tujhe dhoka nahi diya " he said pointing a finger towards her.

He changed his clothes for her? To do something special for her? She somehow knew it deep down but all these events had messed up with her mind.

" Tujhe pata hai raavi.tu hamesha se mujhe galat samajhti hai. Tu sawaal nahi karti, seedha Maan leti hai ki yeh jahil to galat hi hoga.tujhe andaaza hai ki kitni takleef hoti hai mujhe iss baat se? " He said pointing towards himself.for the first time he was showing his pain to someone.he has never opened up about his hurt to anyone ever in life.

" Tune maan liya ki mai tujhe kidnappers ke sath akela chodkar bhaag gaya. Sabke saamne mujhpar ilzaam lagaya.Are meri biwi hai tu.aur agar biwi nahi bhi hoti na, to bhi mai tujhe akele aise halaat mai chodkar nahi bhaagta " he said

" Maine Tere doston ko maara.ek baar bhi tune yeh nahi socha ki unhone kuch aisa kiya hoga ya kaha hoga jiski wajah se mere haath uth gaye.mere haath hamesha apno ki hifazat ke liye uthe hai raavi.kya itna bhi nahi jaan paayi tu mujhe bachpan se?tune maan liya ki galti iss junglee ki hogi.nahi? Har kadam par mujhe yeh ehsaas dilaya ki mai tere layak nahi hu. " He said

Raavi shuddered as she thought about her words.how she had called him a wild animal.how she had told him that he did not deserve to be loved by any girl.she had slapped him and regretted it, but it was her words that had hurt him much more than she thought.the words which she sometimes threw around casually and sometimes in anger.

" Aaj bhi tune kitni asaani si mujhe ek neech, ghatiya aur gira hua insaan keh diya.ek baar bhi yeh nahi socha ki inn mahino mai hamare beech kya badla hai? Tujhe baho mai liye bina mujhe neend nahi aati.teri baato ke bina mere din adhure hote hai.teri hasi nahi gunjti ghar mai to Ghar kaatne ko daudta hai. " he stopped to breathe.this was the most expressive that he had got with someone.

" Maine tujhe galat samjha to tune bhi to kabhi Mera haath pakad kar mujhe aram se sahi baat nahi samjhayi.hamesha mujhse door bhaagta tha.mujhpar gussa karta tha.kaise samajhti mai ?ek din achanak tu badal gaya, woh bhi kisi aur ladki ke aane ke baad.tu meri jagah hota to kya sochta? Mai koi antaryami hu?agar itni samajhdaar hoti na to aise halaat hi nahi bante ki hamari shaadi hoti " she complained to him.

" To tu Maan rahi hai ki tu gadhedi hai? " Shiva said glaring at her.

" Hann.hu mai gadhedi, par tu bhi koi kam gadheda nahi hai.mujhe jis baat se takleef hoti thi mai dus baar tujhe woh jatati thi.par tu shiva? Ek baar bhi kuch nahi bola. Kyu? " She asked

"Mujhe tere kapdo se takleef thi, tere rehen sehen se, tere tel masalo ki badboo se.par dheere dheere woh badboo mere liye mehek ban gayi.adaat ho gayi mujhe.phir kab adat se zaroorat ban gayi, pata hi nahi chala.mujhe tere kapdo se fark padta band ho gaya.par isse pehle ki mai tujhe yeh sab bata saku, tu bahut door jaa chuka tha " she said

" Mujhe nahi pata tha ki mere junglee, jaahil aur gawar bolne se tujhe itni takleef hoti Hogi.kabhi bachpane mai aakar to kabhi gusse mai aakar maine tujhe bahut hurt kiya hai shiva.i am sorry.please mujhe maaf karde. " She said folding her hands

Shiva held her hands and took a deep breath.

