Part 18
Magnificent update !!! 👏👏👏
You portrayed geet’s & maan’s anguish beautifully !!! 👍🏼
They are being pulled together but they are trying to resist but it is agonizing for both of them
They both don’t understand their new found feelings & emotions
I find the part about their marks burning intriguing......
I like how you showed more facets to maan’s character like how he was hurt and angry by geet’s comment & how he is sharing his personal elf with geet & how he wanted Timcy to stay with geet to make sure she is ok ......... so he does care .......... he just does not express his feelings.
And interesting how you have created a love triangle b/n adi who has feelings for geet but pinky has feelings for adi .....,...,
It is so intriguing......... never a dull moment in the update
Loved the update
Thank you di 🤗
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