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Posted: 3 years ago
#21

It’s awesome 🤩


Malharji got confused..

Kalyani madam ko ACP pasand nahi hai..


Unki nok-jhonk 😆


Sampada Malharji ki friend….

I found it interesting

Let’s see what happens next..

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Posted: 3 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: Priyapriyu

It’s awesome 🤩


Malharji got confused..

Kalyani madam ko ACP pasand nahi hai..


Unki nok-jhonk 😆


Sampada Malharji ki friend….

I found it interesting

Let’s see what happens next..


Thanks Priyu 💖💖💕

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Posted: 3 years ago
#23

It was awesome Pragya.

First meeting of Kalyani and Malhar was 👌👌👌👌


Sampu sweet hai... 🤣 it was funny to think of Sampu as sweet and innocent..

But I like the different take.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: rekha_crm

It was awesome Pragya.

First meeting of Kalyani and Malhar was 👌👌👌👌


Sampu sweet hai... 🤣 it was funny to think of Sampu as sweet and innocent..

But I like the different take.


Thanks a lot Rekha 💖💖💖💖

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Posted: 3 years ago
#25

Loved it itne dinon Baad Kisi nay Kuch likha woh bhi itna zabardast 💗💗

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Posted: 3 years ago
#26

Hi Pragya...

Ise continue karo please.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: rekha_crm

Hi Pragya...

Ise continue karo please.


Sure Rekha. Today I'll give an update.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#28

Chapter 2


"Aur pata hai, kitna ghamand tha us akdoo ko apni position par? DM hai to kya hua, main bhi ACP hoon Aurangabad ka!" Malhar ka gussa tha ki shaant hone ka naam nahi le raha tha. Vo aur Sampada chai ki tapri par chai pee rahe the.

"Bas...bas...Malhar," Sampada ne Malhar ke muh me ek Vada daalkar kaha, "Ab tum itne humble aur simple ho, lekin saari duniya to tumhare jaisi nahi hai na Malhar. Tumhare jaisa koi aur nahi h is poori duniya me. Isliye to main tumse pyaar karti hoon..." Jab Sampada ko ehsaas hua ki uske muh se galti se kya nikal gaya hai, to sharm ke maare uske gaal laal ho gaye.

"Matlab tum bhi mujhse???" Malhar ne bholepan se kaha, "Aur mujhe aaj tak yahi lagta tha ki main hi tumse pyaar karta hoon."

"To ab???" Sampada ki nazrein jhukaate hue kahaa.

"Agar main Pallavi Bhabhi ko Aparna Kaki ke paas rishte ke liye bhejoon to chalega?" Malhar ne kahaa.

"Malhar, I love you. You're the best," kehkar Sampada Malhar ke gale lag gayi.


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"Kalyani kaisa Gaya Tera din aaj?" Anupriya ne Kalyani se phone par poocha.

"Kalyani??? Kahaan kho gayi? Office me kucch hua kya? Kahin Atharv..." Anupriya ne ghabrakar poocha.

"Nahi Aai. Office me koi problem nahi thi. Ek behad badtameez ACP apni had bhool gaya tha, par tu chinta mat kar, aise mardon ko kaise theek karna hai ye teri Kalyani ab acchi tarah seekh gayi h."

"Badtameez ACP? ACP Malhar Rane ka transfer ho gaya kya?"

"Ek minute Aai...Tu kaise jaanti hai Officer Rane ko?"

"Tu bhi na Kalyani? Civil Services exam krack karne ki dhun me tu to TV dekhti nahi thi magar do saal pehle poore Maharashtra me sirf ACP Rane ka naam hi chhaya hua tha. Aurangabad ka Singham kehte hain use. Videsh se chal rahe human trafficking gang se us officer ne undercover rehkar 600 bacchiyon ko bachaya tha usne. Jab se uski posting vahaan huyi hai, ladkiyaan bina kisi dar ke rehti hain Aurangabad me."

"Bas kar Aai...Jo aadmi DM ki respect nahi kar sakta sirf isliye ki vo ek female hai, vo baaki ladkiyon ki kya ijjat karta hoga?"

