Raghav OS: A dish served cold - Page 4

Originally posted by: xerxes12

They say self realization is the best realisation. The way you depicted the path to realization or yet to be..is amezing👏👏👏.

The inner tussle between his conscience and his logics was so much fun to read.

You did a great job here. I love it.❤️

Keep writing👍🏼

That tussle is what I wanted to show! His mind told him it was only fair to take revenge, but his conscience knows something is wrong. And his heart knows exactly what that "something" is, he only needs to seek deeper to figure it out 😳

I really hope it's a self-realization in the show too... I mean, I know he'll get proofs and stuff later, but before that I want him to get to a place where he just knows Pallavi could never do such a thing, and that he did a terrible, terrible mistake with her. That realisation should come first ❤️

Thank you for the love and compliments! 🤗🤗

Originally posted by: Bee222

I know he'll get proofs and stuff later, but before that I want him to get to a place where he just knows Pallavi could never do such a thing, and that he did a terrible, terrible mistake with her.

❤️❤️ you have my heart for this line..

This is how it should be...this is what happens..when you feel close to some one you don't need the proofs you just know they are right.

I watched this show called Zindgi Gulzar hai ..where this misunderstandings arise between the couple and they started living separately and with time they realised their mistake ..and one day the girl just called up the boy and said she wants to come back and the boy said ..just come back...that's it..no explaination..no proof ..no arguments..pure trust and realisation..it was so beautiful.

That's how I felt like reading your os....🤗

If you could write more such things on them..I will be glad to read them.

Originally posted by: K_keechu

My partner in match making 🤗

Awe! I felt bad for Raghav after reading this. But he totally deserves it. 😆

loved Farhad here , he was like "I told you so, now deal with it yourself. Bye! "🤣

It's beautiful bee.😳

Thank you Keechu 🤗

Ye to kuch bhi nahi, he needs worse! 😈 I wrote this before his actual Pallu tamasha scene came out... if I had known what all he was gonna say there, I'd have made him suffer more 😈

Lol give Farhad some credit 😆 Wo to Anna ko tadpane aya tha, but anna khud hi itna tadap rahe the 🤪 Isliye bechara chupchap chala gaya

Originally posted by: chullbulli

aisa lag raha tha ki kisi ne script chura ke leak kar di hai.. yaar aur likho aage ka.. yahan par nahi chorna hai..poori story karo please

Thank you for your words ❤️❤️ This was a oneshot, but I'm glad you liked it so much 😳🤗

Originally posted by: inlieu

Oh, this was fabulous as though taken right out the scriptwriter's mind. I would really love to see something like this, especially Farhad watching his Anna squirm and spend sleepless nights.

Thanks for this lovely OS! 🤗

Thank you so much for the lovely compliment 🤗

I really wanna see him having sleepless nights 😈 I mean, the trinity of ladies are gonna give him enough of those anyway 🤣 But I wanna see his guilt eating him up 😈 Shuruaat to ho chuki hai.. par bechara confused hai abhi 😆

I'm glad you liked it! 😳

Originally posted by: xerxes12

❤️❤️ you have my heart for this line..

This is how it should be...this is what happens..when you feel close to some one you don't need the proofs you just know they are right.

I watched this show called Zindgi Gulzar hai ..where this misunderstandings arise between the couple and they started living separately and with time they realised their mistake ..and one day the girl just called up the boy and said she wants to come back and the boy said ..just come back...that's it..no explaination..no proof ..no arguments..pure trust and realisation..it was so beautiful.

That's how I felt like reading your os....🤗

If you could write more such things on them..I will be glad to read them.

Exactly, we don't need proofs with the people we love... we just know them and trust them ❤️ Simple as that.

@bold: That sounds beautiful ❤️

Thank you for the lovely words 🤗

How did I miss this 🤔

Great work... true emotions... really nice 👏

Angry RR

I loved Farhads part and the last dialogue