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Ritu!! Thanks for the tag!

THIS WAS SO BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN!!! LOVED IT! 🤗❤️

Waiting to read more of your work:)

Beautiful!! I loved how you captured the emotions and I was hoping that they play this song out when Shivi take over Raam and Sita. But alas.

Haha you said you're OS/TS person, so may I request a continuation of this scene?

The part that Krish insinuated with his Bhabhi throwing some sense in his brother. I'd love SgiVi Mila here. With Raavi realizing where she's errored and Shiva realizing what he's done. Or maybe his portion can be in agni pariksha and the two patch up!

But this was beautiful nonetheless! ❤️

It was just amazing😍😍

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It's beautiful yr🤗

No words so ethereal and well depicted👏

Thanks for tagging me! This was beautiful ❤️❤️

Ioved how you synced raavi's feelings and her longing for Shiva with the song and dance

The end where Shiva comes for her was the best 💖💖

Originally posted by: Anu_V

Ritu!! Thanks for the tag!

THIS WAS SO BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN!!! LOVED IT! 🤗❤️

Waiting to read more of your work:)

Thank you so much!

Working on another one. Hopefully will upload soon. :)

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

Beautiful!! I loved how you captured the emotions and I was hoping that they play this song out when Shivi take over Raam and Sita. But alas.

Haha you said you're OS/TS person, so may I request a continuation of this scene?

The part that Krish insinuated with his Bhabhi throwing some sense in his brother. I'd love SgiVi Mila here. With Raavi realizing where she's errored and Shiva realizing what he's done. Or maybe his portion can be in agni pariksha and the two patch up!

But this was beautiful nonetheless! ❤️

This song was very apt for a scene. Would have liked it much better than Ghar More Pardesiya at least. 😆

That's a lovely idea. I can work on it.

I did think of continuing this in someway where they patch up after they return home with a bit of Sad-Raavi and Disha being unnecessarily chipku.

Will see if I can continue that Idea. 🤗

Originally posted by: Odette_delusion

It was just amazing😍😍

Thank you so much!❤️

Originally posted by: sillysatchel

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Hopefully it helped. 🤗