" Teri galti nahi thi raavi.maine tujhse kuch bahut zyada ki umeed kar li, woh bhi bahut jaldi.tu to mujhe bachpan se aise naamo se bulati thi.par jab tere dosto ne aaina dikhaya tab mujhe ehsaas hua ki kitna galat kar raha hu mai tere saath.maine kabhi tere character par shak nahi kiya, kabhi tere baare mai kuch galat nahi socha.woh sab Maine gusse mai bol diya.mujhe iss baat ka ehsaas bhi hua par agar mai tujhse tab maafi maang leta to tu mujhe maaf kar deti aur phirse iss shaadi mai compromise karne lagti.tera dil bahut saaf hai.mai chahta tha ki tu iss zabardasti ke rishte se azaad ho aur apne layak kisi ladke ke saath aage badhe.isliye.."

" Tune mujhe talaak ke papers bheje? " Raavi asked in disbelief.

Here she thought that he hated her then.that he wanted to get rid of her as soon as possible.but he did all this for her?

He nodded his head looking down.

Raavi cupped his face and made him look at her.

" Itna bada faisla tune akele le liya? Ek baar bhi mujhse nahi pucha ki mai kya chahti hu? Mujhe maut ki andhere se nikal kar mera haath thama tha tune.mujhpar ek kharoch na aaye isliye khudpar pura chhat ka wazan le liya.nafrat mai bhi apni har zimmedari nibhayi tune.tu mere layak nahi hai to kaun hai shiva?nahi chahiye koi suit buit pehne wala gentleman ho andar se khokla ho.waada kiya tha ki mujhe kabhi chodkar nahi jayega.phir kaise beech raaste chodne ka soch liya tune? " She said

Shiva hugged her tightly.

" Sorry.nahi chodkar jaunga.kabhi nahi chodkar jaunga.aur tu jaana bhi chahe na tab bhi mai jaane nahi dunga " he promised

Raavi felt peace after so many days.she felt at home.

" Tujhe pata hai mai kitna darr gayi thi shiva? Tujhe khone ka mai soch bhi nahi sakti.agar mera khayal soch hota na to mai marr..." Raavi was stopped by shiva who glared at her.

" yeh kya baat baat pe marne ki baat kar rahi hai? Ek baat kaan kholkar sunle.meri zindagi mai tere alawa koi ladki nahi hai.na koi tha, aur na hi koi ho sakta hai.meri ek lauti chudail hai tu. Samjhi?" He said while wiping her tears gently.

Raavi nodded smiling.

" Meri galti hai raavi.maine hamare beech itne faasle hone diye ki koi teesre ki aane ki jagah ban gayi.agar maine us waqt sab clear kar liya hota to aaj tere Mann Mai yeh sawaal nahi uthte.i am Sorry" he said feeling guilty

" Meri galti hai shiva.maine kabhi tujhe samajhne ki kosish hi nahi ki.i am sorry" she said

" Nahi raavi.meri galti hai.maine tujhe waqt hi nahi diya.jin halaat mai hamari shaadi huyi thi mujhe samajhna chahiye tha ki tujhe waqt lagega.i am sorry" he said

" Accha.ab yeh sorry sorry game nahi khelte.dono ki galti.dono ki galti.dono ka sorry cancel " she pouted cutely

Shiva smiled and pulled her closer holding her by the waist.

" To tujhe kya khelna hai? " He whispered huskily in her ear brushing his lips over it.

" Shiva...kya kar raha. Koi aa jayega.chod mujhe " she said.his voice and proximity was sending shivers down her body.he shook his head.

" Pehle jawaab de " he said maintaining the proximity.

" Biwi biwi khelna hai mujhe " she said looking boldly at his eyes.

Shiva was taken aback by the boldness of his shechu wife.

She tip toed and kissed him on his forehead.she kissed him on both his cheeks one by one.shivas grip tightened around her waist.

" Raavi " he moaned

Her name from his lips always felt special.he rarely called her raavi, but everytime he did she melted into a puddle.

" Yeh sab tune mere liye kiya? Yeh decorations, yeh phool.isliye mujhse bhaag Raha tha taaki surprise kharab na ho jaye " she asked

" Bahut jaldi teri tubelight jal gayi gadhedi " he said joining his forehead with hers.

Raavi smacked his arms.

