KALMA FF:- Tu hi hai dariya mera (CHAPTER -1 UPDATED 10/08/2021)

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PROMO 

Kalyani- kalyani malhar rane se panga le rhi ho to jeet ki gunjaish to krna hi mat.....she said smirkingly 

Woman- kitni bhi koshish kr lo kalyani nhi jeet paogi.....vo mera hai or kbhi tumhara nhi hoga.... 

Kalyani- lets wait and watch sweetheart..... 

Woman- kya krogi use paane ke liye....use jaake btaogi mera roop 

Kalyani- chinta mt kro....abhi to ye game kaafi lambi chalni hai dear..... don't your worry 

Woman- hunnhhh.....haarne ke liye taiyar ho jao.....Main jo chahti hu vo main ese ya vaise haasil kr hi leti hu

Kalyani- not this time meri jaan....ab tak shayad iss liye jeet rhi thi kyu ki tumhe main nhi mili thi......so happy to meet you.....GOOD LUCK BUT NO GOOD LUCK 

saying this she moves out from there...... And the woman just stands there nothing to do but to fume in anger 


HOW WAS THE TEASER GUYS??? 

SHOULD I CONTINUE THIS????

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Of course you should continue praku 😻😻 mujhein teaser se pata nahi kyun kalyani aur ketki ke time ki yaad aagayi par Jo bhi hoga you will rock it this pls continue 😍😍😘😘

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Ekdum mast teaser hai Praku

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Wow... 

Nice teaser.. πŸ‘πŸΌ

Waiting to read.. 

Kalyani in challenge mode.. πŸ‘

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Plzz continoue teaser is beautiful

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Interesting concept

please continue πŸ‘πŸΌ

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Nice update 

Waiting 

Continue soon

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CHAPTER-1 

 The track is of ketki.....She is here as she loves Malhar since college days....her main motive is to woo Malhar to herself she is not a terrorist.....vaman is also not a terrorist he is positive and married to aparna and lives happily and shifted to Nagpur as AS asked them to live peacefully and happily.....atul ran from home as he is accused of a murder and he believes it to be kalyani who helped him to escape as ketki showed him the messages......and he is upset with kalyani..... Atharv is normal and as samtharv loves to do nothing but to trouble kalma...


IN KALMA'S ROOM 

Kalyani entered the room upsetly with moksh's milk bottle and saw Malhar laying on the bed with his phone watching something in it....he's  still awake.....he notices her presence but ignores her which makes her more upset but without saying anything goes to moksh's pram 


Kalyani- pillu....kya kr rha hai mer baccha.....

Moksh- gli....gugu....ligu..... 

Kalyani smiles seeing him talking meaningless with her and gives flying kiss to him ....malhar too smiles seeing their bond but when kalyani turns to him she finds him focused on the phone and again turns to him to feed her......


Kalyani- pillu aa....aa kar....dudh pina hai na..... 

Moksh opens his mouth and kalyani fixes the nipple of bottle into his mouth......and while sipping it he falls asleep amd kalyani silently takes out the bottle keeping in mind not to disturb him..... 

Kalyani goes to kitchen to heat malhar's food and again comes back to the room to give him his dinner 

Kalyani- malharji.....malharji khana kha lijiye.....aapne khaya nhi hai na.....she said innocently 

Malhar looks towards her and was about to say something when.....


Kalyani- Malhar ji mera gussa khane pe kyu nikal rhe hai.....pehle khana kha lijiye..... 

Malhar- mujhe nhi khana!!!!

Kalyani- please!!!!

Malhar again looks towards her somewhere anger present in his expression......

Kalyani- mt khaiye....jaa rhi hu main rakhne..... 

She was about to leave when he takes the plate from her and relishes the taste....


She feels relaxed and goes to open the balcony door and stands in the balcony.....cold winds were making her relax from all the chaos that happened today....malhar couldn't understand her reactions as she has never hone to the balcony like this and enjoying the nights with cold breeze......he wanted to ask her of she had her meals but hesitated to ask her ...... 


