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Posted: 3 years ago
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Pixie, Raavi realized her love for Shiva but sad she has given up and leaving him so he can be happy with Disha. It’s just sad😭

Since this is a drabble, I assume there is no follow up chapter or are you planning to write one from Shiva’s POV.?

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Posted: 3 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

This was sooo lovely!

We need a second part hon!

Extremely terrific.

Keep posting more❤️

Thank you dear ❤️

I will try to write more ❣️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: mpks1

Pixie, Raavi realized her love for Shiva but sad she has given up and leaving him so he can be happy with Disha. It’s just sad😭

Since this is a drabble, I assume there is no follow up chapter or are you planning to write one from Shiva’s POV.?

Actually I wanted to give it an open ending where raavi leaves as she is skeptical about Shiva's feelings towards disha.

Now I am not so sure, I will write if I come up with something.❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#34

Raavi’s realization was heartbreaking and I’m so glad she opened up to Dhara. This 👉🏻💔 is how my heart feels right now. Please continue this. I know you said all stories don’t have a happy ending but Shiva and Raavi deserve better. Pretty please!!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: IshqKaRang

Raavi’s realization was heartbreaking and I’m so glad she opened up to Dhara. This 👉🏻💔 is how my heart feels right now. Please continue this. I know you said all stories don’t have a happy ending but Shiva and Raavi deserve better. Pretty please!!

Thank you dear ❤️

I wanted to explore raavi's POV because it is so less explored on the show.

I will try to Come up with a second part if I get some good ideas ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#36

Awesome pixie👏

This one needs a second part for sure. You can't leave us hanging here .


I always mean to say this but never gotten chance earlier. I love your stories so very much . They are so relatable and realistic. You take topics which otherwise considered trivial by mahaan itv CVS and mould them into beautiful stories. Kudos to that art of yours and your writing seems so genuine and engaging . I can keep reading on and on ..


I can think of the story you wrote about problems faced by raavi when shiva and raavi volunteer to give up their room for gaura. I really loved your take on that story .


Also the story about raavi stitching masks to boost earnings for pandya store in pandemic and being scared to voice out this opinion among the other seemingly superior ideas of rest of the familly abd Shiva having her back. ..

I can't recollect others at the moment but I am sure I read and loved each of them. Thank you for writing and sharing with us.


Edited to add: I am sorry if I have quoted the mask stitching wala story as yours. I am doubtful now if it was by the other user Scarysea. I really love her stories too . I make sure to read up immediately when either of your posts anything on main forum.

Edited by firsttimehere - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: firsttimehere

Awesome pixie👏

This one needs a second part for sure. You can't leave us hanging here .


I always mean to say this but never gotten chance earlier. I love your stories so very much . They are so relatable and realistic. You take topics which otherwise considered trivial by mahaan itv CVS and mould them into beautiful stories. Kudos to that art of yours and your writing seems so genuine and engaging . I can keep reading on and on ..


I can think of the story you wrote about problems faced by raavi when shiva and raavi volunteer to give up their room for gaura. I really loved your take on that story .


Also the story about raavi stitching masks to boost earnings for pandya store in pandemic and being scared to voice out this opinion among the other seemingly superior ideas of rest of the familly abd Shiva having her back. ..

I can't recollect others at the moment but I am sure I read and loved each of them. Thank you for writing and sharing with us.


Edited to add: I am sorry if I have quoted the mask stitching wala story as yours. I am doubtful now if it was by the other user Scarysea. I really love her stories too . I make sure to read up immediately when either of your posts anything on main forum.

Thank you so much ❤️

This means a lot❣️

I am glad you enjoy my Stories.Though I love the cliche itv scenes, but I have always wished for PS to have a more realistic approach, to show more domesticated husband wife scenarios.

The first story was by me.The mask story was written by scarysea.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#38

Show mein bhi dukh, yahaan bhi dukh 💔

Kyun 💔

It was really well written Pixie, but very dukhi 😒

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

Show mein bhi dukh, yahaan bhi dukh 💔

Kyun 💔

It was really well written Pixie, but very dukhi 😒

Thank you Aluuu ❤️

Don't be dukhiii

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Posted: 3 years ago
#40

Oh how my heart hurts for her 🥺

You portrayed Raavi's feelings so well, I could feel it all in my bones 💔

Hope there is a second part, since I can't handle tragedies 😭

But if you leave it like this, it works too. I loved reading it regardless!

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