Raghvi ff: Their little world (part 18.9 on pg 24) Sept 16 - Page 6

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Posted: 3 years ago
#51

What kind of behavior was that n how foolish n selfish keerti could be that she can't see the jerk of a boyfriend she has n how violent n mannerless he became in someone else house in such a minor matter.Hope to read amma giving earful to keerti in next update n showing sunny his actual place n reprimanding him to show his so called attitude in some other place rather than their house 🏡 huff!!!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Part 7

Khushi was still crying. Amma was about to go to the kitchen when Raghav called her. "Amma..voh appko batana bhul gaya tha mai aaj raat ko..." He stopped as he could hear Khushi crying. "Amma Khushi ro raha hai kya?" Raghav asked worriedly, as he has never heard Khushi crying so loudly.

"voh Keerti ke Sunny ka meharbani" amma blurted out in annoyance and then she realized she shouldn't have told this to him. Raghav asked what happened. "Kuch nhi Raghav.....voh...bas" amma started stuttering as she was thinking what to say. "Amma" Raghav said furiously and amma could feel that he was angry. Amma slowly started narrating the whole incident.

Raghav and Farhad had already reached the showroom. "Farhad gadi ghuma" Raghav said to Farhad as he disconnected the call. Farhad was confused "par anna..." before Farhad could say anything else Raghav furiously looked at Farhad. "Ji anna" Farhad said, as he knew something was wrong.

Sunny was driving when Keerti called him "kya hai Keerti" Sunny responded. "Sunny tum kaha ho? aur tum mera phone kyu nhi utha rahe the?" Keerti started asking him various questions. Sunny was getting annoyed with all the questions "dekho Keerti mera mood bohat kharab hai...isliye tum mujhse kuch na hi pucho tho accha hai" Sunny answered. Keerti was getting sad "Sunny maine kya kiya" before Sunny could respond he saw a car standing in front of him.

He stepped on the brakes and luckily nothing happened "Ayy dikhayi nhi deta kya...bich sadak mai.." Sunny started shouting but before he could finish his sentence he saw Raghav coming out.

Raghav walked in front of his car and slowly leaned on his car's bonnet and furiously stared at Sunny.

While from the other end Keerti was trying to get through him "hello...Sunny....". Sunny disconnected the call and came out of his car. He also came and stood in front of his car and rudely asked "kya natak hai yeh sab". Raghav didn't budge.

When suddenly the incident clicked on Sunny's mind and he knew why Raghav is here "oh let me guess...teri biwi ne tujhse meri shikayat ki hogi..right" Sunny spoke.

Raghav came forward while his eyes were blood red with anger. "Kya hua gussa aa raha hai...but please gussa karna nhi" Sunny said while smiling.

He again tried to provoke him "voh kya hai na tumhari behen mujhse palglo jaisa pyaar karti hai...aur agar usse pata chal gaya ki uska bhai uske boyfriend ko...voh toh tera raato ka neend kharab kar degi yaar".

Raghav was calm even though his face was clearly showing that he wants to murder him but he controlled himself. Raghav too smiled back and spoke "jab tak tere paas Keerti ke naam ka VIP ticket hai tab tak tu azzad hai...lekin jab Keerti khud tujhse voh ticket le lega na...tab tu murdabad hai" as Raghav said that Sunny's smile vanished.

Raghav walked close to Sunny and spoke "sunn bay joker...apna circus ka kartab kayi aur karna...mere ghar mai nhi hona....aur haan agli baar meri beti ke taraf ankh uthake bhi dekha na tu ne...tera ticket mai khud paad dega...uske baad tu apna warranty bhul jaana" Raghav said while trying to control his anger.

Sunny took some steps back and his mouth went dry in fear. Raghav knew if he stood there for a bit more long he would beat Sunny to a pulp. So before he could loose his control Raghav went away.

Now Raghav and Farhad were on the middle of the road. Raghav was getting more and more angry and Farhad was trying to calm him "anna shant ho jayiye" Farhad said while he was driving. "Uska himmat kaisa hua meri beti..." Raghav was really furious and he banged his hand on the door of the car.

While in RR mansion, Khushi had calmed down and she was drinking her milk on amma's lap while amma was sipping her coffee. Pallavi was in the kitchen. "Dudda" Khushi said, and amma looked up to see Raghav walking in through the main door, Farhad was also behind. He genytly smiled at Khushi. Khushi lifted her hands towards Raghav and he lifted her up and caressed her cheeks wiping off her tears which left trails. Khushi was talking to him in baby language while Raghav's anger was slowly going down hearing her voice.

Pallavi came outside "amma voh.." she wanted to ask something to amma when she got surprised to see Raghav there. "Raghav tum yaha...aaj showroom se bohat jaldi aa gaye" Pallavi asked.

