ShiVi OS- Her Strength forever OS updated on page 7 - Page 7

It was superb

Loved it

This was so so so beautiful! You once again proved how good of a writer you are! The pain and angish that Raavi felt was so palpable. It made me feel icky just reading it. Was angry at Dev! Lol he's truly a "Nalla" as we all like to call him in our discussions. But tbf, there are people like that and sometime it's a beat decision for them to bit get in between. Doesn't necessarily make it right, but they just want to avoid conflict. Loved how Raavi was finally able to judge and see for herself how incompatible they are. He maybe pretty looking from outside, but he just doesn't match the beauty desires from the inside. And Shiva always being by her side! Loved how they took the revenge. Again, that college tamasha scene with the lighter was very well/vividly written and I could see it all okay out. Bilkul sookoon Mila Dil ko. And the comfort they had around each other at the end was ❤️❤️. Haha, loved Raavi telling Dev that he's not her type😂.

Hope you're feeling better now. Abd would love to read more as and when you get time! 🤗🤗

Mahi di!!! You finally updated this!!! Raavi's pain was so heartbreaking for all of us, and Dev just gave me the goosebumps of horror..... I love how it took one word from Shiva for Raavi to just breakdown and tell him everything, as if she herself doesn't know how much trust she puts in him subconsciously....

The ending was super cute though💜❤... Dobi Raavi and her shopping worries🤭...

PS I just read your ff Mine on Wattpad this week di, and after this and that, I have to say, you write Shiva in action so well!! Every time I read him, I'm imagining a very movie like action scene in my head

Beautiful os, no words to describe it 💓💞❤️

You are such a brilliant writer, Raavi's pain, fear and humiliation was beautifully described👏

Loved the gunda Shiva ,the way he protected Raavi, give her strength and took revenge was bang on👏

Shivi's moment in the end was so sweet and cute 💞❤️

This is probably my favorite ShiVi story ever!

Raavi has the strength to overcome anything, but she just needed Shivas support to boost her confidence😳

Shiva was so perfect in this!!

Mahi this was beautiful😍

The way you write we can connect with each and every emotiont of the characters.

Right from Ravi's courage, pain, anger, disgust, fear, dev's behaviour to shiva's protectiveness, care, strength...everything was beautifully written🧡

And the ending...awwww sooo cute🥰🥰

Looooooooooooved it🧡🖤🧡

A beautiful OS Maahi! Poor Raavi had to go through a lot before getting justice 💔

Shiva being Raavi's strength and safety

I loved how Shiva supported Raavi and made sure Rahul got the punishment he deserved! Dev was quite useless here as usual 😆

I loved reading this one, and I'm glad you're back! ❤️

Maahi🤗 it started out really scary and sad but after our hero’s entry, things took a turn. Oh my! What all Raavi had to ho through to stand for justice snd speak the truth, I am glad that she finally talked to Shiva and he was ready to fo anything for her. Thank you giving a positive ending❤️

This was just perfect….

Loveeed every bit of it…