Raghvi ff: Their little world (part 18.9 on pg 24) Sept 16 - Page 3

Omg. Just beautiful 😍

Khushi is perfect combination of Raghav n Pallavi 💞......such a cutie pie.

Loved it man!!! So sweet! But last part epic tha! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

All three parts were absolutely perfect!!👏

I loved how Raghav had a different nickname for Mandar in every part! Solid bezzati with the RR swag of course😎

And Khushi is soo cute! The perfect combo of both Raghav and Pallavi!🤗

I love how everyone in his family is inadvertently foils Mandar's plans🤣 Kaka's entry in the end was hilarious😆

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I came back to read this just so I could laugh out loud at "baap re... kitna ajeeb gaana hai". I could totally imagine hearing this from Milind with full expressions and all! 🤣🤣🤣

Love this little world of RaghVi and how Khushi has taken after both her parents in interesting ways! Can't wait to read more! ❤️

Originally posted by: Monster08

Part 3

Taking a deep sigh Raghav started talking, "Tu tired nhi hota kya Pallavi ka naam jab kar, dekh meri baat sunn ek ladki se shadi karle kyuki dou teen salo mai tere danth gir jaaenge phir koi tujhe mud ke bhi nhi dekhega phir bolna nhi Raghav tu ne bola nhi" Mandar got annoyed.

Then they staring at eachother for a long time as though they were having a competition.

"Agar mera accident nhi hota tho shayad ye beti meri hothi". Mandar started with his tricks again to make Raghav insecure.

Raghav as calm as usual said, "So sad" while having a big smile on his face.

On the other hand Khushi was getting bored, she slid from Raghav's lap to the floor and slowly started walking inside the house, wobbling as she was almost a year old but not that expert in walking.

Before Mandar could say anything else,

Raghav went behind his daughter, "kaha jaa raha hai", softly holding her arm Raghav asked.

"Mumma" came from her little mouth.

Mandar was again ignored, he started getting irritated and went outside.

Raghav still holding his daughter said "Thike mai tumhe leke chalta hai" he picked her up, but she wanted to walk on her own she struggled and again slid down from her father's hands. Khushi again started walking and again Raghav stopped her, "Khushi... baby tum chalega tho gir jaayega, acha thike Dadda ka ungli pakad lo sath mai jaaenge".

Meanwhile Amruta came there, "kya hua Raghav Khushi kaha jana chahathi hai".

"Pallavi ke paas" Raghav said tiredly still trying to hold her. "Toh mai leke chali jati hu" Amruta said. Raghav looked at Khushi while Khushi looked at Raghav, and Amruta gave her index finger to Khushi, "toh chale Khushi", Khushi first hesitated then grabbed her finger from her small hand and started walking. Raghav was smiling at his daughter who was trying to walk.

Raghav went back outside to see Mandar vanished, not like he cared. He sat on the chair and again started scrolling through his phone.

Meanwhile Pallavi was busy cutting onions, when suddenly a cute voice came from behind "Mumma". Pallavi looked behind to see her little munchkin trying to walk with Amruta's help. Khushi left Amruta's finger and started walking towards Pallavi, she soon came and clung to her mother's legs looking up telling her to lift her while Amruta left from there to continue the decoration work.

Pallavi understood her "Khushi mumma aapko abhi nhi utha sakti'', she said that while wiping her tears. Seeing that Kushi tried to exit walking faster falling here and there she somehow reached Raghav. Raghav who was on the phone with one of his clients excused himself and disconnected the call when he saw his daughter walking towards him, Khushi grabbed his long fingers and started pulling them signaling him that she wanted to go inside the house again.

"Kya hua, jab help offer kiya tha tabi nhi chahiye tha, bilkul maa pe gaya hai", Raghav said that while lifting her up and went inside the house, Khushi pointed her finger towards the kitchen and Raghav took her there.

Raghav stood there with Khushi and saw that Pallavi was wiping her tears and he placed Khushi down and rushed towards his wife cupping her face "Pallavi tum ro kyu raha hai tumhe chot laga hai kya, ya kisi ne kuch kaha tumse (taking a pause in between) zarur voh bada bhindi rahega aaj toh uska bhindi ka pura stock pekh dega mai..." before he could say anything else Pallavi slightly smacked Raghav."Ouch, kya kar raha hai tum".

"Tum kya bakwas kar rahe ho", asked Pallavi who was frowning.

While Raghav was confused, Pallavi sighed "mai ro nahi rahi hu bas onion kat rahi thi, tum bhi na Raghav choti si baat ka batangad bana dete ho".

Raghav pulled her close still cupping her face "tum choti baat nhi ho Pallavi tum meri zindagi ho" hearing that Pallavi's eyes started swelling up from tears.

"Wapas onion ke aansu aa rahe hai kya" Raghav said that while being serious. She again smacked him, "veda manus" and was getting embarrassed.

Now Raghav felt like someone was pushing him away from Pallavi when he looked down he saw Khushi struggling to do so to get attention. Pallavi started giggling. Raghav lifted Kushi in his arms Khushi tightly hugged him. Pallavi kissed her daughter seeing her cute antics. While Raghav also asked for the same Pallavi hesitated first then looked around to see if anyone was there and gave a sweet kiss to his forehead.

All this was getting witnessed by Mandar who was standing behind the wall, getting furious and was clenching his fist, he started plotting to get Raghav and Pallavi separated again while in the background 'tum mere ho' song was playing. Milind came there and switched off the music player "bapre kitna ajeeb gaana hai", breaking Mandar's chain of thoughts. Milind looked up to see Mandar hiding behind the wall and asked "kya hua Mandar tu itna darawana smile kyu de raha hai". "Kuch nhi voh mai...." stuttering he somehow excused himself from there and went straight to his room.

