Gaura and shivi: Ts : broken hearts part 4 (completed) updated : pg 8 - Page 2

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This was so beautiful! Kaash show main yahi mil jaaye!

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Originally posted by: Pottermeow

This was so beautiful! Kaash show main yahi mil jaaye!

Thanks alot dear ... Lets see how makere execute the scenes ...

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Part 2

Next morning :

Shivi comes back to hospital ...

Shiva : Gombie... Bhabhi kesi hain.. kal ki raat theek s kat gai na...

Gombie : hmmm

Krish : Gombie kia batain gaye tujhe... In ki halat nahi bata rahi k kal raat ...

Shiva : kal raat kia ? Bol na

Krish : wo actually kal raat....

Shiva : aye krish mera ka dimagh wesay satak gaya hua hai... Tu na zyada 3 5 mat kar r saaf saaf bata kal rat ko kia hua tha...

Fb :

Dhara pushed gombie out from the room and first she scream in disbelief then start laughing like a mad...

Krish : kal raat dhara bh.. bhabhi... K.. ko... Ho... Hosh aya tha .. un... Unhn .. n gombie ko kamre s bahir bhej.. dia ... R zor zor s chilanay lage r hansnay lage..... To doc n ...

Shiva : doc n kia ?

Krish : doc n be.. behoshi ka injection de k... Un ko behosh kar dia hai...

Gombie cries and all 3 brother hugs him ...

Gombie : dhara sadmay mn hai... Mujhe smjh nahi a raha kesay use ise bahir laon kesay use smbhalon mn to lhud ko hi nahi sambhal pa raha... Kesay samna karin ga us ka...

Dev : gombie hm hn na ap k sath .. ap ki takat hm banain gaye bhabhi ko hm sb mil k smbhalain gaye .. hm hn na un k bachay...

Krish : han gombie hm hn na ..

N again everyone hugs including ravi n rishita ...

Next day dhara discharge from hospital ...

Shiva sitting on swing lost in thoughts ...

Shiva thought :

aj bhabhi anay wali hn pata nahi kia hoga ....

Suddenly heard voice of dhara who comes back to home... Everone gathered at door to welcome her... She just ignore everyone goes near suman took ashirwad and moves to her room ...

Shiva : gombie yeh bhabhi...

Gombie : jb s hosh aya hai ase baghair kuch kahe sunay ase bejan shareer ki traha bs chalaye ja rhai hai...

Ravi : gombie mujhe dar lag raha hai... Dhara di ko kahin...

Gombie : nahi nahi...

Suddenly they heard the voice of loud music comming from gaura's room ...

They all proceed there and everyone got shocked to see her dancing madly on wired songs...

Dev : gombie bhabhi yeh sb ...

Rishita : ab mujhe sach mn dar lag raha hai....

Gombie: t... Tum. Sb j... Jao.... Men dekhta hn ...

Everyone nodes n left ...

Gombie stops the music

Gombie : dhara t.. tu ... Tu yeh sb kia kar rahi hai..

Dhara goes toword sound system and again plays it...and start dancing ...

Gombie again stop it n tries to talk bt dhara didn't responce to him ...

Gombie thought :

Dhara kuch sunay smjhnay ki halat mn nahi hai abhi to mujhe ise sulanq hoga doc n kaha tha k agr dhara react na kare to use yeh injection dena hai so mujhe ise 2ahi dena hoga... Gombie silently prepare injection goes near dhara n inject it in her arm... And she doses off to unconciousness...

Its night:

Shivi room

Ravi was lost in thoughts shiva comes and sits besides her near the window...

Shiva : kia soch rahi hai ravi ..

Ravi : yahi soch rahi hn k dhara di ko kitna gehra sadma laga hai... Gombie ko un s maafi mangni chahiye...

Shiva : dekha ravi is bachay ko le k jo kuch bhi hua hai wo dono ka barabar ka dukh hai... Han gombie ko pahle s pata tha islye shayad wo is bat ko kahin na kahin hazaam kar gaye.. par is ka matlab ...

This time ravi stands from her place and talk with high tone ..

Ravi : matlab chahe kuch bhi ho shiva... Lakin dhara di ki yeh halat mujh s nahi dekhi ja rahi... Kitna intazar kia tha na unhn n r mila Kia unhn...

Shiva tries to handle her polity

Shiva : dekh ravi tu...

Ravi : Kitna sacrifices kiye unhn n sirf r sirf gombie k liye lakin gombie n kia kiya ... Un s bat chupai ... mafi mangnay s koi bara ya chota nahi ho jata... Lakin ghalti accpt kar lenay s shyad ek tootda hua rishta smbhal skta hai... R gombie r dhara di la rishta mn kabhi nahi tootnay doon ge...

