Raghvi ff: Their little world (part 18.9 on pg 24) Sept 16 - Page 2

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This was beautiful chapter

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Khushi Pallu jaise dikhti hogi but harkantein Raghav jaisi🤣

this was cute

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Such a hilarious update

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Raghav Rao as always charming with his witty remarks.

Can't imagine Raghav as daddy šŸ˜‚šŸ˜‚

Amazing read šŸ‘šŸ»

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Raghav Rao 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Hilarious update with Raghav's own little revenge against sanki sasur.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Part 3

Taking a deep sigh Raghav started talking, "Tu tired nhi hota kya Pallavi ka naam jab kar, dekh meri baat sunn ek ladki se shadi karle kyuki dou teen salo mai tere danth gir jaaenge phir koi tujhe mud ke bhi nhi dekhega phir bolna nhi Raghav tu ne bola nhi" Mandar got annoyed.

Then they staring at eachother for a long time as though they were having a competition.

"Agar mera accident nhi hota tho shayad ye beti meri hothi". Mandar started with his tricks again to make Raghav insecure.

Raghav as calm as usual said, "So sad" while having a big smile on his face.

On the other hand Khushi was getting bored, she slid from Raghav's lap to the floor and slowly started walking inside the house, wobbling as she was almost a year old but not that expert in walking.

Before Mandar could say anything else,

Raghav went behind his daughter, "kaha jaa raha hai", softly holding her arm Raghav asked.

"Mumma" came from her little mouth.

Mandar was again ignored, he started getting irritated and went outside.

Raghav still holding his daughter said "Thike mai tumhe leke chalta hai" he picked her up, but she wanted to walk on her own she struggled and again slid down from her father's hands. Khushi again started walking and again Raghav stopped her, "Khushi... baby tum chalega tho gir jaayega, acha thike Dadda ka ungli pakad lo sath mai jaaenge".

Meanwhile Amruta came there, "kya hua Raghav Khushi kaha jana chahathi hai".

"Pallavi ke paas" Raghav said tiredly still trying to hold her. "Toh mai leke chali jati hu" Amruta said. Raghav looked at Khushi while Khushi looked at Raghav, and Amruta gave her index finger to Khushi, "toh chale Khushi", Khushi first hesitated then grabbed her finger from her small hand and started walking. Raghav was smiling at his daughter who was trying to walk.

Raghav went back outside to see Mandar vanished, not like he cared. He sat on the chair and again started scrolling through his phone.

Meanwhile Pallavi was busy cutting onions, when suddenly a cute voice came from behind "Mumma". Pallavi looked behind to see her little munchkin trying to walk with Amruta's help. Khushi left Amruta's finger and started walking towards Pallavi, she soon came and clung to her mother's legs looking up telling her to lift her while Amruta left from there to continue the decoration work.

Pallavi understood her "Khushi mumma aapko abhi nhi utha sakti'', she said that while wiping her tears. Seeing that Kushi tried to exit walking faster falling here and there she somehow reached Raghav. Raghav who was on the phone with one of his clients excused himself and disconnected the call when he saw his daughter walking towards him, Khushi grabbed his long fingers and started pulling them signaling him that she wanted to go inside the house again.

"Kya hua, jab help offer kiya tha tabi nhi chahiye tha, bilkul maa pe gaya hai", Raghav said that while lifting her up and went inside the house, Khushi pointed her finger towards the kitchen and Raghav took her there.

Raghav stood there with Khushi and saw that Pallavi was wiping her tears and he placed Khushi down and rushed towards his wife cupping her face "Pallavi tum ro kyu raha hai tumhe chot laga hai kya, ya kisi ne kuch kaha tumse (taking a pause in between) zarur voh bada bhindi rahega aaj toh uska bhindi ka pura stock pekh dega mai..." before he could say anything else Pallavi slightly smacked Raghav."Ouch, kya kar raha hai tum".

"Tum kya bakwas kar rahe ho", asked Pallavi who was frowning.

While Raghav was confused, Pallavi sighed "mai ro nahi rahi hu bas onion kat rahi thi, tum bhi na Raghav choti si baat ka batangad bana dete ho".

Raghav pulled her close still cupping her face "tum choti baat nhi ho Pallavi tum meri zindagi ho" hearing that Pallavi's eyes started swelling up from tears.

"Wapas onion ke aansu aa rahe hai kya" Raghav said that while being serious. She again smacked him, "veda manus" and was getting embarrassed.

Now Raghav felt like someone was pushing him away from Pallavi when he looked down he saw Khushi struggling to do so to get attention. Pallavi started giggling. Raghav lifted Kushi in his arms Khushi tightly hugged him. Pallavi kissed her daughter seeing her cute antics. While Raghav also asked for the same Pallavi hesitated first then looked around to see if anyone was there and gave a sweet kiss to his forehead.

All this was getting witnessed by Mandar who was standing behind the wall, getting furious and was clenching his fist, he started plotting to get Raghav and Pallavi separated again while in the background 'tum mere ho' song was playing. Milind came there and switched off the music player "bapre kitna ajeeb gaana hai", breaking Mandar's chain of thoughts. Milind looked up to see Mandar hiding behind the wall and asked "kya hua Mandar tu itna darawana smile kyu de raha hai". "Kuch nhi voh mai...." stuttering he somehow excused himself from there and went straight to his room.

Hearing Milind's voice Pallavi came outside and hugged him saying "Happy Birthday kaka".

Will be continued...

P.S While watching the show I just wanted someone to switch off that 'tum mere ho' song. Ah it was so frustrating to hear that everytime. So just added that element for fun.

Hope you enjoyed.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Such a lovely update...just loved it...waiting for Mandar kaand

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This was a laugh riot.


Aww! Khushi's so cute, she went to get her Father when she thought her Mumma was hurt😳


switched off the music player "bapre kitna ajeeb gaana hai", breaking Mandar's chain of thoughts. Milind looked up to see Mandar hiding behind the wall and asked "kya hua Mandar tu itna darawana smile kyu de raha hai". "Kuch nhi voh mai...." stuttering

I was ROFLing so hard when I read this🤣🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago
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tum mere ho ka raaz finally revealed..this was so funny especially the end aww..khushi

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Absolutely loved all three parts and I loved the last scene of the third part the most 🤣 thank God, Milind Kaka has a good taste in music šŸ˜† Amazing story!! Eagerly waiting for your next update

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