MY FIRST FF HOPE U LIKE IT - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
#11
hey it was very nice wow all paired up thats great and AR got married that was excellent and ridhima gave birth to a baby that was excellent and that last dialogue was excellent pls yaar u only continue soon and if u dont mine try to pm me after ur next part
plsssssssss cntinue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#12
oy hoye!!!!!!! shaadi bhi hogayi, honeymoon bhi khatam, au ek beti bhi, yaar all the fun parts are already finished, this is too bad of you, lekin koi baat nahin u can post the next parts as flash backs 😉 cause we are definitely expecting more from a talented writer like u
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Posted: 17 years ago
#13
wow!!! everything happened really quickly but gr8 job still! continue soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#14
HI EVERY1 SORRY 4 THE DELAY 😊 THERE R 2 REASONS THAT I COULDN'T CONTINUE MY MOM WASN'T ALLOWING ME TO BE ONLINE 😕 & I WAS NOT GETTING ANY IDEA SO SORRY 4THE DELAY ONCE AGAIN 😆
PART 2
8:00AM AT SANJEEVANI
shashank:riddhima thume pata hai na k aaj thumari
cousin (sofiya) london se aarahi hai ?
ridz: haan papa mujhe yaad hai mein aur armaan sofiya
didi ko shaam ko airport se le aaenge .
sh: ok.
mus: yaar riddhima, ye sofiya kaun hai?
ridz:sofiya meri tauji ke badi beti haiaur vo anji di se bhi 1 saal badi hai

in the canteen
all were sitting & having abit of chit-chat
suddenly sab ka pager baj gaya except
armaan & riddhima

ar: kya hua ridd hima tum pareshaan lag rahiho, sab theek to hai na ?

ridz: nahi armaan aisa kuch nahi hai bas thoda daar lag raha tha.

ar: daar ... ? par kun?

ridz: haan kunki sofiya didi bachpan se meri sari cheezen chinti aarahi 😭 . aur mujhe daar hai k vo tumse mujhe chin legi 😭 .

ar: par thumare ghar mein kisi lko bhi ye baat nahi pata ? 😲

ridz: nahi, kunki didi ne kaha tha ke agar meine kissi ko bata diya to vo mujhse meri saari bachi-kuchi cheezen
chin legi

ar: don't worry riddhima aisa kuch nahi hoga agar aisa hua bhi to belive me mein sab kuch theek kar dunga.

ridz: thankx armaan

then both of them huggued 🤗

HOPED U LIKED IT
DO REPLY SOON THE 3RD WILL BE AFTER SOME REPLYS
LOVE 😊 PETUNIA 😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
#15
WAw..its really Sweeeeett..keep writN... 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#16
PART 3

AR: riddhima, challen? humme thumari didi ko leena jana hai.

ridz: haan challo (with a tensed face) 😔

ar: tum pareshaan mat ho jaisa tum sooch rahi ho vaisa kuch nahi hoga. mujh par bhrosa rakho.

AT THE AIRPORT

ridz: didi ki flight aane walli hai. par armaan, where will didi stay , i mean i don't want her 2 stay at our house.

ar: ok, to hum didi ko papa k ghar chood tenge

SOFIYA ARRIVES & HUGES AR & RIDZ
SEEING SOFIYA HUGGING AR, RIDZ WAS ABOUT 2 CRY 😭

SOF: hi ridz, hi armaan

RIDZ: hi didi

ARMAAN IS ABT 2 SHAKE HAND WITH SOFIYA BUT RIDZ HOLDS HER HAND & PUTS HIS HAND ON HER WAIST ARMAAN SMILES & THE SONG "ASMANI RANG HO" IS BEING PLAYED IN THE BACK GROUND

ar: bahut der ho gai hai yo cahllen?
IN THE CAR
ridz haan papa aur nani bhi intizar kar raheh honge

sof: kun mein thumari saat nahi reha sakati?

ridz: nahi di aise koi bat nahi hai par humme kal subha delhi jaana padega. 😉 😉 vo kya hai na armaan k ek bauth khass dost ki shadi hai... 😈 😈

SEEING SO A BIG SMILAE COMES ON ARMAAN'S FACE

sof: thats ok but when are u going 2 come back

ridz: only 2 weeks didi

sof: par ek shadi k liye do hafet? 😕 😕

ar: haan didi vo meine soocha k delhi jaahi rahehai to mom dad ko bhi mill lenge. lo ghar bhi aagaya

sha: are tum log sofiya ko yahaan kyun le aae ?

ridz: papa vo hum log aap ko batana bhool gaye the k armaan k ek khas dost ki shadi hai to issiliye hum delhi jaa rahe hain aur ek hafeta armaan k mom dad ko bhi mill lenge

sha: ok

ar: riddhima ab challen ghar jakar packing bhi karni hai

ridz: haan challo challo ,bye papa p, bye nani

AT THEIR HOUSE

ar: riddhima vaise mere kaunse dost ki shadi hai?

ridz: patanahi...& laughs 😆 😆 😆 didi do hafeton mein challi jaaegi aur phir everything will b all right 😆 😆 😆

ar: i must say mere saath hone ka thume kuch to faida hoga na .. 😊 😊

ridz: kya matalab

ar: mera matalab k mere sath rahekar tum bhi smart ho gai ho

ridz: arma...an! & starts hitting him playfully
HOW WAS THAT ? DO REPLY SOON


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Posted: 17 years ago
#17
het petunia yaar i mst say yaar ur to goooooood yaar
it ws fabulous sophia wow ridz kafi smart hai yaar..........2weeks ka gap didi se dur rehne ka wow vry gooooooood bt unke baby ka kya hua unke baby ka bhi dikhado plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz...............
cont sooooooon
luv yachna
-Vanshika- thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#18
wow yaar nice update...... 👏
plzzzzz update it soon........
😊 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#19
IM REALLY VERY SORRY AGAIN HOPE AP SAB MUJHE MAAF KAR DENGE
COLOR=CYAN]PART 4

THEY BOTH LEAVE FOR DELHI WITH THEIR DAUGHTER GIYA & LIVED THEIR HAPPILY 4 2 WEEKS SO THATS THE END I KNOW ITS BORING BUT I CAN'T GET MORE THOUGHTS IN MY MIND
ANY1 CAN CONTINUE
LOVE 😊 PETUNIA 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#20
it's ok yaar.......ur ff was really very amazing....i will miss it..... 😭 .......but that's ok........and the best thing is that ther's happy ending........ 👏
😊 😊

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