ShiVi AU: Two Worlds Apart - Page 3

Originally posted by: maanmeet1

i was so overwhelmed with the angst......the pain of losing true love.....keep burning for your entire life knowing that someone is out there with same longing for you......and still love u the same.....🥺😭

they knew their destiny but as we all know love finds its way......and they couldnt stop themselves ....you can see dem, meet dem but cant have dem to yourself.....oh boy......what pain that would be....

radha and krishna are epitome of this kind of love......

i remember kabhi kabhi movie's dialogue

and this fits dem so well.......

m sorry for writing so much but this touched my heart so i wrote whatever i felt........sorry for the long comment

Omg! Never apologize for writing a long comment on my story! I thrive on them! I love them! It shows my writing has connected with someone at a level I aim to.

I’m so glad you could feel the deep angst. I usually do not write angst, especially angsty romances because it messes me up and I like to always have a thread of optimism and hope running through my stories. But Kabhi Kabhi is such a beautiful love story and the songs are perfection as only Sahir can do. The lyrics are poignance itself.
Yes the love, the longing, the ache, the emptiness, the desire, the resignation - I wanted to put everything in this story.

Thank you again for your comment! I shall cherish it! ❤️

Originally posted by: mpks1

This is good! Raavi and Shiva from 2 different worlds. Will they be able to get together? It is interesting to read, now can’t wait to read the next part.

Thanks to gurl_enchanted for tagging me.

Thanks for reading and the feedback! I’m glad you enjoyed it!
As for part 2, I have no plans to write it. This was written as a one-shot and it ended where it did.

But I have some more ShiVi stories planned so watch this space!

Originally posted by: gurl-enchanted

Yay! You posted this! 🤩 This is beautifully written and you built this world of angst and love perfectly.

Tagging some people who may also enjoy this lovely story on ShiVi ❤️ Hope you don’t mind. We all may not know each other, but I remember you as ardent fans.

thank you so much for tagging 🤗 I’m not as active on the forum these days, therefore I miss out on stories - tagging really helps! I appreciate it 😳

ashu’s spot

sadly I won’t have time to read it tonight as I’ve got to get to bed - I have a whole week of midterms ahead of me but I have reserved my spot and will rightfully so come back to it and read your work

This is so beautiful Liz ❤️

I love your choice of words. I always learn a lot from every story I read of yours 🤗

Originally posted by: Serpensortia

This is so beautiful Liz ❤️

I love your choice of words. I always learn a lot from every story I read of yours 🤗

Shiri 🤗!

I don’t know how I missed this comment!

Thank you darling! 😘 it’s so kind of you to say. As for learning, I think all of us writers must keep doing that to avoid stagnancy and complacency.

Thank you again for reading!

Wow

This is so freaking beautiful ♥️

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<3

Originally posted by: Chandkatukda

Wow

This is so freaking beautiful ♥️

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<3

Thank you so much! Glad you liked it! 😳

Originally posted by: Anon21

Next part?

This was written as a one-shot.

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

This was written as a one-shot.

Why break my heart like this

Anyway, this was so well written, you made me cry real tears