Raghvi ff: Their little world (part 18.9 on pg 24) Sept 16

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Hello everyone, Iam new to IF like its been two months since I have joined and Iam watching MHRW since the beginning and I really like this show, and I have also read and loved most of the fanfictions and so from a long time wanted to write my own. And as you all know the current track is really giving us a headache so hope this might soothe you a bit. So please enjoy.

Part 1

It was morning time in the Deshmukh's house and everyone else were doing their usual thing when suddenly Pallavi came out with her luggage seeing this Vijay Deshmukh and everyone else were a bit surprised.

Vijay stood up from the chair, "Pallavi tum kaha jaa rahi ho". And Pallavi who was already irritated with all things that were happening said "Kaha jaa rahi ho ka kya matlab hai baba mai apne ghar hi jaaungi na".

Sulochana who was not expecting Pallavi to go back this soon, "par Pallavi Mandar..." before she could finish her sentence Pallavi interrupted "par var kuch nhi kaku mujhe yaha aaye hue 3 hafthe ho gaye hai, mai apne pati aur meri family ko chodke aur zyada yaha nhi rukh sakti hu aur rahi baat Mandar ki..", this time Mandar interrupted her "Pallavi tum kaha jaa rahi ho". Pallavi turned around to see Mandar all dumbstruck "Mandar mai apne ghar jaa rahi hu".

Mandar's dreams were all shattered when he heard Pallavi is going back as he thought that Pallavi might stay with him forever. Mandar became furious, raising his voice a bit he shouted, "Nahi tum yaha se nahi jaa sakti ho Pallavi, tum jaanthi ho na ki tumhare wajah se hi mujhe apni khoyi hui yaadash vapas mil rahi hai ".

Pallavi sighed, "Dekho Mandar past ko yaad karke koi fayada nhi hai ab aur rahi baat memories ki toh aap abhi bhi memories bana sakte hai.

Sharda who was happy to see that her pallu was taking a stand, supported her, "Mandar pallu sahi toh keh rahi hai, dekho purani baato ko yaad karna zaruri nhi hai.

Pallavi smiled at her aayi.

Meanwhile Farad came in, "bhabhi chale kya gadi tayar hai". "Jaa pallu Raghav tera intazaar kar raha hoga", Sharda spoke before Mandar could do/say something.

Farhad took Pallavi's luggage while she took her handbag and exited the deshmukh house. Mandar clenched his fist as he couldn't do anything.

While Raghav was leaning infornt of the car thinking hard whether that bina address ka envelope would do something again and if Pallavi changed her mind.

Raghav came out of his trance of thoughts when suddenly Pallavi came in front of him "Raghav". Raghav was surprised "Pallavi tum yaha, matlab tum aa raha hai na mere sath?".

Pallavi who was already tired with all the questioning angrily asked "yeh sabko kya ho gaya hai, har koi mujhse puch raha hai kaha jaa rahi ho, kyu jaa rahi ho ,tum aa rahi ho ya nhi, isse toh acha hai ki mai sanyas leke Himalaya jaao.

"Nhi" Raghav bursted out. Meanwhile Farhad and Pallavi started giggling. She softly hugged Raghav and said, "ab chale". Raghav nodded in a yes and opened the door for Pallavi. And both of them drove away to their RR mansion with Farhad.

Now it's been 1 year and 8 months since Mandar came back. In Deshmukh's house everyone was busy as it was Milind's birthday. Amrutha and Mansi were busy decorating the house with balloons and other stuff, while Sulochana was painting her nails as usual and Sharda was busy in the kitchen preparing Milind's favorite dishes , Mandar and Vijay were in their respective rooms while Milind was outside.

When suddenly a car which had bold RR initials stopped in front of their house. Raghav came out with full swag removing his sunglasses. Pallavi who was still in the car annoyingly called out to him "Raghav!!!". Raghav turned around to see his wife getting irritated rushed to her side and opened the door "sorry voh mai swag ke chakkar mai bhul gaya". Pallavi sighing came out of the car with their little bundle of joy their daughter Khushi who was clinging to her mother and was sleeping peacefully.

Raghav carefully took Khushi in his arms while the latter was still sleeping. Pallavi took out her handbag and Khushi's bag (which she carries around everywhere whenever she is with her) from the car.

Raghav and Pallavi went inside. Pallavi was happy to see all the decorations. When suddenly Amruta shouted "Pallavi aur Raghav aa gaye hai". Raghav who was surprised whispered to Pallavi "yeh kya pehle raja ke darbaar main kaam karti thi kya". Pallavi signaled him to shut his mouth. Mandar also came out of his burrow and creepily smiled seeing Pallavi while Raghav was not at all pleased and clenched his fist.

With all the sound Khushi woke up and started crying. Hearing her cry Vijay also came out of his room because even though he didn't like Raghav but strangely he liked Khushi as she resembled her mother with her doe eyes and silky hair, she really looked like mini Pallavi.

