SS: Bliss! (epilogue Page 9) - Page 8

Oh my! This is SO beautiful.

You so beautifully articulated Sais insecurity in this that too, it was confessed after an act that shows both Sai and Virats desire and love for each other.

Its so true and so well articulated that for Sai loving Virat was easy but staying with him was difficult n being away may be easier. Staying with him when pp n his family have made her feel like a burden, like a 3rd person, a charity case has been very difficult. She has been humiliated, her aabaa/upbringing questioned numerous times. She's been taunted as jungli, as an orphan. So to be with him and prioritize him she often sacrifices her self respect n dignity. Yes she does it willingly because she see's Virats goodness, his care, his righteousness, because she feels gratitude and also because she had an undeniable unbreakable connection with him which she was too scared to acknowledge as love. So being with him , coming back to him is her choice- but does not mean it doesn't wound her self respect to do so. Yet she always chooses him. He often overlooked her yearning, her love. He saw her childishness but overlooked her maturity. He saw her stubbornness but didn't recognize that she has always come back to him n for him no matter how upset/angry/hurt.

Thank you so much for the dedication. Its so sweet of you♥️

After this amazing FF, you really HAVE to keep writing and giving us more!

Originally posted by: Saichintalli

Epilogue is very nice yaar, frankly speaking I am not so comfortable reading bold stories 😆 completely my problem, but the second part of the story is awesome, you used best lines and best way to put forward insecurities or mind set of both especially sai. One line that triggered to write this comment is " it's easy to go away from you but very difficult to stay with you" and lines that's fall in this meaning that loving virat is easy but accepting it is difficult, with these two lines you perfectly described sai mindset and all her struggle she faced all this one year, awesome , a big round of applause for that . 👏👏

We usually get think once in a while why sai is not understanding when virat is showering love when he is normal but these two lines describe her situation, she want to understand him but how can she when the person is continuously reminding her that virat is hers, one can easily say pakhi is saying that but virat is not, but how can sai believe when pakhi is openly confidently claiming her right. Too good yaar

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Oh is it! I was uncomfortable writing too till this one. But when you are invested in characters, things flow! I am an avid reader but never read any romantic novels expect for a few which I did not like. There used to be no emotional connect at all, whatever little I read. Then I saw read some indian classics. like Devdas, Parinita where there is no act but there is so much intimacy between the characters. Classic indian love stories has some magic in them and Titanic ofcourse is so emotional for me. Gathered some inspiration from there. thats all.

While writing this FF, i was thinking from Sai's PoV from the beginning... may be because of that it came out well in the epilogue. I always thought as a person wise Sai is beyond every one, even Virat or Kamal Joshi. She has so much to give, but not her self respect. So comprising on her self respect to be with his man, has to be understood by him clearly. He needs to learn to treasure her. I am sure he will get into being a typical husband after this...taking her for granted. But atleast for now, he has to know he should be careful :)

Thanks for reading and appreciating.

Neerja, Thanks yaar. Sai confiding her insecurities confidently to Virat just flowed and I remembered only you while writing. How you were asking me to bring this in my previous SS. May be Virat's recent dumbness pushed me too. :D

I wanted them to be playful in their togetherness which is USP of their bond. There is no age gap seen in their banter so why now? Also, I see them as equals always so Virat SHOULD know that she is equally mature or even more mature than him in keeping their marriage intact.

It is not about love always, people change with time, but the acceptance to that change is superior. And Sai's love has that. I am sure he would die from palpitations if he was in the same place as Sai. :P He might free her but could die from jealousy 🤣 no acceptance there.

Also i wanted to elaborate on object of desire part, because it was written purosefully with an ulterior motive. :P In the society mostly, people like BK think that women are objects of desires and they should please men! I hate that thought. Someone making you an object of desire is humiliating. It is beautiful only when the partners turn into one to please each other, either physically or emotionally. So when Virat realizes her love for him, he could not express his happiness or gratitude in any other way than pleasing her as a husband which only he could do. ☺️ So lot of imagination was involved in writing this so wanted to boast a little here 😃

Thanks for your kind words again.

It was really well written. You managed to convey so much despite not making the chapter too wordy. I often have the problem of writing so much that people get lost reading. But you have captured so much in such a succinct way. Not only did this part convey their playfulness, their desire but also delved into serious discussion n sharing of mutual perspectives.

I completely agree about the "object of desire". Lust/love, desire is two way. Its not only men who have these feelings are women are not there just to tittilate them. Women crave intimacy, sex as much as men and they also occasionally "objectify" men in a physical way just like men do. But often in indian tv/movies, the female pov is not there. Its changing these days but most of our media is dominated with women dressing up and doing things to please men and not the orher way around. I think its time that we challenge those norms. For example its not always a man that needs to "protect" and "provide for" a woman....a woman can do so too n it shouldn't be a big deal.

I am a 30+ hard core harry potter fan. I still re-read it. Nothing comes close to it. 👍🏼

It was so beautiful! The perfect blend of sensual and emotional that we need in an epilogue. Thank you so much for this wonderful writing❤️❤️

This is soo emotional and beautiful🥺🥺

Sai clearly spoke about her insecurities while understanding his fears❤️ I always wanted this to happen

That line 'loving you is easy but accepting it is difficult' defined Sai's emotion perfectly❤️

Sadhika, you are such an amazing writer

This is so emotional and heart touching ❤️

Wow that was indeed beautiful. The epilogue is the best. There is so much tenderness . The aftertalks are the most lovely part of lovemaking I have felt ( personal experience too). U have depicted the tenderness, mischief and desire here very aptly. The lust part is over and the desire is the predominant emotion here plus the cherishing. Bow they have reached a comfortable normal. I loved your usage of new normal. Your writing focuses on all aspects well .

Now to the next part , I loved how U portrayed that Sai had equally tried to love him and had to fight for him. That loving him was not easy part was brilliant. I hope the cvs see this os and incorporate these into the show . I love your perception of both Virat and Sai , how deeply you have thought out and put forth their perspectives. This is such a beautiful piece of writing.

Once more let me appreciate u for this Beautiful story because I know it's very very very difficult to write something that involves emotions and sensuality, without bordering on vulgarity and to make your readers enjoy each and every word and give them a pleasant feeling. To end it lemme say reading your story was an exhilarating experience.

Thanks for your detailed comments. Yeah it was difficult to make it likable to majority of people.