Malhar POV- isko kya ho gya....achanak se ese chali gyi....kuch kaha bhi nhi aaj ke baare m jo kuch bhi hua.....kya soch rhi hai ye...kalyani main yakeen nhi krna chahta ki tumne ye sb kiya par maine jo tumhe btaya atul mama ke baare vo sb tumne msg k through unhe bhej diya.....ye baat humare alava koi nhi jaanta tha.....fir ye msg kaise gye...... 

Kalyani in the balcony remembers the words which she had with ketki......


FLASHBACK 

Malhar(angrily) - kaise kr skti ho tum kalyani.....ye sb kyu....

Kalyani- malharji please yakin kriye mera maine esa kuch nhi kiya.....maine koi msg....

Malhar- yakin.....kaise kru yakin......vo sb jo maine tumhe btaya unke baare m tumne use msg ke jariye sb bta diya unhe.....


When ketki comes to their room..... 

Ketki- malhar shaant ho ja.....kya kr rha hai tu....kitna chillayega ab uspe....vo bol rhi hai ki usme nhi kiya ye sb......

Malhar- tu chup kr ketki.....ye baat kalyani ke alava koi nhi jaanta tha vo to acha hua ki tune mujhe forcefully kalyani ka phone attend krne ko kaha .......thank u so much.... 

Ketki- ye kya keh rha hai tu malhar......

Kalyani- malharji......ek....

Malhar- chup bilkul......kuch nhi sunna mujhe tumse samjhi tum...... 

Kalyani- par....

Malhar- sunai nhi diya tumhe......

Saying this he was about to leave the room when he said to her...... 

Malhar- meri team unhe desperately dhoond rhi hai.....agar unhe kuch bhi hota hai n kalyani uski jimmedari sirf or sirf tumhari hogi......samjhi tum......

Kalyani was shocked to listen these words......and without saying anything he leaves from there taking his as well as kalyani's phone...... 

Kalyani- tum jaake room m aaram krlo.....main thodi der m khana bhijwa dungi tumhare liye..... 

Ketki nods and goes to door and closes it.....she listening the sound turns to her and said 

Kalyani- ketki agar tumhe iss baare m bat krni hai to main abhi kuch nhi baat krna chahti ....please..... 

Ketki smirkingly comes towards her and said......

Ketki- mujhe bohot bura laga kalyani ki malhar ne tumse ese baat ki.....she laughed on her statement which made her confused......

She puts her arms around kalyani's neck and said..... 

Ketki- kyaa yaar kalyani.....itni bevkuf ho tum.....sach mein....i can't believe......mujhe laga mere liye ye aasan nhi hoga....par tum to.....she laughed out loud.....

Kalyani (confused) - kya keh rhi ho??? Mtlb kya hai tumhara??? Hunhhh???? 

Ketki- what???? Ese kya dekh rhi ho???? Kalyani.....tumne vo msg nhi bheje....i believe you....par at least pta lagane ki koshish to krti ki kisne ye sb kiya....par tum to malhar ko.....i am sorry.....TUMHARE MALHARJI ko safai dene m lagi hui thi.....she giggled..... 


Kalyani was shocked as every statement ....every words of her were giving shock after shock.....

Ketki- i know digest nhi ho rha hoga na......isse pehle tumhe heart attack aaye....let me tell you everything...... vaise iss age m heart attack to nhi aayega.....par kya hai n tumhe to sach bta hi skti hu.....malhar tumpe bharosa krega nhi....apni aai ko jaake kuch bol nhi skti....

Kalyani- jo bhi hai sb sach sach btao....kisne kiye mere phone se vo msg......bolo....

Ketki- calm down!!!!! Idhar aao.....

She jerks of her hands.....

Ketki- itna attitude!!! Okk mat aao to suno.....

