Raghav OS: A dish served cold - Page 3

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Posted: 4 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: ReemShah

I can imagine this happening in the show. Raghav's anguish due to his actions should be shown. I definitely want him to re-evaluate his act and think about it.

and you have written this so beautifully

He has strong principles on not hurting the innocent... yet he has done exactly that. Once he starts feeling guilty, it'll be a long painful journey for him. I'm waiting to see it ❤️

Thank you! 😳

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Posted: 4 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: __VIHU

Guilt will definitely dive him crazy if he went on like this... It was beautifully penned... Taking a nap is my kind of solution for stress but unfortunately it didn’t worked out for dear Raghav.

I don’t know what you were trying to write but it turned out awesome. Raghav reminiscing Pallavi eyes with different emotions was so nicely explained.

Do write lot more...

cheers❤️

Yup, he is intense in all his emotions so I can only imagine his guilt will be intense too, and so will his pain 💔 Let's see how they show it!

My solution to any kind of stress is to close my eyes and take deep breaths. If it's too much too handle, I pick up my diary... as I write in it, everything gets sorted out in my mind

But yeah, his solution didn't work out for him 😛

Thank you so much! 😳❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#23

They say self realization is the best realisation. The way you depicted the path to realization or yet to be..is amezing👏👏👏.

The inner tussle between his conscience and his logics was so much fun to read.

You did a great job here. I love it.❤️

Keep writing👍🏼

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Posted: 4 years ago
#24

aisa lag raha tha ki kisi ne script chura ke leak kar di hai.. yaar aur likho aage ka.. yahan par nahi chorna hai..poori story karo please

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Posted: 4 years ago
#25

Yeah I agree, in the show they won't show this soon. But praying that they show something, maybe not able to feel happy he won.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#26

Oh, this was fabulous as though taken right out the scriptwriter's mind. I would really love to see something like this, especially Farhad watching his Anna squirm and spend sleepless nights.


Thanks for this lovely OS! 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: nautankitadka

Thank you so so so so much for this!! 🥺

I have been so uneasy ever since the episode and this gave me a sense of the closure I want to see!!👏👏👏

Please do send it in to the cast!! 💫

If they incorporate this, will be amazing 👌

Well written, beautifully stated, keep writing!! 🙋‍♀️

I would love to see that beautiful bedroom of his messed up like in this OS to reflect the turmoil in his mind. 😆

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Posted: 4 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: SRKian

Dude!You've my heart with this ❤️ Send this to cvs and ask them to show us this exact thing!❤️

Mujhe ye sab sending wending nahi aati yaar 🤪

But I'm glad you liked it that much! 🤗

Edited by Bee222 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: nautankitadka

Thank you so so so so much for this!! 🥺

I have been so uneasy ever since the episode and this gave me a sense of the closure I want to see!!👏👏👏

Please do send it in to the cast!! 💫

If they incorporate this, will be amazing 👌

Well written, beautifully stated, keep writing!! 🙋‍♀️

I'm glad it gave you a sense of closure! 😳

Arey yaar, itna bhi makkhan mat maaro... sending to cast? Incorporating in show? Kuch bhi matlab 😆

But thank you so much... means a lot 🤗🤗

Edited by Bee222 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: zam123

Yeah I agree, in the show they won't show this soon. But praying that they show something, maybe not able to feel happy he won.

Haven't watched the episode yet, but from the written updates, it's clear he knows he hasn't done the right thing. He's trying to justify it to himself now, trying to drown out his voice of conscience... but only for so long 🙃🙃

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