Take my breath away: ShiVi FF - Page 84

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

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Also, likh diya update! Phew! 7500 words.

Abhi proof-read karke post maarti hoon! Dunno when though!

Min and Roops - dhokha hua mere saath! 😭

Areeeee proof read wead chhodo aise hi dedo...mujhe padhna hai..nahi tho mera pehla spot chala jayega 😭

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Areeeee proof read wead chhodo aise hi dedo...mujhe padhna hai..nahi tho mera pehla spot chala jayega 😭

Ok gimme a few mins! Getting it ready

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Ok gimme a few mins! Getting it ready

Update 10: Wrapped around your finger

Summary: Shiva is bemused, besotted and befuddled as Raavi ups her seduction game at Dev and Rishita's wedding!

Content warning: Mature 18+++++ content 😎. Please, please be warned! ☺️

Also, this is very probably the penultimate chapter!

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“What are you two doing here?” Mrs. Siganporia asked with genuine surprise.

I just have a few words to say after channelizing my inner Dev and going on and about it like 'MAINE KAHA THA WOHI HAIN!' I was confused between two things it could have been Mrs. S or it could have been a random Mohalle-Wali-Aunty. I was some how veryyyy sure it wasn't Dishu, contrary to what everyone else felt / dreaded. Anyway, this was SOOOOO unexpected and yes I'd like to say they successfully dodged a bullet. This could have gone downhill like a sandcastle in waves.

You mentioning Champak again and me laughing again over it for the 297346th time like >>>🤡

Umm okay not that its her business but why she so snarky to my Raavi Baby though? Do I need to punch her? Maybe not but meh-

Oh this one's outrageous. Truly outrageous. I don't think she knew anything, she was just being persistent but I like the fact that you've kept it sort of a mystery about whether she knew or not (or I might have read wrong because I was half asleep lol) Why did Shiva look shocked though when she explained what's wrong with Champak? Wasn't the surname he created enough for this creative improv vomit? Because what else should she have come up with that surname? 🤣

“So you had a narrow escape! I suppose this one performs adequately?”

How are we supposed to know if this one performs adequately or not? Hamara writer hamko action hi nahi deta hai, kaise pata chalega humko? Ladki hamari action maang rahi hai aur ladka pining kar raha hai. Nainsaafi Max Pro. 😭

Shiva needs to hear 'Senti ho main jaan gayi hun, action bhi dikhlao na. Zara Point pe aaao naa' from Raavi so bad, I couldn't stop myself. Sorryyy. 🤪

Oh PLS PLS PLS PLS PLS do it. Please push her in the dark corner against the wall and have your way, Imma ready to read that. [Just a clarification if I haven't already told you : 95% of the fandom fantasizes then with the wall its something we all have been manifesting unconsciously until people noticed and pointed it out. Me. I'm people.]

I knew there was a laughing fit upcoming, simply because I'd been having my own for the whole scene. Not kidding. The whole conversation gave me a throwback to the first chapter and the innuendos ka pitaara I haven't gotten over.

“It’s obvious you like each other. I don’t see the problem. What’s stopping you?” Dhara dee questioned.

Just a special appreciation for your Dhara here. This is what I expect and wanted from her in the show which we never got. Here she was sensible, with a wish to meddle but also know her positions and consider the boundaries created by Raavi. I loved it. Back in the day before we got the reunion Shivi were constantly looked over by Dhara and Raavi was being reprimanded after coming back to the same home where her husband hinted her being profane in a way. I was done with her. Dhara was ruined for me in the Shivi fiasco, with her constant questioning directed only towards Raavi. Some might disagree but its just what I felt.

Long story short I liked your version of Dhara. Bas yahi kehna chaah rhi hun main. 🤪

It was time for the performances to begin. She and the girls danced to Mere haathon mein nau nau chooriyan, then there were some other couple dances, then the guys danced to Desi girl. Then it was her and Shiva dancing to Goriya re mera dil churake le ja.

Don't mind but I kind of imagined my own set of songs. I literally can't help it. I'm incorrigible. Goriya re was the song of Juhi Chawala & Jackie Shroff right? Or am I misunderstanding it? Anyway...I played my own here. Actually PLAYED and paused and listened. Guess the song?

“Everything tastes better when you eat with your hands!”