She tells her everything ....how she came to know about malhar though living in lucknow through newspaper as she had read about how he got a big child racket caught....he was everywhere in the news .... she loved him since college days but was unable to express it when she was finally about to confess the same day he gave the marriage card of his and sampada's wedding which broked all her hopes and left the same night to her home......and after year when she saw him in the newspaper she came up with a plan to meet him and she got her husband killed by her mens and came to Aurangabad as he was a businessman whose business partners betrayed him and captured all his property....she took the advantage and beacame the BECHARI.....


Ketki- or dekho....mera malhar mujhe dhoondte dhoondte aa hi gya mere pass.....ab iss murder ka ilzaam kisi ko to lena pdega na......or malhar itna acha hai ki dekho ghar le aaya mujhe.....fir yaha aake pta chala ki sampada ke baad usne dopsri shaadi kr li.....tumhare baare m pata lagwaya maine tumhari family.....or bas......tumhare pujya pitashree par ye laanchan laga diya.....to kalyani ye thi meri story....kaisi lagi......

Ek baat or sun lo..... Malhar sirf mera hai.....vo mujhe belong krta hai tumhe nhi......pr abhi bhi tumhari nasmjhi ki vajah se as a bachi treat krta hai tumhe.......as a wife nhi....which is another golden opportunity for me......dekh lo kalyani....things mere favour m hai....tumhe malhar ke dil se nikaal fekungi or iss ghar se bhi....bohot jald iss ghar m mera grihapravesh hoga.....saying this she laughed wickedly.....


The very next moment.....ketki felt a tight slap on her face......which was given none other than by kalyani.....

Kalyani(shoutingly)- himmat kaise hui tumhari....bolo.....mere baba ko tumne fasaane ki himmat kaise ki.....

Ketki- mera iraada sirf malhar ko paana hai...jo bhi mere raaste ka kaanta banega use main fek dungi...kaante pe chalne ka mujhe shauk nhi hai.....

Kalyani controlling her anger...and laughingly said- awww.....ketki....dear.....krlo try.....aaj se hi apna kaam shuru kr do....malharji ke kareeb jaa hi nhi skti tum....kya kehti ho tum best friend ho unki.... itna hi jaan paayi ho tumhe unhe......kya yaar ketki.....koshish achi thi par haath kuch nhi aayega.....mark my words.....

She holdingly her stomach laughed and sat down on the bed.....which made ketki furious......

Ketki- i challenge you kalyani.....nhi jeet paaogi.....

Kalyani- KALYANI MALHAR RANE se panga le rhi ho to jeet ki gunjaish krna hi mat.....kyu ki you can never win from me.....bye bye..... chalti hu.....kaam hai mujhe.....

Ketki- malhar ko btane ja rhi ho.....mera asli roop!!

Kalyani- not at all....pehle thoda game khel le......tb tak tum bhi try kr lo....tum bhi kya hi yaad rakhogi.....

She leaves from there...ketki standing and fuming in anger leaves from there too.....


AT PRESENT 

Someone pats kalyani's shoulder which brought her back to reality......she turned and found it was Malhar.....

Kalyani- aap.....

Malhar- mera bhoot dikh rha hai kya tumhe????.....dikh rha hai to btao main bhi tata hello kr lunga.....

Kalyani( innocently) - nhi...vo...bas main.....

Malhar- khana khaya tumne????

Kalyani knew it was going to be another scolding by him as she didn't have a bite of the meal....so she lied 

Kalyani- ha...kha liya maine....

Malhar- acha!!!!! Kl college hai na tumhara???? 

Kalyani- haa kyu.....???? 

Malhar- mujhe dean se baat krni hai isliye pucha.....

Kalyani- baat??? Kya baat!?? 

Malhar- itna acha college hai....kitni achi padhai bhi hoti hai......soch rha hu ki jhoot bolne ki classes bhi shuru kr deni chahiye.....hai na!!!!

Kalyani understood that her lie has been exposed...... 

Kalyani- vo main.....

Malhar- Mrs. Rane.....jb jhoot bolna nhi aata aapko to please try bhi mt kra kriye.....aapke jhoot Sunke khud jhoot bhaag jayega...