Hearing Milind's voice Pallavi came outside and hugged him saying "Happy Birthday kaka".

Will be continued...

P.S While watching the show I just wanted someone to switch off that 'tum mere ho' song. Ah it was so frustrating to hear that everytime. So just added that element for fun.

Hope you enjoyed.

this had me laughing like crazy … literally koi to bnd kr do ye record player… your comic timing is very good…

Part 4

Milind was surprised and happy.While from behind Raghav also came and wished him.

Milind looked up to see Khushi who was a mini replica of Pallavi. "Arey Khushi tu kitni badi ho gayi hai jab yaha pehli baar aayi thi tab itnu si thi" he said that while trying to touch her cheeks. "Nhi!!!" Both Raghav and Pallavi tried to warn him. But they said that after Milind lightly pulled her cheeks. Milind took some steps back "kya hua". Raghav and Pallavi looked at Khushi as she didn't do anything, but after a while she leaned over to Milind and pulled his hair "Ahhhh" came from Milind's mouth. Then Khushi started talking in baby language to Milind.

"Voh shayad tumko balo ka tips dera hoga" said Raghav while looking at a confused Milind.

From behind, Mansi came and took Milind from there for some work.

Khushi again slid down from Raghav's arms to the floor and started walking towards Amruta to play with the ballons. Pallavi went back to the kitchen and here Raghav got a call and he went outside.

While Mandar was waiting for an opportunity to get Pallavi alone, he went in the kitchen to talk to her. Seeing Mandar there Pallavi was a bit uncomfortable but she hid that. Mandar went ahead and asked "Pallavi tum kaisi ho".

"Mai theek hu aap kaise ho" Pallavi said that while she was stirring the kheer. "Tum mera phone kyu nhi utha thi ho aur aajkal tum yaha bhi nhi aa rahi ho" Mandar asked while trying to be innocent.

"Mandar mai ek maa hu, mai Khushi ko akela chodke kahi nhi jaati hu aur rahi baat phone ki toh mai usse rak ke kahi bhi bhul jaati hu", Pallavi said that with a smile.

"Oh.. mujhe laga ki Raghav ne tumhe mana kiya" Mandar spoke trying to instigate her against Raghav.

Pallavi left a small sigh, and was about to reply when suddenly a sound came and after the sound Sulochana shouting Khushi's name came. Pallavi switched of the gas and tried to rush towards Khushi when Mandar grabbed her hand and said "Pallavi bacchi hai, yaha waha khelte samay kuch gir gaya hoga aur mujhe tumse kuch important baat karni hai", as he didn't wanted anyone to disturb their private talk.

After some time Pallavi heard Khushi crying, with a stern voice Pallavi spoke "dekhiye Mandar meri bacchi ko meri zarurat hai, aur abhi meri bacchi se zyada important aur kuch nahi hai" she said that while jerking away her hand from his grip which made Mandar even more furious.

Meanwhile Khushi was in Mandar's room, at first she was analyzing the room then she saw a photo of her mother. She tried to reach to the photo frame but she couldn't as she was too small. Then she saw a cloth which was hanging from the table, she pulled that and the cloth came down and with that the photo frame also came down and crashed onto the floor.

Amruta and Sulochana and the rest came running that's when Sulochana shouted "Khushi", shortly after that Raghav also came from behind and seeing that the glass of the frame was shattered on the floor he lifted up Khushi in his arms and checked whether she got hurt. After confirming she didn't he took a sigh of relief.

While Sulochana started with her taunts "harkathe dekho iss ladki ki, pata nhi aage jaake kya karegi". Khushi started crying after hearing Sulochana's voice.

"Ayyy bada bhindi meri beti ke samne..awaaz niche" Raghav said that with a warning tone. Sulochana got scared and took some steps back, that's when Pallavi came in running while Khushi was still crying. She took Khushi in her arms and started to pacify her by lighly patting her back.

"Kya hua... Khushi ro kyu rahi hai, usse chot tho nahi aayi na" a worried Pallavi asked while checking Khushi. "Nhi Pallavi..Khushi ko kuch nhi hua hai, voh toh galti se usne photo frame ko gira diya aur mom ne..." before Amruta could say anything else Pallavi understood and angrily looked at Sulochana.

Shortly after Mandar also came and he looked at the shattered glass and frame. He looked at it for a while when Vijay shook him called out to him "Mandar" and he suddenly fainted. Raghav whispered to Pallavi "lo ho gayi iski nautanki shuru" While everyone else got worried and was trying to wake him up.

Pallavi was beside Raghav the whole time and Khushi had stopped crying while her head was placed on Pallavi's collar bone, she turned to look at Raghav. While Raghav was like how times is he going to faint until he dies. Sharda came from outside and rushed towards Mandar and asked what happened to him, Vijay was getting worried and Sulochana suggested to call Dr Ramya.

"Uski zarurat nhi hai" said Raghav who took a glass of water when his mind said nahh instead of the glass he took the jar and splashed the whole water on Mandar's face. With a sudden jerk Mandar got up, everyone got happy while Mandar was angrily looking at Raghav who was trying to control his laughter. Khushi also started giggling when Pallavi covered her mouth with her hand.

Will be continued...

"Meri beti ke saamne awaaz niche!"

Raghav as a father is ahhmaayyzing!

Bache mann ke sacche - I love that Khushi can easily sense all the nauu-tanki at D-house. Bilkul apne baap pe gayi hai! 🤗

Can't wait to read more! I love your sense of humour, you incorporate it so well into the story! ❤️

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