Kisi aur din, kisi aur dhun (Drabble series) doubleupdate pg5 11/12 - Page 5

This was so beautiful!!!🔥❤

Both the drabbles and their connection to the serial were awesome❤❤

Loved it !!

Beautiful Parallels

The Name Calling was so powerful

What a beautiful scene... him realizing that he refused to give Raavi the entitled Power but could let others deny her that

Standing up for her❤️

Then the other one... taking steps towards her

Pregnant Raavi❤️

He wants to keep her close

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

RES

UNRES

This was so so so so beautiful ❤️

Shiva speaking up to Suman about her calling his wife Maarkundi Gai has my heart.

I also couldn't get over the start of the first one, different yet so so aptly written.

I wanted the second one to be a bit longer but the end?

Holy cow I didn't expect it.

The moment I began reading I thought its a flashback of her leaving or something but when I read she was going for her God-Bharai? MANNNN WE DED.

So cute. :)

Loved both the pieces 🤗

But but but... Ritu😒!!!! Come back alive! I have more stories coming your way😭! Eventually😆!!!

Glad you liked the first one! Initially I was going to wrote more drama and possessiveness into the before scene, but then I re watched and realised that it was a comparatively subtle scene... That's when this idea struck me, really. 😳

The second one? Glad you loved the surprise, wanted it to be one what with the trauma the Shivi MU has given us all.... 🤣

I LOVE your lambe lambe reviews so much you don't know how much!!!! 🤗🤗

Originally posted by: hapakalanoodles

UNRESS

AHHH THIS WAS SO CUTE JAANNN

MERA DIL GUDGUDI KAR RAHA HAI

WATCHING AND READING PARALLELS ARE ALWAYS A TREAT

AND IT COMING FROM YOU IS LIKE ICING TO THE CAKE ❤️❤️
LOVED ITTT

Taani🤗! I'm glad you love my writing so much!

Wait, doesn't gudgudi mean tickling? Or does it just mean joy in general? It's a genuine doubt, although I've been speaking hindi for years, it's not my native language...

Parallels are just the best though, aren't they? And it's such an ITV thing too... 😆

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Taani🤗! I'm glad you love my writing so much!

Wait, doesn't gudgudi mean tickling? Or does it just mean joy in general? It's a genuine doubt, although I've been speaking hindi for years, it's not my native language...

Parallels are just the best though, aren't they? And it's such an ITV thing too... 😆

😂😂gudgudi does mean tickling but your work gives me pure joy love ❤️

Originally posted by: Pixiepadhi

This was so beautiful Sathya ❤️

Parallels, layers and depth.the drabbles Had it all.

You have raised a very sensitive issue with your writing. If suman continues to call her DILs such names what will the kids of the family learn? Loved how shiva explained it to suman and she nodded ❤️

The second drabble was so wholesome. Shiva taking a step towards raavi and she comes running towards him and I loved the suspense bit😉

Pixie🤗!!! I'm glad you loved both drabbles...

Yes, it is a pretty sensitive issue, isn't it? My parents have told me stories of how they did let go of certain habits that they were pretty used to just because they were afraid me and my little brother learn them too...

He he he, super glad you liked the suspense! 😆

Originally posted by: hapakalanoodles

😂😂gudgudi does mean tickling but your work gives me pure joy love ❤️

Oooooooohh! Now I get it Taani Guru!!! 🤣

Originally posted by: IshqKaRang

These are so so good!! Why haven’t I read these before? My poor heart is now a puddle of mush. These two will be the death of me. Thank you so much for writing these beautiful heart touching pieces!

Please write more soon!

Neet🤗! You haven't read them before because I just wrote them Neet...😆 I'm so glad you love this series, and yes, I will be writing more❤️. I have so many drafts lying around I don't know what to do with myself now, but college is particularly busy and will only be getting even more busy with time... 😔

Originally posted by: mpks1

Sathya, thanks for tagging me and for the double treat❤️

First one - Description of their names😃. He is so proud of her and her achievements ❤️ and later how Shiva was assertive, told Suman to call her by name. Loved the parallel “ Raavi naam hai isska” Absolutely true that kids pick up on what the adults say and do. Tara and Dikshit seem to be cute munchkins❤️

Second one - Isn’t Raavi the best? You give her a sign that she is needed in someone’s life, she will never let them go for the rest of their lives. In some cases she even doesn’t need to be told that she is needed, she will be there for them, case in point, Dhara. Loved how he stopped her from leaving even if it’s for her godhbarai and child birth. As you said, there is no need for kaayde kanoon for them, have always broken the norm and time is no different. Shiva indeed took a step forward and look what he got in return, she is not going anywhere❤️

Keep writing when you can and you know how much I love your writing❤️

Akka🤗!!! I'm glad you loved both the drabbles!

The first one- I had to look through a sanskrit online dictionary to make sure if the connotations I wanted to use were accurate because I already knew the meanings to half their names😆. But I was so surprised when I found out the meaning to Shiva🤪! I'd figured for the longest time that it probably had a meaning similar to, or along the lines of Rudra (derived from Roudra, meaning anger)... It made so much sense then, you know?

He started working at the store, things flourished. It's just that he's not confident, and Raavi gives him that by believing in him so much!

The second one- True that, they've always broken norms, and this time wasn't any different either. And truly, sometimes I wonder if Dhara even deserves her, what with her seeming to have a selfish streak deep beneath the want to do the right thing. Or atleast that's what it feels like these days😔. I will wait for the day when he'll be the first to take a step towards her in their relationship though.... Something kamaal perhaps? 😳

I do have more drafts that I will be working on. I'm figuring I might disappear from the EDT and DT for a while if things get too busy, but still write. Because I don't spend too much time on actually watching the show anyways, and writing is a very sporadic, mood based thing for me. It depends on how well I manage the initial months of prep though.

Hopefully, I'll manage time well now, then won't have to disappear at all... 😳

Sathyaaa🤗

Both the drabbles were amazing

Loved the twist at the end👏

This smitten Shiva is my favourite and forward Raavi is just adorable😳

The article of urban asia about Alice has perfect reasons why we just love Raavi...and these drabbles just perfectly penned it down🥳

Just loved it dear☺️

Waiting for more👍🏼