Kalyani's ears echoed with the word MRS.RANE......when malhar's chutki made her back to reality.....

Malhar- kaha kho gyi???

Kalyani - kahi nhi....ese hi....

He finded her behaviour odd.....but chose to let it go 

Malhar- maina tumhare liye khana garam krke la rha hu....thik hai....

She nodded her head in approval as she didn't want to get another scolding... He leaves from ther......kalyani was happy as he said to her mrs.rane.....


Kalyani to herself- mrs. Rane.....hayee.....main mrs. Rane hu..... of course main hi hu or kon hoga.....koi le bhi nhi sakta ye jagah.....she again giggled to herself......

Malhar came back to the room with food......kalyani was in no mood to eat....her expression told it all....malhar understood she wouldn't have proper dinner as nothing was kalyani's favourite .....

Malhar- aao idhar!!!!

Kalyani- ji!!!!!

Malhar made a bite of chapati with veggies....and forward it to feed her.....

Kalyani- malharji mera bilkul man nhi hai.....dekhiye vo khud keh rha hai ki vo mere andar nhi jana chahta....dekhiye.....

Malhar- ek shabd or kaha na.....

Kalyani- sorry!!!!! Khilaiye!!!!

Malhar feed the food to her.....she ate it with tantrums.......after having meal she drinks water and put the pillows on the centre of bed making space for both of them to lie down....as they had a terrible day today......after lying down......

Kalyani- aap abhi bhi naraz hai mujhse?????

Malhar (not looking towards her) - pta nhi 

Kalyani- pta nhi ka kya mtlb hota hai!!!! Malhar ji please trust me maine koi msg nhi kiye the....aap hi yaad kijiye..... workshop se aapne hi mujhe mandap ke liye lakdiya or sindoor or mangalsutra laane ko kaha tha na....humari baat- cheet ke baad hum dono hall m chale gye the for main workshop....or mera phone jb aapko mila tb to main workshop m hi thi na......

Malhar reminsce how he asked her to get the accessories as she was coming from outside only.....

Malhar- haa kalyani....ye dimag m aaya hi nhi.....par fir msg kisne bheja.....tumhare phone ka password sirf mujhe pta hai or kisi ko nhi......

Kalyani- vhi to malharji.....

Kalyani POV- i am sorry malharji chaah kr bhi sach nhi bta skti....koi saboot bhi nhi hai jisse ye sb saabit ho....

Malhar- i am so sorry kalyani..... faltu m itna chilla diya maine tum pr.....please maaf kr do.....i am sorry......

Kalyani- malharji.....its ok aapki bhi koi galti nhi hai.....aapne vahi dekha jo aapko dikhaya gya......aapki koi galti nhi hai aap please apna dil chhota mt kriye.....

Malhar- jo dikhaya gya vhi dekha mtlb???

Kalyani- kuch nhi......so jaiye.....saiying this she turns to other side......but malhar finds something fishy...... 

AT ANUPRIYA'S ROOM 

Anupriya sitting on the bed talks to herself.....

Anupriya POV- bappa.....ye sb kya kr rhe ho.....atul ka ese jana kalyani ke msg.....kalyani nhi kr skti esa to fir kisne kiya ye sb.....ab to main or kalyani mil bhi nhi skte.....ghar ke baahar hi kuch sochna hoga......

She gets interrupted when AS comes to her room....

Anupriya- aausaheb aap iss vakt....kya hua neend nhi aa rhi kya aapko 

AS- nhi anupriya.....hum aaj jo hua uske baare m soch rhe hai.....

Anupriya- aausaheb atul ghar vapas aa jaenge 

AS- hum atul ke baare m nhi soch rhe hai hum malhar or kalyani ke baare m soch rhe hai.....tumhe ketki ajeeb nhi lagi 

Anupriya- ajeeb to lagi aausaheb!!!

