SS: Bliss! (epilogue Page 9) - Page 4

Well done!! Super hot and real!!

Originally posted by: sadiltl

Thanks! Any elaborate comments?!

Maine toh bola speechless- but you want elaborate comments. Lol😂

Nahi but I genuinely loved it.

It came alive in front of my eyes. Its incredibly sweet that not only is Virat carried away by lust, love, desire but he cares about her consent, protection, comfort. And Sai's feelings were beautifully described. Her slight hesitation, shyness, but the reciprocated desire, love 😍😍😍 and that very real worry of a young woman about whether she can please him. About whether he also felt asgood as he made her feel- i hope that can get addressed in the conversation n snuggle time post the act

I'd also love it if you make a series of it ...and show the progress from this shy novices to 2 people who are completely in sync, confident, who have memorized each other physically as well. And I'd like to see Sai taking charge too. In our society, cinema, shows its always focused on man making the first move but a woman has desire too. A woman craves it too. I'd love to see a modern marriage where Sai can also make the first move on Virat n not be ashamed to do so.

This is 🥵🥵🔥🔥🥵🔥🥵🔥. I loved loved loved everything . Loved how you made Virat so conscious of Sai, her age and what she wants and Sai being bold enough to tell him he doesnt need a condom 🔥🔥. How Sai got worried if Virat was not liking what they were doing ☺️.

I have a request, since you bring up Sais thoughts on how she will face him from the next morning and how everything changed , can you write an OS for morning after 😛

You can assume she will be bold enough the next time 😉

yeah as you know I always see virat sensitive except when he goes out of control 😡

And no I don’t want him to proceed without sai fully into it!

and thanks for your comments. Really it took me a lot of effort to write it. Toughest till date. But once I got the comfort it was flowing.

Cannot promise a series but there is an epilogue.

This was beyond amazing. I loved how Virat was trying to control his desires but wa vulnerable at the same time and Sai was ♥️♥️♥️♥️🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥.

Can you write an os on the awkwardness part? The morning after this 😬😬😬😬😬.

Thanks girl! As I was telling neerja this has been very difficult to write. So thanks for the appreciation.

Yeah there will be an epilogue not sure about morning after. Because believe me they will be at it going forward . So it becomes repetitive just like their routine 😅

yeah would be definitely as casual as having food after certain point. 🤭. And boring at times too 😜. May be I should explore how their work will meddle with their intimacy 🙈

I know you are pissed off with virat but if you feel like reading please do . Tagging you for your comments

Originally posted by: sadiltl

Thanks girl! As I was telling neerja this has been very difficult to write. So thanks for the appreciation.

Yeah there will be an epilogue not sure about morning after. Because believe me they will be at it going forward . So it becomes repetitive just like their routine 😅

yeah would be definitely as casual as having food after certain point. 🤭. And boring at times too 😜. May be I should explore how their work will meddle with their intimacy 🙈

This is Sai and Virat so it will never be mundane I am sure😆. Knowing how Sai is she will keep Virat on his toes and wouldn't let him take it easy anytime soon ☺️.

Eagerly waiting for the epilogue , do try the morning after since it the 1st day

Please update next bit soon!

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