To be continued.....

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Posted: 3 years ago
#53

Such a lovely update just loved it

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Posted: 3 years ago
#54

Loved it..

Waiting for the next part.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#55

When you are going to post next part?

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: arohi1234

When you are going to post next part?

Will update soon😊

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Part 8

Raghav was caught off gaurd as he didn't think what to say as an excuse that's when Farhad bombarded, "Nhi bhabhi, anna toh showroom gaye hi nhi" Raghav glared at him and Farhad knew his end time is near. Meanwhile Khushi got down from Raghav's arms and went to amma.

Farhad was now looking down as he didn't wanted to make an eye contact with Raghav who was shooting laser beams at him. "Kyu?" Pallavi asked looking at Farhad. "Voh bhabhi.." and before Farhad could answer her any lame excuse Raghav interrupted "voh kyunki bhabhi ke chamche ne...." but after saying that he again started thinking what to say next. "Aage bolo" Pallavi said as she was getting suspicious. "Haan bol raha hu pehle sochne tho dho" Raghav whispered to himself. "Kya...soch kya" Pallavi asked.

"Documents!!...documents bhul gaya tha...Farhad...hai na Farhad" Raghav said looking at him. Farhad looked at his boss and thought now he can be saved and played along with him "Haan bhabhi....voh documents bhul gaya tha mai". That's when Keerti suddenly came in huffing "yeh kya harkat hai Pallavi..Khushi ke vajah se..." before she could say anything else she saw Raghav standing there staring at her. "Bhai aap yaha?" Keerti asked while being cautious. "Haan voh mai zaruri kaam ke liye aaya....tum kuch Pallavi aur Khushi ke baare mai bol raha tha" Raghav asked. She started stuttering "Voh...kuch nhi bhai...bas...merko kuch kaam hai...mai room mai jaa rahi hu" and in a lighting speed went to her room.

Amma was feeding Khushi when she suddenly remembered "arey Raghav tu phone mai kuch keh raha tha...aaj raat ko..".

"Haan amma voh mera ek old client ka ek function hai...aur voh chahatha hai ki mai puri family ke sath aaye" Raghav said to amma. "Accha thike hum sab ready ho jaayenge...tu time pe aa jana" amma said. "Haan amma...mai time pe aa jayega" after saying that Raghav started leaving when Pallavi stopped him "ruko...documents kaun lega".

"Documents....kaunsa docu..." Raghav was about to blurt out when he looked at Farhad "documents...Farhad jaa..jaake leke aa". "Haan..anna..abhi lata hu" Farhad said and while leaving he whispered to himself "ek din anna meri bali zarur chadayenge".

Pallavi was staring at Raghav suspiciously seeing that Raghav came close to her and whispered "kya hua..kiss chahiye". Pallavi blushed hearing that "Raghav...tum.." before she could say any further Khushi came slowly walking and wobbling. She came and clinged to Pallavi's legs and said "mumma..I...lub..you". Pallavi and Raghav were surprised, Pallavi lifted her up. "Khushi...baby phirse bolo" Raghav asked.

"I....." Khushi said that and stopped while Raghav and Pallavi were waiting for her to say. "Khushi aage bolo" now Pallavi asked but she started talking in her baby language. That's when Farhad came down from the study room "anna documents mil gaya".

"Haan" Raghav then kissed Khushi's forehead and sneakily kissed Pallavi's cheeks when Farhad and amma was not looking and went away.

While in deshmukh house Mandar was rocking on the rocking chair. He was lost in his thoughts that his plans, his plots every single thing was being wasted. His biggest shock was when Raghav came with full 'band baja' to inform the deshmukh's about Pallavi's pregnancy. His plan to get Pallavi back got ruined with her pregnancy and he couldn't do anything as Raghav took Pallavi away somewhere for the whole 9 months where he couldn't even reach and he only brought her Hyderabad after Khushi's birth. That's when he suddenly gets a call "thike aa raha hu" Mandar responds and disconnects.

Slowly it became night and in Raghav's house Pallavi was instructing Naidu what all to bring for the grocery. While Raghav came in after his work "Pallavi tum abhi tak taiyaar nhi hua...jaldi jaao hume jaana hai".

"Haan Raghav jaa rahi hu...." Pallavi was saying when suddenly her phone started ringing and the person calling was Mandar.

To be continued...

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Posted: 3 years ago
#58

Lovely update.

Lagta hai mandar kuch karne wala hai.

I hope Raghav sambhal le.

Waiting for next part.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#59

Very interesting update

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Posted: 3 years ago
#60

Yeh Mandaar pakka kuch gadbad karega ab

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