YIKES! There you go my reaction. I knew it was gonna get hot. But holy lord did I blush bad. Had to keep both my palms on my cheeks to stop myself from yelling and making any sounds that could cause a ruckus at 2 am. This was HAAWWTTTT. Where's the fan when you need one? She really upped her game.

Shiva : 0 Raavi : 198383672

I can't- I mean- Whaaa-

Yeah we speechless. Where was this minx hiding all this while? Oh the contrasting personalities. Oh the sheer excitement. Now where'd she learn to do that? Imma curious okaaayyyy. Truly. ☺️

She did wreck him. Oh, poor boy. But-...Serves him right! I'm a little cruel that wayyy. 😈

We too Shiva. We too. We didn't expect her to go this far either. We feel you. But we happy about your plight. 🤪

The pallu was so diaphanous that it didn’t cover anything. Her sleeveless sequined corset blouse was clearly visible.

Okay I'm gonna pester you for this one. I simply am failing to put an imagination to this. Blank..I don't know whyyyy though. Its perfectly described and everything but I still am going to ask you to give me a link / picture / anything that gives me an idea exactly what she was wearing because I might have been so giddy after imagining him staring at her intensely that my brain went blank. LOL.

“What the devil are you wearing?” he murmured with a touch of irritation. “This saree should be illegal! Do you know how every hot-blooded male in this place was looking at you?”

HAYYYYEEE MERA JELLY AAG BOI SHIVA KA SLIGHT VERSION AAYO REEEEE

THIS. I so wanted this. Oh, how I loved this. The devil part? Made me JUMP. Think what you may I'm not exaggerating in any way whatsoever. This was terrific. The one dialogue made my heart jump. AM I stupid? I don't care though, I'm beyond reform. I believe in Jelly Shiva supremacy. All the way.

Yeah be helpless keep on watching while someone tries to sweep her off her feet. Huh, men.

The strap pulling was something I never expected it was a tantalizing surprise. I adored it. Sexy / Subtle / perfect. Just perfect.

She reduced him into a puddle. No shit. She ruled him. I did not think she'd not kiss him. I thought it would happen. Just as the kiss in the park her bucket list was the last thing in his mind, the game was the last thing on my mind while reading this. Trust me, I forgot all about the game the moment he said 'What the devil are you wearing?' I lost it.

Just do what you want man, complete your wishes. The floor. The wall. The wherever the heck you want.

Just give us some action. 🤡

I lost it when she kissed the earring. LOST IT. IT WAS SO SEXYYYY. Completely mad. Utter mad. But Oh the subtle stuff you've written.

“You two should seriously get a room!”

Same Krish. Same. Hum Bhi Kabse yahi intezaar kar rahe ki when will they get a room? Liz ko bolo pls koi. AB tho Krish is also hinting it. 🤪

#7. Engage in heavy-duty make-out sesh with dream man in a boat, or a plane, or a train. Hell, I don’t care where as long as it’s a moving object - even a horse will do. Or a bike.

Yuppitty-Hoppity-hoooo-Taran-Taran-Taraaa-Pumpaara!!! 🥳

Okay I remember being confused about how they'll get into this situation and how was this possible on a bike but HEEYYYHOO you made it so natural. Trust me, it didn't feel out of nowhere, which I thought could have been the case. So So So So lovely. Muuaawhhh. *Chef's Kiss*

I screamed when you stopped there. No shit. In frustration of course. I wanted to read it. In the flow. Bht hot hota...You end on cliffy. Imma sad. I NEED THE NEXT ONE. CHAHIYE MATLB CHAHIYE. And acha action filled wala update. Bht hogya with the teasing. Gimme action now. I can't wait.☺️☺️

PLS PLS PLS PLS PLS UPDATE SOONISH. ME DYING HERE.

PS : I don't know what 8th is or if it is from the list you sent me but if the one which involved water (Nymph) isn't there can I shamelessly request you to write an OS on it? Because YAASSS That would be a killer thing to read and the forum WILL go mad over it. Trust me!!

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

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Posted. I'll do my editing while you're reading it! 😎😆

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Posted. I'll do my editing while you're reading it! 😎😆

MAINE BOLA THA WOHI HAI...BOLA THA WOHI HAI....

MAINE KAHAAA THAAA....🥳😈😈😎

Bas aata is pr 10 min mein...just read who it was imma bask in triumph

Arre koi padh raha hai kya? 🤓🤔

I rushed up on this update for you, man! 😒

Originally posted by: evilxbalaa

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