" Pata hai.kitni practice ki maine.ki tujhe kya bolu? Kaise bolu ki tu mere liye kya hai? Par har baar Mai lafz dhundne mai nakaam raha " he said holding enterwining his fingers with hers.

" Mai..mai tujhse..matlab shayad hamesha se.mujhe pata hi nahi chala ki kab ladte ladte tu mere dil mai ghuskar naachne lagi" he said

Raavi chuckled.only her bhootnath can confess like this.he is enjoying his nervousness never the less.she decided to tease him.

" Dil mai ghuskar naachne lagi? Matlab? " She said widening her innocent doe like eyes.

" Matlab..matlab tujhse ladne ka Mann nahi karta tha " he said

" Kya? Tu mujhse ladna nahi chahta tha.phir? Kya chahta tha? " She said feigning innocence

" Are chipkali.bolne to de.time lagta hai na " he said irritated at her questions.

"To bol.aaj to na rishita bulayegi beech mai se, na hi kitchen Mai parivaar ka koi sadasya aa jayega.aaj to tere paas waqt hi waqt hai.mai sun Rahi hu " she said folding her arms and flashing a smile

How shiva wished someone called him away now.he rubbed his jaws like he did when he was nervous.raavi wanted to pull his cheek.he looked so adorable.but she resisted.

Shiva took a deep breath.

" Dekh.ghuma firakar baat karne ki adat nahi hai mujhe.seedhe seedhe bata raha hu.nahi chod sakta mai tujhe, tu chahiye mujhe.hamesha ke liye.mere paas.mera gussa, meri ladayi, meri shikayatein aur mera " he paused to look at her.

" Aur mera pyaar.sab tujhse.meri duniyaa tere ird gird ghumti hai raavi.hamesha se.kya tu apni duniya ka ek chota sa hissa banayegi mujhe? Kya iss Bandar ko thodi jagah degi apne dil mai? " he said

Raavi jumped into his arms tightening her grip.shiva stumbled back a few steps with the force but stabilised her by holding her waist.

" I love you shiva. I love you. Thodi jagah? Mere pure dil aur dimaag mai tere khayalo aur ahaat ke alawa aur kuch hai hi nahi.tu hai to sab kuch hai, tu nahi to kuch nahi " she said

They both stayed in that hug for a while before raavi separated and looked at him.

Shiva brought her closer to him holding her face and gave a kiss on her forehead.it was a soft lingering kiss.he kissed her nose next. He came closer to her lips and looked at her eyes for permission.

She smiled and crashed her lips on his. He gradually deepened the kiss pulling her closer by the waist if that was even possible.they parted gasping for breath.

" I love you chipkali " he whispered

Their world was complete.

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

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Updated part 3 ritu🤗

Padhke bata kaisa hai

Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

Pixie.. 🤗 this is the third story of yours I'm reading in the past 2 days 😆

And this is the most difficult one yet! Shiva and Raavi are both right and wrong here.. Shiva hiding things though with good intentions is coming out wrong, and Raavi is mistrusting him and thinking he's cheating on her 😔

all they need is a good conversation in private.. hoping that comes soon and everything becomes alright! ❤️

Aloo 🤗

This story was difficult for me to write too.i tried to see both their perspective and hot this down.i have updated the last part and I am skeptical about it.do give it a read and tell me how you feel about it ❣️

Originally posted by: sandrasheron

Please 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 update the next part soon😭. Eagerly waiting for it.

Updated dear ❣️

Originally posted by: blissfulcanyon

Pixieeee, more MU's 😭

But I could actually see this happening in the show (ofc not in this way because chaubeys aren't that smart and they would just introduce more of Raavi's friends 😛)

But this shows how miscommunication can lead to extremes 😕

I hope next update mein sab theek ho!

Give me khushiyaaaan 🤗

Main intezaar karungi ❤️

Thank you blissy ❤️

Miscommunication can lead to extremes even if the people involved are good at heart like our shivi ❣️

I have updated the last part. Read it and tell me if I could give you khusiyan 😉

Originally posted by: Lydiam

I'm scared.😕

Dont be ❣️

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Originally posted by: loveableangel

Love it! Please update.

Thank you ❤️

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