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Posted: 3 years ago
#21

It's beautiful ritu..❤️Awesome..loved reading it..

Hoping to read more of urs..

PS.. thanks for tagging me.❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: barbieflora

I was just as lost in the story as Raavi was in her character. 😍💖

Should I even attempt to express into words just how beautiful this was!?

My god You gonna make me cry!

Thank you so much for reading and being so kind. ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: deeps07

It's beautiful ritu..❤️Awesome..loved reading it..

Hoping to read more of urs..

PS.. thanks for tagging me.❤️

Definitely!

Thanks for the appreciation ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#24

Ritu....🥺🥺

This was sooo good 😍, I'm gonna be waiting for ur writings now🤩


The starting, where she feels like she's taking up something that is not her's (could be, but isn't)...the dilemma 🥺


N when she enters her character, that she porays.... U DID IT ALL JUSTICE 💖 (smthng those ppl didn't do ....).

The timings of Both their inner thoughts and epiphany are fab!😍 N really teard me up🥺


In short,🙈 I Loved it

N m waiting for next wtever u decide to write....

U ACED this drabble 👏🏻👏🏻🔥

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Posted: 3 years ago
#25

I TURNED AN IF- ROCKERZ !!!!


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On my piece. Sigh. Thanks for commenting guys.

LOVE YOU ALL. ❤️


*Gets emotional and tears up*


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No One:

Literally No one:

Me getting excited on my own post. 🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: sapphir

Ritu....🥺🥺

This was sooo good 😍, I'm gonna be waiting for ur writings now🤩


The starting, where she feels like she's taking up something that is not her's (could be, but isn't)...the dilemma 🥺


N when she enters her character, that she porays.... U DID IT ALL JUSTICE 💖 (smthng those ppl didn't do ....).

The timings of Both their inner thoughts and epiphany are fab!😍 N really teard me up🥺


In short,🙈 I Loved it

N m waiting for next wtever u decide to write....

U ACED this drabble 👏🏻👏🏻🔥

This is such a lovely comment I can't even-

SO HAPPY right now that y'all liked it. ❤️

*tearing up*

Will write something very soon.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Ritu🤗!!! I loved it!!! This was a soul touching piece, really!!! For someone as blank as Raavi has become post Yatra Kaand, being able to lose herself to emotions like this would be catharsis at its highest form.... And for Shiva to view this? They would be in their own world, a parallel where only they exist. Exactly the way you've written them here....

Will look forward to more of your works. Thank you for the tag!!! ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Ritu🤗!!! I loved it!!! This was a soul touching piece, really!!! For someone as blank as Raavi has become post Yatra Kaand, being able to lose herself to emotions like this would be catharsis at its highest form.... And for Shiva to view this? They would be in their own world, a parallel where only they exist. Exactly the way you've written them here....

Will look forward to more of your works. Thank you for the tag!!! ❤️

Thank you for such a lovely comment!❤️

Would do an OS very soon. 😎

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Posted: 3 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

I TURNED AN IF- ROCKERZ !!!!


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On my piece. Sigh. Thanks for commenting guys.

LOVE YOU ALL. ❤️


*Gets emotional and tears up*


Emotional GIFs - Get the best GIF on GIPHY


No One:

Literally No one:

Me getting excited on my own post. 🤣

Congratulations girl....

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Posted: 3 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Congratulations girl....

Thanks a Lot!!

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