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Posted: 3 years ago

Chapter 27 | (Link to chapter index)


After the attack, Maan had his trusty personal investigator put the pieces together: The man who had knifed Maan was hired at both Sameera and *Monty’s* insistence. Following the broken engagement, Sameera and Sameera’s father -- who were naturally angry about Maan calling off the wedding -- had recruited Monty in their revenge scheme as well. Monty, who had always considered himself the proper heir to the gang and who was still incensed at Maan hiring Geet to meddle in his family affairs, was apparently swept up into the violence of it all. Maan promised Geet that he had no intention of ever seeing Monty or Sameera again.


Maan decided not to get the police involved after the attack, since his gang activity would naturally come out as well. Instead, he settled on an ingenious compromise: Monty would take over for the gang, and Maan wouldn’t press charges against him, as long as Monty gave sole custody over Neil to Asha and would make sure Sameera and her father would permanently stay away from both Maan and Geet. It was largely a no-brainer for Monty, who had little use for his son. The transfer of power went through with little friction, much to Geet’s relief. Adi stepped down as well, loyal as ever to Maan.


Geet moved back into Maan’s house and tended to him as he healed. She sometimes did take a moment to reflect that Maan would always be tied to the death of her brother. There was no escaping that. But what else could she do but continue living her life? She hoped that Rocky from the beyond was happy for her, happy that she had given love a chance like he had advised in her dream.


Geet’s relationship was not the only thing in full bloom. In just a few short months, she had moved up from secretary to being the intake coordinator, which meant talking directly to the women who came in for legal assistance. Helping these ladies filled Geet with a deep sense of purpose, and she finally felt like all aspects of her life were on track.


Ironically, Asha no longer needed the services of the organization that had drawn Geet to work there. Maan had bought Asha a house nearby, and Neil had moved in happily with his mother. Geet and Asha became close friends, and Geet still babysat Neil at least once a week. She made sure to continue practicing her pronunciation of dinosaur names.


Maan could now fully concentrate on running Khurana Shipping, with Adi’s assistance as vice president, and the company’s profit margin skyrocketed. Maan also continued to shower Geet with both affection and gifts. Six months after his release from the hospital, he flew them out to a tropical island as a getaway. It had not only been Geet’s first time out of the country but on a plane, period.


They landed on the island in the early evening. By the time they reached the private beach that Maan had reserved for just the two of them, the moon was casting a beautiful glow amid the starlight in the night sky.


“The moon is so gorgeous,” Geet breathed, standing on the blanket that Maan had laid down for them.


Maan’s teasing voice came from behind her. “*You* are gorgeous.”


Giggling, Geet spun around to face him, then gasped when she Maan down on one knee and holding a diamond ring.


“I love you,” he said softly. “More than I’ve ever loved anything in my entire life. You are everything to me, Geet. Everything.” In the background, the ocean waves undulated gently. “Will you do me the honor of marrying me?”


Geet’s hands flew up to her mouth. She hadn’t been expecting *this.* She hadn’t been expecting any part of her life, really. Who could have known that being unfairly kicked out of the shelter would lead her to this very moment?


Geet gazed at Maan, at the devotion shining in his eyes, and knew she was in safe hands. Always. “Of course,” she replied warmly. Maan grinned, slipping the ring onto her finger. Maan then embraced Geet and twirled her around in the sand, and the two laughed as the stars twinkled merrily above.


The End


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Thank you sooo much for reading this story! All of the feedback really motivated and encouraged me to write, and I appreciate it so much. :) Thanks again and wishing all of you the best! <3

Edited by kumari3 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Chapter 20

Say what ?!!??

Rocky was trying to prove himself to the gang & working under an alias “ viper”

& He was involved in gang activity 😲

So he wasn’t a saint

& he was shot b/c ?????

Maan did not know initially but put 2 & 2 & puzzled the pieces together

But now geet questions their relationship & why maan was nice

I think maan has fallen in love with geet & it is not what geet thinks

Thank you 🤗


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Chapter 21

Wow

Geet left the house 😲

I had a feeling she would leave but I thought she would have had more of an accusatory confrontation with maan

But she suprised me

However she almost had a momentary relapse thinking of Neil but

Her anger & grief overtook her emotions

& I am assuming that she is trying to get that nonprofit job

What if she doesn’t ?? Where will she go ??

Thank you 🤗

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Chapter 22

Geet did get the job with her perseverance!! 👏

& she is working extremely hard in her new position

Glad that she is earning an income & has a temporary residence

But did I read correctly.... Neil & maan found her 😳

Thank you 🤗

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Chapter 23

Wow amazing update !!!

