ShiVi AU: Two Worlds Apart - Page 2

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Thank you! This is so reassuring since I was terribly unsure if the concept would go down well when I adapted it from my other story wherein the concept naturally fit. For this one, I had to tweak and engineer it to fit which isn’t always ideal.
I’m so glad you liked it!

About writing more, I don’t know if I would want to continue this story. I think it ended in the perfect note don’t you? - with a little sadness and the threat of impending separation. That’s about all the angst I can manage (or would want to). But I’d be open to writing more ShiVi. What would you like to read?

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

I could relate to them and I definitely felt the Angst

Do write more soon :)

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Thank you! Would love to take prompts if you have them! 😳

Maybe something similar... where Raavi has some pyscho Stalker and the pandyas decide that Shiva will be her Bodyguard... some fun moments and some serious between shivi

Yay! You posted this! 🤩 This is beautifully written and you built this world of angst and love perfectly.

Tagging some people who may also enjoy this lovely story on ShiVi ❤️ Hope you don’t mind. We all may not know each other, but I remember you as ardent fans.

Originally posted by: Kfof

It was beautiful❤❤❤

Thanks so much for the appreciation. ❤️
If you don’t mind, can you highlight what aspect you enjoyed most? Or what you didn’t enjoy? It helps me improve as a writer! 😳

Originally posted by: gurl-enchanted

Yay! You posted this! 🤩 This is beautifully written and you built this world of angst and love perfectly.

Thank YOU!
You helped me get over my fear of having my work beta-read! Not to mention, you helped make this piece better! 🤗
I hope the bits you had highlighted look okay now!

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Thanks so much for the appreciation. ❤️
If you don’t mind, can you highlight what aspect you enjoyed most? Or what you didn’t enjoy? It helps me improve as a writer! 😳

I loved the whole story and something different concept❤❤

About being together yet separated - Heart touching❤

You have beautifully penned down😍❤

Oh, you also had a fear of getting beta read? 😆 Aww, I am so glad you found it helpful. I barely had to do anything. It was already written so well.

The bits look great now ❤️ You must write more and more freely. Don’t curtail your creativity for other’s comfort. If people mind, you can always post that work elsewhere, but at least you will be flowing where your heart takes you 🤗

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Thank YOU!
You helped me get over my fear of having my work beta-read! Not to mention, you helped make this piece better! 🤗
I hope the bits you had highlighted look okay now!

Originally posted by: gurl-enchanted

Oh, you also had a fear of getting beta read? 😆 Aww, I am so glad you found it helpful. I barely had to do anything. It was already written so well.

The bits look great now ❤️ You must write more and more freely. Don’t curtail your creativity for other’s comfort. If people mind, you can always post that work elsewhere, but at least you will be flowing where your heart takes you 🤗

I think it was more a mental block than a real fear 😆. After all, I beta-read other authors and I’d hate for them to look upon that as interference or criticism! 😆

I usually prefer to stick to the rule book but yes, curtailing your creative freedom can be frustrating and incredibly limiting for an author. It’s better to find a different platform than to stop entirely!

i was so overwhelmed with the angst......the pain of losing true love.....keep burning for your entire life knowing that someone is out there with same longing for you......and still love u the same.....🥺😭

they knew their destiny but as we all know love finds its way......and they couldnt stop themselves ....you can see dem, meet dem but cant have dem to yourself.....oh boy......what pain that would be....

radha and krishna are epitome of this kind of love......

i remember kabhi kabhi movie's dialogue

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y7gjsMT66O0

and this fits dem so well.......

Kabhi kabhi mere dil mein khayal aata hai ... ke zindagi teri zulfon ki naram chhaon mein guzarne pati ... toh shadaab ho bhi sakti thi ... yeh ranj-o-gham ki shayahi joh dil pe chayi hai ... teri nazar ki shuaon mein kho bhi sakti thi ... magar yeh ho na saka ... magar yeh ho na saka aur ab yeh aalam hai ... ki tu nahi tera gham teri justaju bhi nahi ... guzar rahi hai kuch is tarah zindagi jaise ... isse kisi ke sahare ki aarzu bhi nahi ... na koi raah, na manzil, na roshni ka suraag ... bhatak rahi hai andhero mein zindagi meri ... inhi andhero mein reh jauga kabhi khokar ... main janta hoon meri humnafas ... magar yoon hi kabhi kabhi mere dil mein khayal aata hai

m sorry for writing so much but this touched my heart so i wrote whatever i felt........sorry for the long comment

This is good! Raavi and Shiva from 2 different worlds. Will they be able to get together? It is interesting to read, now can’t wait to read the next part.

Thanks to gurl_enchanted for tagging me.