"Pakka tu ACP Rane ki hi baat kar rahi h na? ACP Rane to kabhi koi badtameezi kar hi nahi sakte."

"Accha accha theek hai Aai."


Thodi der baad Kalyani sochti hai, "Kahin sach me to maine ACP Rane ko galat nahi samajh liya? Aai ki intuition kabhi galat nahi hoti. Atharv ke time bhi to Aai ko kucch galat lag raha tha...ho sakta hai ACP Rane ko sachme bouquet ko lekar dhokha hua ho...bas kar Kalyani. Bhool mat tu Aurangabad sirf apne bete ko dhoondhne aai hai. Ye IAS ki post tujhe isliye hi to chahiye thi ki jisse tu apne bete ke nazdeek pahunch sake."


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Malhar dinner kar raha hota hai tabhi uska phone bajta hai.


"Haan bolo Pawar."

"Sir jaldi Highway 96 par pahunchiye. Ek bus khaai me gir gayi hai."

"Kya? Ruko main abhi aata hoon..."


Bus aundhe muh pari Hui thi, aur abhi bhi aag bujhi nahi thi.


"Acche se check Karo kisi ki saansein chal rahi hain kya?"


Pawar paseena ponchhte huye bola, "Koi nahi bacha Sir. Sab ke shareer thande par chuke hain."


Tabhi ek bacche ke rone ki aawaz aati hai.


Malhar bas ke andar ghutnon ke bal jaata hai.


"Sir rukiye. Aag abhi poori tarah bujhi nahi h. Aag shaant hone dijiye fir andar jaiyega."


"Bus ke andar baccha h Pawar. Tum doctors ko yahaan aane ko bolo."


15 minute baad Malhar god me ek 1 saal ke bacche ko laata h.


"Ye zinda hai? Kaise?" Pawar bola.


"Pata nahi...pata karo iske maa baap bhi kya is haadse me? Lekin pata karenge bhi kaise hum? Ye bol to sakta nahi h? Aisa karte hain ham apne Facebook page par iski photo daal sakte hain. Bacche ke maa baap agar is haadse me nahi Bach paaye ho to koi rishtedaar to honge hi na. Tab tak main ise apne ghar le jaata hoon."

"Sir aap? Ham orphanage me bhi to?" Pawar said.

"Nahi Pawar," Malhar said, "Orphanage me ek single bacche par focus nahi kar sakte, aur is vaqt ise dekhbhaal ki zaroorat h."

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Posted: 3 years ago
#29

Awesome Pragya.. I loved it.

Maaf karna der laga di padne me.

Thank you so much for updating at my request. ❤️❤️❤️

Sampu aur Malhar ko pyaar ho gaya.... Lovey dovey confession..at chai ki tapri 😆rishta bhi bhejne wala hai.. fast hai ACP saab..

Aur yahan Kallu gets to know more about Mallu from her mom.. She is having second thoughts on her opinion about him.. 😊

But her focus is her child..

Kahin bus me mila bacha Kallu ka toh nahi..? 🤔🤔

Malhar is taking the baby home.. Aww..


Aage kya hoga...?

Edited by rekha_crm - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: rekha_crm

Awesome Pragya.. I loved it.

Maaf karna der laga di padne me.

Thank you so much for updating at my request. ❤️❤️❤️

Sampu aur Malhar ko pyaar ho gaya.... Lovey dovey confession..at chai ki tapri 😆rishta bhi bhejne wala hai.. fast hai ACP saab..

Aur yahan Kallu gets to know more about Mallu from her mom.. She is having second thoughts on her opinion about him.. 😊

But her focus is her child..

Kahin bus me mila bacha Kallu ka toh nahi..? 🤔🤔

Malhar is taking the baby home.. Aww..


Aage kya hoga...?


Thanks a lot Rekha 💖💖💖 Baccha Kallu ka hi hai. Malharji ke jeevan me dukh aane waala hai thanks to Pallavi bhabhi and Sampu is the one who'll be wronged in this FF. Hamesha I felt ki hero ki ex ko negative, selfish, greedy hi dikhate hain to is time I thought kucch different likhoon. Fir nafrat se pyaar Tak ka raasta though is baar Malharji ki nafrat justified hogi.

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