SS: Bliss! (epilogue Page 9) - Page 6

Reading this was a blissful experience...

Amazing...

Beautifully written...

Thanks for tagging❤️

Awesome and unique since you made them talk throughout. That looked so enchanting and heartwarming. Waiting for more from you.

I am not very good with words . But I will try to pen what I thought about this beautiful piece.

Each and every sentence has been framed beautifully. I often enjoy a story especially one with sensual content when there are emotions written in it. This one absolutely is a perfect blend of emotions and sensuality. I could connect with both Sai and virat well and u have written them well in their character.

The point where Sai thinks whether she can face Virat after all this is something I loved. Yes the way Sairat has been a slow burn till now, Sai thinking that is natural. But though she is a bit shy, she's the one who calms down Virat and takes care of his apprehensions.

Virat is so in character here. To him before his pleasure comes protecting Sai first. And I loved the fact that u emphasized on contraception and what I loved more is Sai assuring him that she is on her safe period. I liked this part so much because though she is shy, she was bold enough to assert that she wants nothing between them this day.

It s a beautiful story and I will be bookmarking this to read whenever I feel the show is taking a bad turn. Thank u for creating such wonderful writing.

Woah!!!☺️☺️🙈🙈🙈

🔥🔥🔥🔥

You have penned down the emotions soo beautifully❤️

This is so beautiful ❤️

You beautifully pen down sai and virat feelings❤️

This is super hot 🔥🔥🔥🔥

Waiting for the next part!

Originally posted by: sadiltl

Shristhi I forgot to tag you sorry

m I blushing or should I hide myself somewhere.☺️

I am definitely blushing and the whole day I m going to imagine this damn hahahah🤣

Wow itne sare comments!!! Thanks everyone.

Writing comedy or a mature piece is very difficult. Both should not cross the line. Comedy will not evoke laughs if not written properly and mature will leave bad taste in the mouth if it touches vulgarity. Both genres words are important. In mature additionally describing the act is a tricky one. One can have exlplicit and still make it sensual like shipissailing does ( I like her Sai’s shower OS and massage one the best) . Or chose to describe the experience instead. I could not write in the first way so chose latter one. Also I wanted to write from Sai’s point of view mainly and so made it emotional because women tend to see this act emotionally whereas men are tied to the action.

the most difficult part is to imagine sai and virat here because the experience I described should be theirs based on where they are at their emotional level, age and vulnerabilities. Otherwise you don’t see sai and virat but some random characters.

coming to protection, obviously I don’t want sai to be pregnant. Because she has lots to achieve. Not that new moms can’t achieve anything but she can wait given her age. Also as a girl she Might want to have the first time unadulterated 😅so I debated about protection. Then I realized sai is a medical student so it will be good to write about safe period even though it is very rare to have your first time coincide with that date 🙈. Took creative liberties here. And first time experiencing the pleasure will be unbelievable so exaggerated it a bit here 😅. 90% times it will be opposite I heard 😣. Man’s experience will be always the same so didn’t focus there 😜

But I wanted virat to be sensitive to her will and pain. I want him to place sai before him always 🤗. It kind of brings love to the forefront when lust is still dominant.

Also I wanted to end with some progression in their relationship at the end because physical love does make the bond stronger. It provides security and safety net to return back to when one is lonely and lost! … Ofcourse all this is for normal couple with good marriages. Otherwise for me peace is always over love. 👍

I will try to write epilogue soon. Thanks again

Quoted you above so tagging you.

Originally posted by: sadiltl

I know you are pissed off with virat but if you feel like reading please do . Tagging you for your comments

Really nice one, yes this is very very important topic between both, I liked how you highlighted sai knowledgeable from movies and virat thinking of his age , that's so happens when both love eachother more than themselves, really nice