AS- dekha na tumne malhar kaise use god m uthakar laaya..... fir vo kya kehte hai....haa guest room ki jagah apne pr kalyani ke room m le gya....unke bistar par.....parmeshwara.....or fir kalyani ke haatho se malhar ka naam mitna....ye sb ache sanket nhi hai Anupriya bta rhe hai hum 

Anupriya- jaanti hu aausaheb....par vo unki mehman hai hum kya kr skte hai....

AS- hume lagta hai tumhe kalyani se iss baare m baat karni chahiye.....or use samjhana ki inn sab baato ko ese halke m mat le....

Anupriya- ji aausaheb ab aap jaakar so jaiye kaafi raat ho gyi hai na

AS- hmmm...tum bhi so jao chalte hai 


AT KETKI'S ROOM 

Ketki to herself- soch ketki kuch soch.....malhar ko paana aasan nhi hoga....par haar ketki ko bhi manzoor nhi hai.....vo humesha se sirf mera tha.....or rahega.....vo kehte hai na......hindi mein jodiyan to jannat m hi banti hai or english mein made for each other..... She giggled.....

Kya kr rhi hai tu ye sb shaayriya bolne se kuch nhi hoga....use paana hai to sirf tere pass do raaste hai....ya to kalyani ko raste se hataana jiska matlb hai ki uski maut......ya fir malhar ke dil m kalyani ke liye itni nafrat bharna ki kbhi dono ek dusre ka chehra bhi dekhna na pasand kre......par ye sb akele to hoga nhi.....ek minute kalyai ke baba ko agar kidnap kr liya jaaye to.....par milenge kaha pta nhi kaha gayab ho gya hai....unhe kidnap krwa lungi to kalyani fir mere ungliyon par naachegi.... Fir use kamzor krke.....main ban jaungi......she smirked saying that.... 

Par ketki kisi ki madad to lagegi hi tujhe.....kisi ko kire to krna pdega.....or ab to ye kalyani ki bhi nazar mujhpar rahegi.....par kbtak.....pta nhi kb use koi bula le..... Kuch hi din to lagenge.....kehte hai na sabr ka fal mitha hota hai par mujhe ye fal abhi chahiye......kalyani sidhe sidhe Malhar ki zindagi se chali jao varna mujhe nikalna bhi aata hai or esa nikalu gi ki vapas aane ka kbhi sochogi bhi nhi......kisi ki to help leni hogi.....

Saying this she tears a photo of kalyani and malhar which parted them..... Malhar taiyar ho jao apne naye aashiq se milne ke liye.....main tumhe bohot pyar krungi i hope ki tum mujhe reject na kro or kr bhi nhi skte i am talented than kalyani.......tumhari baahein sirf mere liye hi khulenegi or mujhe tak hi rahegi... kisi or ka inpe koi haq nhi hai....tumhare liye kuch bhi malhar.....kuch bhi....malhar se shaadi.....haayee kya haseen sapne dekhti hu na main bhi....pr kyu n dekhu.....bohot jald i am going to be MRS.MALHAR RANE 

Saying this she goes to her bed and closes her eyes ..... 



HOW WAS THE CHAPTER GUYS???? 

Yes vanshu....you were right ye ketki ka hi track hai....

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Wow superb chapter πŸ‘ŒπŸ˜.

Kalyani aur ketki ka face - off πŸ˜€ .

How boldly kalyani challenged her😎πŸ”₯😘.

Malhar 😍, he caught her lying & told her how bad she's at lyingπŸ₯°πŸ˜˜.

Kalyani after hearing Mrs. Rane for herself from him " main hi  hoon aur kon hoga" πŸ€©πŸ˜‡ and other side ketki chudail is planning to become Mrs. Malhar rane😀😑.

Ye ketki kiski help legi Malhar aur kalyani ko dur krne k liyeπŸ€”?? Shayad samtharv ki 🀨 wahi dono hai ek kalma k dushman aur kon haiπŸ™„πŸ˜.

Waiting for your next update ⏳☺️.

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Full on masaledaar update hai Praku. Can't wait for next update.