Ajeeb Dastaan Hai Yeh: A Pandya Family OS (Author’s Note Pg 3) - Page 3

Esha that was an amazing OS! I loved Rishita's role in this! 🤧 I wish one day they have a bond like that with her.

Babuji Dheere Chalna, Pyaar Mein Zaara Sambhalna. - I laughed so hard on this part! 🤣🤣🤣

Our ShiVi missing each other but not being able to say it 🥺🥺 so typical of them, but ofcourse we have our precious ShiVi shipper in Krish 😭. Always ready to help bring them together.

This was brilliant, enjoyed reading it ❤❤❤.

Originally posted by: SlytherInMe.

ahhhh this was so so beautifully written

this was amazing - and to see rishita make all these amends was truly beautiful

my favorite part was the bonding between rishita and shiva (something I really hope to see in the show some day)

the way she was giving him advice and teasing him, it was wonderful

this is what is called a feel good OS - and it really did feel good reading it uff

thank you so much for this 🤗

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also yay I was first 🥳

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Dev being scarred by babuji song 🤣 epic 🤣🤣

Aww thank you so so much!! 🤗 I’m so glad everyone enjoyed this piece! And your comment made me smile so much!!

I would love to see Rishita and Shiva bond and even join hands to play pranks!! They would make a wonderful duo!

And of course I had to include Babuji... btw Dev’s “issue” was inspired by your story 🤣 he spends so long on the throne cuz you have declared once and for all that he has constipation 🤣

Originally posted by: bhavna101

This was so cute!😆🤣

I had great fun reading this one! ShiVi and even GauRa were my fav here!😆

So cute, and adorable!

I enjoyed reading this OS, maybe continue writing this one.

A sequel? About ShiVi talking to each other and discussing the story behind each item in the box of gifts that he's saved. And maybe Raavi can show him a few things from her own collection?😳

Thank you 🤗 So glad you enjoyed reading it!!

Honestly I would love to but I’m not too good at writing patch up scenes 😆 And this was a combination of many unfinished OS’ so you can imagine the writers block here 😆 But if something comes to me, I’ll def continue!

Originally posted by: ItsmePriya

Hi Esha❤️

This was so beautiful❤️. The perfect feel good vibes

I loved the way you have portrayed rishitha here....the way she is trying to adjust with the family....making friends with everyone slowly...amazing

My favourite bits were

Shiva- Rishitha....I loved that she made his favourite aloo sabzi and also the ways she made shiva understand raavi's importance in his life

Krish and raavi- My favourites in the show and here too...loved the bond they share..it was so good to see him telling raavi about shiva❤️

Babuji needs action...that part cracked me up🤣🤣

It was a wholesome OS...loved it!!!

Aww thank you so much 🤗 I really hope we get to see Shiva & Rishita bond on the show! I love Krish & Raavi! We def won’t get to see the GauRa part 😆 tho I really enjoy writing an AU version of them in my stories! So fun and flirty 😆 Anyway really glad you enjoyed reading this piece 😊

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

Aww. This was beautiful. Surprisingly like Rishita-Shiva here. And Krish always the cupid!HHope there's part 2 of the conversation and confessions.

Thank you!!! I hope we see Rishita & Shiva bond later in the show! Honestly not sure if there will be a part two but if something does come to me, I’ll def write and post it!

Originally posted by: kitm

Beautiful....loved it 🥰 ❣️❣️

Loved Rishta and Shiva bonding 🥰 🥰

Much needed it after all this drama

Thank you for this amazing update 😍😍🙏🙏

Thank you so much ❤️ I’m really glad you enjoyed reading it!!

Originally posted by: Transference

This is so good ❤️

Thank you ❤️❤️

kya The End😡no no no..i was eagerly waiting for the climax😭

This is so beautiful❤️

DAMNNN.

This was so lovely.

Wouldn't mind a continuation.