Raghav slowly patted her head and she stoped crying, rubbing her eyes with her small hands she opened her eyes to see new people around her as Pallavi only once brought her in deshmukh house when she was a baby.

Khushi scratching her head not knowing who they were clinged to her daddy while laying her head against his shoulder.

Will be Continued...

Part 2 Part 3 Part 4 Part 5 Part 6 Part 7 Part 8 Part 9 Part 10 Part 11 Part 12 Part 13.1 Part 13.2 Part 14 Part 15.1 Part 15.2 Part 16 Part 17 Part 18 Part 18.9

Edited by Monster08 - 3 years ago

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Two lines had me like 🤣

Swag k chakkar me bhul gya

ye phle Raja k darbar me kaam krti ti kya

Edited by nikkiGarg - 3 years ago
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This was a good start❤️

Please continue soon😳

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Amazing update

Continue soon

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Part 2

Pallavi smiled at her daughter's confusion.

Amruta who was filling the air in the balloons left everything and ran towards Khushi, Raghav who was surprised took some steps back, "daro mat Raghav mai tho Khushi baby se milne aa rahi thi", "aise kaun aatha hai" Raghav asked while still surprised.

Khushi turned around to see Amruta,

Amruta took Khushi's small hands, and asked her "Khushi baby aapko mai yaad hu", Khushi who was still confused now turned around to Raghav and cutely said "Dadda" as though she was asking his help.

Everyone else who heard that went like 'awwwwww'. They all thought how can someone's voice be this cute.

Pallavi breaking their awww moment told Amruta that she might not remember her as she was too small.

Just then Vijay came from behind and tried to pinch Khushi's cheeks, irritated Khushi bit him, everyone got surprised while Raghav was trying to hold his laughter.

"Khushi!!!" Pallavi called out to her angrily. Khushi in annoyance turned her face from Pallavi and again rested her head against Raghav's shoulder.

"Relax Pallavi and relax sanki sasur, voh kya hai na meri beti ko mere aalawa aur koi aadmi usse touch kare ye pasand nhi hai", still holding his laughter Raghav said.

Vijay didn't say anything back and disappointed went back to his room thinking why did he came outside. And Mandar also went back to his room.

Meanwhile Pallavi took Raghav aside and angrily but softly asked him whether he was the one who taught her that, "haan maine hi sikhaya hai ye sab Khushi ko mai roz raat ko sanki buddhe ka photo Khushi ke paas leke jata tha aur usse bolta tha ki jab bhi ye mile toh isse kat lena (taking a pause Raghav asked), tumhara crack abhi tak fill nhi hua kya Pallavi". "Mai crack hu toh tum pagal ho" Pallavi said angrily.

Khushi who was listening to their banter said "Dadda pagal hai". Hearing that Pallavi started giggling. Raghav was getting annoyed "bas karo pura life ka hasi aaj hi khatam kar dogi kya".

And before Pallavi could say something Raghav asked her, "Pallavi hum yaha kaiko aaya hai uss Bada Bhindi ka ghulam ka birthday celebrate karne na". "KAKA" Pallavi stressed out in saying that. "Haan vohi, toh kidhar hai voh?". Pallavi looked around and signaled Amruta to come and asked her where Milind is and she said he went outside and will be back soon. Not seeing Sharda around Pallavi also asked where aayi is and she signaled towards the kitchen, "baba ke favorite dishes bana rahi hai". "Acha mai bhi jaake unki help karti hu" Pallavi said happily, but then suddenly looked at Raghav and was thinking whether he could take care of Khushi, while Raghav understood and nodded in a yes. Before Pallavi went she gave that big bag which had all the necessities of Khushi to Raghav.

Raghav went outside and sat on the chair and placed the bag on the table while making Khushi comfortable on his lap.

Khushi was busy playing with one of her toy's and he was busy scrolling through his phone and checking emails and messages.

After some time Mandar came outside and sat in front of Raghav. Annoyingly Raghav looked up and forced a smile, "phata hua envelope tu ab bhi yahi rehta hai".

Mandar ignoring his taunt shifted his focus to the baby girl. "Khushi" he called out as sweetly as possible. Khushi looked up and then down and again started playing with her toy while royally ignoring Mandar.

Mandar was now getting annoyed "tumne Khushi ko sikhaya nhi hai kya ki koi usse baat kare toh usse jawab dete hai".

"Meri beti ko kuch sikhane ki zarurat nhi hothi, voh khud sikh jaati hai" Raghav said that with a big smile on his face.

"Dekh Raghav, Pallavi ne teri beti ko janam diya hai iska matlab yeh nahi..." before he could finish, Raghav interrupted in between "aye khali khopadi ek baat dyaan se sunn agar meri duniya Pallavi se shuru hoti hai toh uski duniya mujpe khatam hota hai, Ardhamayinda.

Will be continued....

Edited by Monster08 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Lovely yaar

Such a nice story..

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Lovely just what is needed.....keep updating

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Amazing 😍😍 waiting for next part

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Thank You so much.

Will update soon.

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So nice. Loved it.

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