Both eyes filled with tears

shiva felt the deepness of her pain...

He felt guilty ... Guilty for making her suffer... Guilty to question her character... Guilty to always pushed her away from him... how much he tourchered her before and after marrige... He did a lot of injustice to her but she always stand with him without hesitation even after divorce proceedings ... If a small word do some justice to her .... Then he will not hesitate to say this word this time...

Ravi : mn abhi gombie s kehti hn dhara di s mafi mang lain r sambhal lain apnay rishtay ko...

Ravi turn to leave

Shiva : s... So... Sorry...

Ravi : han gombie ko sorry bolna chahiye...

Shiva : Ravi mn tujhe sorry bol raha hun ..

Ravi shocked and turn in disbelief ... She was talking about gaura not them this time but shiva as always shocked her with his statement...

Shiva steadly walk toward her with teary eyes... folds his hand ...

Shiva : mn n tere sath buht ghalat kia raavi ... Bachpan s le k aj tk sirf tujhe takleef punhchai ... Kabhi tere bare mn nahi socha mn n ... Tujh p kia beeti ... Tujhe kesay lage ga tu kia sochti hai labhi nahi socha ... Bs jo mu mn aya hamesha bak dia... Apnay ghusay ka nishana hamesha tujhe banaya ... Is kabil to nahi hun k tujh s sirf ek maafi mang k apnay kiye ka prashchit kar skon lakin ho skay to mujhe maff kar dena ..

Ravi stand emotionless she doesn't know how to react .. her intention was not like that this time...

Shive left the room in hesitation and to give her time to realize how to react n what decision she want to take about them....

Ravi falls on ground ... first she broke down ... Then She felt happy...her teared filled eyes start smiling on his request ... Her tear of sorrow turn into tears of joy...

Their every moment from childhood till to date start playing infront of her eyes...

Then she gathered herself and runs toward him ... She searched him in endurance... Then in kichen then in every room but didn't find him ...

Then she goes upstairs and find him at terrace with his back toward her...


Itni mohabbat karo na

Main doob na jaun kahi

Vaapas kinare pe aana

Main bhool na jaun kahi


Shiva : a gai tu ..

Ravi didn't spoke a word ...

Shiva : janta tha nahi ho paye ga tujhe s ... Islye tu jo bhi faisla le ge hamre bare mn mujhe manzoor hai ...

Agr tu nahi kar pa rahi maaf to bhi theek hai ... Mn n kam hi ase kiye hn ....


Dekha jabse chehra tera

Main toh hafton se soya nahi

Bol do na zara

Dil mein jo hai chipa

Main kisi se kahunga nahi

Main kisi se kahunga nahi


Ravi smilingly start walking toward him... As she reached .. touches his shoulder ..

Shiva turns his face toward her


Mujhe neend aati nahi hai akele

Khwabon mein aaya karo

Nahi chal sakunga tumhare bina main

Mera tum sahaara bano


She holds his collar... and start pushes him

Ravi : kia smjhta hai tu khud ko han... jb jo marzi aye smjh lena ... R bolna mere dil ki bat smjh le tu n... Gadhera ... Sahi naam rakha hai mn n tera bhoothnath jb dekho bhooton ki traha mandra ta rehta hai kabi mere khawabon mn to kabhi meri zindgi mn ... Zindgi mn dranay k liye r khawabon mn ....


Ik tumhein chahne ke alaawa

Aur kuch humse hoga nahi

Bol do na zara

Dil mein jo hai chipa

Main kisi se kahunga nahi


Shiva holds her hands...

Shiva: khawabon mn kia...

Shiva asked with passionate eyes ...

Ravi : khawabon ko tornaya k liye...

And she start beeti g him .. burried her head in his chests and cries...

Ravi : i hate you ... O hate you bothnaath n hugs him....

Ok guys next part will be tomorrow... Actually it was my last part bt virangna have idea i will include it in next part so most probably next part will be last ..

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Posted: 3 years ago
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thanks for tagging me was a great part😘🥰😍
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Thanks alot 😇😇😇😇

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Originally posted by: Odette_delusion

thanks for tagging me was a great part😘🥰😍

Thanks alot... 😇😇😇

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Awwiieee😳

LOVED IT DEAR❤️

The way you write and portray the emotions are👍🏼

Waiting for the next part🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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well written dear👏smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32

waiting for next part.........do tag me when done just like today😅😅😅

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Nice Two shots😳

Loved the apology scene b/w Shiva and Raavi

Also the way Raavi console him🤗

Thanks for tagging

Edited by Khoobsurat123 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Amazing 🥰💕can’t

wait for your next update

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