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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hey I forgot to tag you!

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Nice update 👍👍… thanks for the tag

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: sadiltl

Hey I forgot to tag you!


Wow loved the entire thing, right from buildup to the discussion in epilogue. It was written very well without even going into details, but still descriptive. You are so talented.

(one small bit where Sai says hope I can please him, instead I wish it could have been hope we can please each other or it will be a pleasure for both but its your story, so I understand smiley1)

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: ranijain


Wow loved the entire thing, right from buildup to the discussion in epilogue. It was written very well without even going into details, but still descriptive. You are so talented.

(one small bit where Sai says hope I can please him, instead I wish it could have been hope we can please each other or it will be a pleasure for both but its your story, so I understand smiley1)

thanks yaar 👍 for the appreciation


I wrote it that way because sai is young and most girls (that I know) worry like that. That too sai has this feeling that she is not mature enough yo please him. Nothing more there. Men are more confident than required 😜.
May be a future sai would think like you said ☺️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Thanks a lot for writing such a beautiful Epilogue. Their conversation is much needed and you did a great job. Hopefully we may get continuation in another OS. Looking forward to read more from you.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: ltelidevara

Thanks a lot for writing such a beautiful Epilogue. Their conversation is much needed and you did a great job. Hopefully we may get continuation in another OS. Looking forward to read more from you.


Thanks yaar, Sure whenever I get inspired, I will write. I enjoy it.

Edited by sadiltl - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Sensual and hot.....🔥🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵

More than action..... emotions and feelings make things more sensual and hot....

It is very beautiful..... can't tell in words... this is the first story I read on SaiRat which is very sensual in terms of emotions.....😍.. i got goosebumps and weird sensation in my stomach when I read this story...

The way you wrote.... how Sai slowly overcome her shyness and became bold and also Virat taking charge yet conscious to not hurt Sai... is superb and perfect..... Both SaiRat charectors are intact....

All the emotions are raw yet hot and sensual..... it was so romantic.... you are very good at it.. you should try writing more of such stuff....

I am back now and finally read your beautiful story... thanks for tagging me... please tag me whenever you update any story... I will read when I come back and comment....

Keep writing more....

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: ssoujanya

Sensual and hot.....🔥🔥🔥🥵🥵🥵

More than action..... emotions and feelings make things more sensual and hot....

It is very beautiful..... can't tell in words... this is the first story I read on SaiRat which is very sensual in terms of emotions.....😍.. i got goosebumps and weird sensation in my stomach when I read this story...

The way you wrote.... how Sai slowly overcome her shyness and became bold and also Virat taking charge yet conscious to not hurt Sai... is superb and perfect..... Both SaiRat charectors are intact....

All the emotions are raw yet hot and sensual..... it was so romantic.... you are very good at it.. you should try writing more of such stuff....

I am back now and finally read your beautiful story... thanks for tagging me... please tag me whenever you update any story... I will read when I come back and comment....

Keep writing more....


Wow thanks yaar for your kind comments. Sure will write when I get time. Holiday season started here in US so I got some extra time to write.

But cant promise these mature OSs because they take so much time and energy.


Will tag you whenever i write any.

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