Kisi aur din, kisi aur dhun (Drabble series) doubleupdate pg5 11/12 - Page 3

Originally posted by: lourel24

I liked the concept very much,one part when they were frenemy n other same scenario but equation has changed to better half,and the moment has turned cheesy ,romantic in this update.loved it.But at the next half when shiva was locked ,I had difficulty visualizing the scene.Whether ravi was locked too but in the other floor that's why she was saying krish to open the door but if yes how could she explain the chubbiness n expression of kids.kind of got confused there n still am.There hug previous one n latter one was so beautifully written.

Oh well, perhaps I should put it in order of time for you?

In the second part where they're better halves. The people in the house according to Raavi are herself, Krish, the two children (Gaura and Devshita's kids respectively). Shiva had visited for lunch, after which Krish locked him in Shivi's bedroom on the ground floor unknown to anyone else.

Raavi is with the kids in the upper floor at first and Krish keeps her away from her bedroom. So what you're supposed to be seeing in the actual scene is, Shiva locked in the room which you can't see, the kids and Krish in front of the door, and Raavi behind them.

I hope this cleared some of your confusion!

💕😍Such an adorable drabble, can’t wait for your next update 💕

Sathya, such a cute drabble! Just loved it!❤️

One quick question, are the baachas, one of GauRa’s and one of DevTa’s? 😆

Thanks for the tagging me 🤗

Originally posted by: mpks1

Sathya, such a cute drabble! Just loved it!❤️

One quick question, are the baachas, one of GauRa’s and one of DevTa’s? 😆

Thanks for the tagging me 🤗

Akka🤗!!! You're on my permanent tag list, you are... And yes, the children are Gaura's and Devta's. The names felt pretty obvious so I didn't bother to mention... 😆

Also, did you read the other drabble I put up today on my usual drabble thread? I have a feeling you'll love it for the angst it has. It's a much more serious version of the dhoom tana nana cliche sequence we were discussing on the EDT the other day...

Originally posted by: Luvs_SanIsh

💕😍Such an adorable drabble, can’t wait for your next update 💕

Awww, thank you love! But I'll be honest by letting you know that I have no idea when the next drabble will be up!

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Akka🤗!!! You're on my permanent tag list, you are... And yes, the children are Gaura's and Devta's. The names felt pretty obvious so I didn't bother to mention... 😆

Also, did you read the other drabble I put up today on my usual drabble thread? I have a feeling you'll love it for the angst it has. It's a much more serious version of the dhoom tana nana cliche sequence we were discussing on the EDT the other day...

Thanks for confirming the kids parentage😆

You wrote another drabble? I did not read it yet, let me do it now.

Ahhhhhhhhhhh soooooo cute

My poor heart, abhi abhi tumne toda aur usspar kya mast patti lagayi 😆

I love love love this so much!

My love for parallels, whether it's in the show or via FFs is on another level, so this was so wonderful to read ❤️

Now I'm just being greedy, but ye dil maange more 😛

waitttt...forgot to mention, woh dikshit name for the kid was genius 🤣🤣

Originally posted by: blissfulcanyon

Ahhhhhhhhhhh soooooo cute

My poor heart, abhi abhi tumne toda aur usspar kya mast patti lagayi 😆

I love love love this so much!

My love for parallels, whether it's in the show or via FFs is on another level, so this was so wonderful to read ❤️

Now I'm just being greedy, but ye dil maange more 😛

waitttt...forgot to mention, woh dikshit name for the kid was genius 🤣🤣

Shyna! Tu, tere bechari dil, aur uske do sau nakhre😆!!! But I love it all! I think we all have to admit that no matter what else the CVs have spoilt with Shivi for us, they do always give us amazing parallels and flashbacks.

And your dil can keep maanging more! I have 2 ideas for this series that I have to write down sometime, but I want to do it after I post a second part to one of my older OS' that I'm halfway done with now... ❤️

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Shyna! Tu, tere bechari dil, aur uske do sau nakhre😆!!! But I love it all! I think we all have to admit that no matter what else the CVs have spoilt with Shivi for us, they do always give us amazing parallels and flashbacks.

And your dil can keep maanging more! I have 2 ideas for this series that I have to write down sometime, but I want to do it after I post a second part to one of my older OS' that I'm halfway done with now... ❤️

Now I can't wait to read those I love it when my bechari dil gets what it wants 😆

ahh I lovedddd the introduction !

the drabble is like a warm blanket on a cold day ! its so nice do tag me from next time ! ty!🤗