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Posted: 3 years ago

Read all chapters. Nice update. Geet brother shot himself he had a very bad childhood and he became a law breaker. Maan renounced his gang and handed over to his brother on the conditions that Neil goes back to his mother.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Chapter 23


Fabulously Awesome


I was wondering whether Maan just let Geet go and forgot about her

but wow both he and Neil came to her office

Neil was told that Geet went on a vacation and I guess that was the most perfect

for he is just a child

Maan cares deeply for Geet but at the moment she cannot believe him

I'm eager to know how Rocky died

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Posted: 3 years ago

Chapter 24


Excellent


Finally revelations revealed and wow Maan had always known

Geet is innocent

so he was attracted towards her from the very first night

Maan gives Geet a file probably about Rocky

as this is the only reason now that Geet is away from him

but he is also confident that after reading the file she will be back


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Chapter 25


Curious and Shocking


Geet learns about Rocy's life style

as he grew he became a criminal and drug user

due to the drug he attempted suicide many times

that finally he shot himself

Geet now somehow believes that Maan may be innocent in Rocky's death

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Posted: 3 years ago

hi thanks for update


Chapter 20

Intense update.... well written

Geet is indeed perplexed as she was told that Rocky died in his childhood.

at least Pinky told Maan that Geet is aware that her brother is dead.

oh Geet asks Maan if he killed her brother

great that Maan explained how he met Rocky aka Viper

sad that she thinks Maan ordered Rocky to be shot

can understand Geet's emotions but she should not accuse Maan just based on assumptions

well she thinks Maan's feelings were an act so that would not go running to the police

she doubts Maan now

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Chapter 26


Tensed and Fantastic


When Geet reaches Maan's house she feared as Pinky tells her

they have hurt Maan

and all Geet can think about is Sameera's father's gang

surprising that Maan does not have security at his place

Maan is happy that finally Geet is back his Angel is back

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Chapter 27


Beautiful


Oh hell Monty teaming up with Sameera and her father

just to get back at Maan

but its amazing how Maan made Monty give full custody of Neil to Asha

while Monty would take over the gang

and Maan together with Adi would be solely involved in Khurana Shipping

wow a beautiful moment Maan propose Geet for marriage on an island

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Posted: 3 years ago

Thank you for this Beautiful story


hope that you soon write another for us

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Chapter 21

sad update...... wonderfully written

oh no Geet decided to leave

she should have at least spoken to Maan instead of making assumptions

Gosh she left a note and leaves

at least she managed to get a taxi

great that she was determined to get a job

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Posted: 3 years ago

Chapter 22

fantastic update.... awesomely written

glad that Geet got the job and is working hard

at least she got a room to stay in the hostel

as expected Geet keeps busy so she does not have to think about Maan or Rocky

she cannot help but think of Neil

finally Maan is there with Neil

Geet is indeed shocked

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