The Beginning of the End [A Raghvi FF- Chapter 5 Page 10 updated] - Page 8

Omg Cliffhanger....its just so gripping

Whatttt

A cliffhanger!!!

Who is it? Please tell me who is it?

Is it that kid Arjun Rao because he was a bit impressed by her 😶

😲❤️😭👏

this was awesome, her fierce avatar and sweet moment, and laughter and the twist at the end.

Tag me please.

Yes, Yes - Arjun Rao isn't our Arjun - I knew somewhere this could be a twist in the next chapter...but your cliffhangers are exactly like TV Serials - pata hi nahi chalta kya hojaaye next - Well, it's a mark of a good writer👏

She wanted to strangle the wily old man till his fat face turned purple and those jaundiced eyes popped out - This reminded me of JKR's writing style.

Thanks for giving scenes like these - Warms my Heart - Raghav looked like he was desperately trying to hold back his laughter at her petulant cild like tone. That was a sight in itself. She looked away crossing her hands across her chest. He grinned widely and took out his handkerchief and wiped away her remaining tears gently as she tried not to focus on how his fingers felt on her cheeks

Damn! Somehow this whole interaction I read while the Telugu Movie Ishq's song - Chinnadana Neekosam was playing in the background. I don't think you hear any Telugu music but do give this amazing song a try. The meaning of the lyrics are amazing & go well with the scene written here. Do give it a try😳

Fir se itna serious cliffhanger - You'll kill me with these now😲

Also, loved to see Pallavi become Raghav's wife in truest forms when the need arose making sure Krishna Rao backs off. This heartbroken Pallavi who's just living through the dazed dreams is torturous for me to imagine....Why would Harish/Farhad leave the couple completely alone when they know what kind of a Man KR is - obviously atleast 1 bodyguard or a trusted aid needs to be there

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Okay. So I would suggest please update - Pieces of a Cracked Mirror first, while this(TBOTE) makes me feel like I'm in an enthralling maze, the former provides me a calming peace🤗

Thanks for the Tag & going through my long Comment❤️