The Beginning of the End [A Raghvi FF- Chapter 5 Page 10 updated] - Page 6

What an interesting twist!!

What!!!! Arjun Rao! This was just completely unexpected!

Great to see Pallavi in the business mode knocking Krishna Rao totally. Reminded me of Raghav. She's becoming the second version of Ghamandi Rao. Also, her emotions were beautifully portrayed.

Would love to see Harish and Farhad moments as well of them missing their Anna....and also them with Pallavi.

P.S.: Where are Amma and Keerti?

You brought Arjun to the picture 😱😱😱😱🤯🤯🤯🤯🤯

This is awesome👍. Loved it

This is so well written, that my heart was breaking at each sentence describing Pallavis pain.....😭 Raghav in a coma is so unbearably painful to imagine, a man who is so noisy to be so quiet....you write beautifully, and the twists you throw in towards the end, just amazing!!!! 👏

Can’t wait for the next update. Pls tag me ❤️

Anushkha, I absolutely am thrilled how your mind conjures up this enthralling tale👏

I do have a query the more I read on- is this more of a Tale from Pallavi's end? Or is it a RaghVi story? - I'm good either way. The Queen's tale is of courage, nonetheless, I wanted to understand if we'll see our King back in the Making if for nothing else, then to be a support for Pallavi (A person can only take so much).

There was a strong resist somewhere the doctor said. He looked so peaceful that she thought whether Raghav even wants to return back in this world. -

I do understand the idea of rest, Lord knows the guy needs it. But I think we know, he's finally given up & doesn't want to fight back anymore. How much more can a person do for the one he loved. He had to fight for her love & attention when he was just finally warming up to the idea that even he could be a happy individual. With all that the life had dealt him(with his Family & Amma's harsh words throughout the time when he was building his empire - when a person needs to hear encouraging words much more), this would be the last trigger.

The more I read on - Gosh! I don't want to imagine Raghav in this state. I seriously, desperately want him back - all sarcasm dripping tones back on his two feet😭

Coming to the way you have developed Krishna Rao's entry - and how Pallavi's dealing with it is really awesome.

I hope the CVs can make it as interesting if we ever do get a Rao vs Rao track in the series.

Damn Man!! That's some interesting twist of fate!!

Arjun is alive...... excited to know how Pallavi tackle this situation as she doesn't have any kind of idea about Arjun's life.

Thanks! All what looks doesn't turn that way though... 😛

Thanks a lot for reviewing! Yep, Raghav's condition is very tragic. Don't worry he will rise again. The titan doesn't lay still for long. Till then, Pallavi will lay the chess board for him. 😎

Yes! Pallavi is unknowingly turning into her man. Yeah.. we will have some real heavy bromance in this ff. Raghav and his boys... stay tuned. I'll explain about Amma and Keerti's side soon.

Thanks for reading.