Absolutely a newbie in this forum. So criticism is absolutely welcome, it would help me to write better. I was a bit disappointed at Pallavi being adamant to stop Raghav's illegal business. Now, it's not possible for a person to be completely white in real life. Life is grey, both white and black at the same time. So just thought of giving our Saree ka dukaan a bit of grey shade (not just a bit, quite a lot), spiced up by her glimpses of her past. Hope u all like it.
Disclaimer : Some parts are violent. Skip them if you like.
Chapter 1: MYSTERY PREVAILS
Farhad shuddered. The last thing he would have ever imagined was that his sweet bhabi would hold a knife to someone's throat, with the full consciousness and motive of killing someone. Sweat trickled down his clean-shaven cheeks to his throat. Amrutha, was clutching Farhad's arm in horror and fear. She hadn't seen this version of her ex sister-in-law, which was comparable to that of Devi Mahakali, who had sworn to eliminate every evil.
Close by, Vijay Deshmukh, was gaping at this situation in front of him like a fish which had been brought out of water. Never in his life had he expected his so taken-for-granted daughter-in-law to act like that. That he was shocked, would be an understatement. He remembered the moments when Pallavi had been sweet, broken, benevolent, helpful, caring and everything else, but angry. His wife, Sharda Deshmukh, her aai was nonetheless taken aback. She couldn't realise what could have pushed her child to take this drastic step.
Sulochana and her good for nothing elder daughter Mansi were hiding from the furious Pallavi, fearing if she unleashed her wrath on them, for they had done many things to irritate and trouble her. Sulochana had earlier been threatened several times by Raghav, but she had felt fear which made her mind go haywire. But this fear was somewhat different, icy cold fear, the coldness of which made goosebumps on her skin.
Kirti and her oh-so-caring husband, Sunny were spellbound. Kirti had never seen her friend like this and as for Sunny, he felt that he would wet himself.
The only person who could stop this dance of destruction was Raghav. Afterall he was the Mahadev of our fiercesome Mahakali who was unleashing her fury on eight goons who had barged into the RR Mansion. However, Raghav had a fight with her last night and had left early morning to Warangal for a business meet. Still, Amma, Kaka and Nikhil were trying their best to cool her down, begging through their eyes and pleading to her in muted voices.
Farhad was still standing, thinking as to what exactly happened that her bhabhi's mood went a complete 180°. She was quite happy, well leaving apart her fight with Raghav. They had a small puja in their home for Kirti's coming baby. So, Pallavi was the one to wake up early and do all the chores for the puja. Then, dressed in a pristine ivory gold silk saree that flaunted her curves and a messy bun, she had come down to the hall to join the puja. Suddenly, out of nowhere, some eight to ten goons had barged inside the RR Mansion. Before Farhad could take care of the situation, Pallavi had entered the field.
Pallavi's POV
I can't believe my eyes. These demons, again. I could feel my body tensing to their looks. My vision is getting clouded by something, anger or tears, I cannot tell. I shut my eyes tightly to let the wave pass over. And what I see leaves me shuddering, in fear or anger, I cannot explain.
(The scene : A wedding mandap, completely destroyed. The bride dressed in baby pink lehenga, lying lifeless near the havan kund, her lehenga drenched in red. Her half closed eyes were witnessing the heinous crimes that were being done in front of her. Her family, lying in pools of blood here and there. The groom comes up to the bride, kisses her forehead, whispers a short I love u, takes her right hand, pulls out the big pink diamond ring from her ring finger, stands up and walks away.)
Now or never. I need to do something. I don't want my family to face any problems. I have decided. I. Will. Not. Spare. You.
POV ends
Farhad remembes the way his bhabhi had deftly tucked in her pallu in her waist, and with the expertise of a trained martial artist hit the first goon on a sensitive nerve on his neck sue to the impact of which he faints. She had rushed towards the aasan of Shiv ji, taken up the small knife and pierced it right through the abdomen of another one. Carefully avoiding getting hit by the goons, she had masterfully hit down the goons one by one. Only one was left. She had turned around, got a hold on his neck, kicked him in the abdomen and punched on his back. The man fell with his back on the floor and with Pallavi's knee forcing down on his stomach as he yelled in pain. She took the knife and almost put it in his right eye, but stopped only a few cms away from his eyes.
(PRESENT SCENE)
Then she took it to his neck and in an icy cold voice said
" Vicky yaa devraaj. Kisne bheja?"
Man : " wo...woh....asal mein..."
Pal: " I hate liars. Ek aur baat sidhe sawaal ka sudha jawaab and mundi hilana mat, sirf shabdo mein jawaab. Kisne bheja?"
Man : " Devraaj "
Pal: " Vicky jaanta hain?"
Man :" Nahi "
Pal :" Kitna diya?"
Man :" 20 "
Pal: " Tu aab vahi karega jo main bolungi warna u know what mere bhai mujhe bloodhounds bulate the. Kyun bulate the Devraaj se puch lena. Ab tujhe main ek cheez dungi jo tu chupchap jake Devraaj ke kamre mein rakh dena. Aur agar nahi rakha toh tera woh hasr karungi ki tera laash bhi kisi ko nahi milegi. Samjha tu?"
Man nods his head.
Pal:" Words!!!"
Man: " Ye..Yesss"
Pallavi stands up from her position, kicks the man's butt and lets him off, who limpers away.
Farhad : "Bhab.."
Pal:" Not now. Mujhe koi tang maat kijiye. Main kamre mein ha rahi hu."
Saying so, the human avatar of Devi Mahakali went upstairs. Once she was out of the hall, Farhad took no time to call his Anna and tell him what had happened.
Raghav :" I'll be there by 3 in the afternoon. Tu baki sambhal. Aur sab logoko abhi ghar pe hi rehne bol. Bahar khatra ho sakta hain." Saying so he cut the call.
On the other hand Pallavi had gone to her bedroom, closed the door, and removed her golden saree, sorry, her blood stained saree, and threw away the jewelleries that she had been wearing. Going into the washroom, she removed her blouse and stared hard at a dark bruise on the left part of her chest. She touched it and unknown to her tears rolled down uncontrollably down her cheeks.
Do tell me if I should continue or not. And please ignore the spelling errors.
Chapter 1 : page 1
Chapter 2 : page 1
Chapter 3: page 1
Chapter 4: page 2
Chapter 5 : page 3
Chapter 6 : page 3