Neil’s greeting & his gift & Convo just warm my heart ♥️

& maan disheveled appearance clearly confirm that he was distraught with worry after geet vanished

He is correct thAt geet left w/o hearing the whole story !

Thank you 🤗

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Chapter 24

Awww 🥰 I am getting warm fuzzies again !!

Maan fell for geet the first time he met her but kept his distance due to Sam

He was planning on telling her once he had won her over ......,., he was actually courting her ...... hmmm sigh

Interesting & funny how geet found it necessary to explain her “ wrongdoing “ 😆

Yeah right geet , keep telling yourself that you have no feelings for maan’s b/c your actions speak otherwise

& maan ❤️❤️, he actually found out the truth b/c he knows geet could actually not have done any wrongdoing ....... he trusts her ...... so he punished the people that tried to hurt her. 😍

Well geet between the butterflies in your stomach maybe listen to what your heartbeats are saying ....... maan ..... maan .... maan 😆

So curious what is in the file ???

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Chapter 25

Omg , rocky committed suicide 😭

I never imagined this twist

Rocky followed the wrong path & went astray falling deeper into his hole ..,,, he went too far where there was no return ....... so sad

So maan is the innocent one all along when I thought you were referring to geet

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Chapter 26

Amazing chapter

Geet realizes her mistake & goes rushing to see maan

But is suprised that he is hurt

Who stabbed him ???

Are Sam & her father behind this ??

Glad that geet is by maan’s side at the hospital

Extremely well written chapter 👏👏

ThNk you 🤗

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Chapter 27 ❤️

Remarkable ending !!! 👏👏👏👏👏

Shockingly Monty was involved with Sam in hiring the hitman 😲

But I love how maan came up with a wonderful solution ..., letting Monty take over the gang .... as long as he gives Neil back to asha & keeps Sam & her dad away from geet & maan ..,,,,, simply brilliant!!!!

The proposal on the beach was icing on the cake ..... so romantic 😍

Di, I absolutely loved this story ..... it was a different take on maneet but extremely enjoyable to read , hence I sped read all the chapters you posted .... I couldn’t Wait 😆

I am sad that it ended but hope you will post another story

Thank you so much di 🤗

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Chapter 20-27

Wow just WOW.... I have no words to put through this one... It was like a rollercoaster ride with a lot of emotions... It's short but still sweet... The reaction Geet gave post revelation of her brothers death..... Ban tha hai... Wow she really did not go easy with it not to forget about that she didn't even let Maan explain the situation as in what happened... And yes finally the one I was waiting for....🤣the run away escape plan...( Lekin ek baat toh hai ki kaise uss ghar se bahar gayi thi Geet koi map routeing hai kya...? I think there is no need for a map adrenaline rush toh khafi hai Geet ko aise bhagne ki. Still a small thought ki agar ghar se nikal ne ki chakar me woh ghar ke andar hi kahin kone me phas jati toh kya ho jata...? THAT HOUSE IS FREAKING HUGE...😫😵 I started again didn't I...🤦🏻‍♀️ok back to the story...) Not really a plan but the situation requires as such that she had to stay away from him to keep her sane. Then she became independent and self sustaining good... Whoa I really didn't expect the surprise visit at the firm office and Neil is the ever loving sweetie pie cutie ever... Aww he even got her present to welcome her back from this " vacation"... They really shared an invisible mother son bond... And Maan is really keeping his patients in explaining the details of what was supposedly happened to her brother in general... I bet even though with no proper sleep and rest Maan still would have managed to look good... Tabhi toh Geet ko butterfly hua tha... Haina... 😉. Her brother in somewhat we call suicidal and it's been clear that he's not in good shape either for crying out loud... 😑. And she ran back to him..... Only to find him half dead... She really loved him didn't she...? Tabhi itni traumatic hui thi khud ki bare me bhi bhoolgayi... The reunion was wonderful I was really leaping with joy... Yay Maan finally got what he always wanted... Azad hogai hai from all of this unwanted burden... He doesn't have to carry the so-called family mantel anymore... Huh just as I thought Monty is really heartless but I'm really happy for our Mr Top's he got to stay with his mother forever and he has Geet also with him and Maan is really intelligent to be striking a deal like that for the betterment of everyone. Aww Adi as always been the most loyal friend from the start... Nice to see them finally having a normal life... And the proposal scene was epic to say it's beautiful and heart melting 😍. That's the perfect proposal for any girl to dream of getting... Still I'm sad that it has to end but I'm also happy that it ended up in a good note... And also about you... Kamaal hai yaar ek do raat me pura ka pura story ki likh liya... Wow dath deni padegi aapki dedication ki... Superb yaar... Hope to see you soon with another amazing story... 🤗

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Edited by UmaDevi97 - 3 years ago

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