Opening up insecurities..!! *part 4* completed

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Pandya niwas was decorated like new bride.

The entrance of the house is decore with flowers and garlands .

Beautiful rangolis has been drawn on the corners of corridors and one large but most important rangoli has been drawn in the bottom with the rainbow colours, flowers and diyas.

The pillars are tangled with fairylights and garlands which makes it look more aesthetic..!!

Colourful curtains has been hang on the corridors and in the middle of aangan their is a huge jhumaar of flowers and lights.

The platform has been set up on which jhula i placed which has velvet base with flowers on the side.

In the corner of platform matkas with beautiful handart is kept to increase the beauty of the view.

All the member of family are happy...

The environment is pleasant and beautiful..!!




New update *part 1* soon...

Till than, take care and stay happy

Love,

S_Verma ❤️





Part 2- page 2


Part 3- page 4


Part 4- page 4

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Itna suspense uffffffffffffff.......wait do ik this or do i not know this

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Originally posted by: Iktara22

Itna suspense uffffffffffffff.......wait do ik this or do i not know this


U knw right thoda thoda🤣

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PART- 1



All the arrangements has been made.

The palki and matkas are decorated and are placed. A basket of flowers and broom is also kept in the carrying bag.

"Goumbi maa ko lekar aajao time ho gya h jane ka" dhara said

"Haan lekar aata hu" he said and went in suman's room.

Suman is all set to leave, he make her sit on the wheelchair.

"Maa yeh teeno bandar ne galat mannat maang li h, 25 km pedal chalkar kese jayenge.." he said in sorrow.

"Aey goumbi mere teeno bete h na ab samajdar ho gye h voh acha bura sab jante h tu bas subh kam m tok mat laga, sab acha hoga sukhi hoga"

"Thk h maa chal"

Dev- rishita arrive she have furiousness on her face as if she had a fight with dev just a moment before, krish, maa goumbi and shiva arrive in the aangan expect raavi.

Dhara looked around and asked

"Aey shiva!! Raavi kaha h??"

"Muje kese pata hoga bhabhi"

"Aree toh kisko pata hoga pati h tu uska, ja jakr bulake aa jaldi"

"Pan bhabhi" he insist

She dare him with eyes..he leave from there and dhara smiles.

"Yeh chipkali bhi na isko kyu jaana h, piddi si toh h itna chlegi toh kahi gayab hi na ho jaye"

He opened the door and raavi turned because of all the suddenness.

He looked at her, she is wearing a yellow saree with red sleeveless blouse completing the look with open hair and accessories.

She averted her gaze, she is happy that he again started noticing her but the situation is against the moment. Her hand is behind the back and she is clucking it again and again. Shiva noticed that but ignored it.

"Aeyy...chipkali bahar sab tera intezaar kar rhe h or tujhe deepika padukone bnna h P.T usha bn na, ab or kitna tyaar hogi.

"Tujhe mei tyaar lag rahi hu shiva"

"Safed chehra laal-laal hoth itni tyaar h ki koi beauty contest jeet jaye"

"Bakwass mat kar tu ja mei..mei aa rahi hu"

"Jaldi aa varna chod kar chle jayenge fr karna somnath ki ser...!!"

She looked at him furiously and with little nervousness.

"Raavi tu bhi na gadhedi h isko bol deti na dhara di ya fr rishita ko bhej deta teri help ke liye.

Ab yeh dori kesi bandhegi akele..." she said and started struggling with it.

Shiva is walking in corridor but stop suddenly after realising something

"Offo, kese bhul gaya"??

He headed towards the room again.

He opened the door and this time he found raavi's struggling with the strings of blouse.

She looked at him and immediately cover herself with hand. He averted his gaze in order not to make her feel uncomfortable.

"Voh..voh mei charger lene aaya tha"

She nodded okay..!!

He opened the cupboard, take the charger and walk away, she turned towards the mirror and tried to untangled the strings which are tangled because of numerous fail.

He stop in between and turned around to look at her

"Yeh gadhedi ka kuch nahi ho skta, sab toh bahar chale bhi gye honge, kya kru iska".

He closed his eyes, take a deep breath and started walking closer to her, she didn't notice that as she is too busy with strings. He stand behind her, raavi sense him and look at him through the mirror.

"M...mei help ka...karu" he asked

Raavi knows she have no other option another than him, she didn't denied him, which make obvious to him that she agree.

He looked at the blouse , the doris are tangled badly.

"This chipakli definitely know nothing" he by himself

Some strands of her hair are resting on back which covered her small mole. His hands shivers a little, he gulped once and slowly make her back roamed by his fingers. She shivers by the touch, the sensation spines down in her body, she closed the eyes , clutches the fist and hold the breath.

He looked at her through the reflection she looks even more beautiful when she is affected by his proximity.

Now shiva also have hard time to control himself. He puts all the hair on one side of shoulder.

The bare back is now clearly visible, the red colour blouse is complimentary her skin tone so well. Raavi open her eyes and looked at him, he looked at her and they both drown in each other eyes for a moment. He grab one string his fingers touched her skin, he grab other one with other hand, and tie them together, she hold her breath harder, which makes her back go into the skin. He grab second string unintentionally again the fingers dance on her back, her heart is bumping out, she is feeling thousands of emotions together. She is happy, nervous and shy at the same time. She cluck her saree, shiva is looking at her continously affectionately.

He tied all the string one by one and every time when his finger touched she feel herself on top of the world. She now couldn't resist all and moaned his named softly "shiva".

He looked at her smiles at little and move closer to her ears.. she shivers when feel his warmth breath on her skin. He stayed in the position for little than whispered "Ho gaya"..!!

He opener her eyes and looked at him through the reflection the candles glowing in front of mirror is making the scene even more aesthetic.

"Tha...thankyou" she said softly and look away.

He smiles and leave the room.

"Shiva kaha reh gaya tha" dhara asked

"Voh...voh bhabhi mei bas ..." shiva said nervously

"Kya hua shiva bata na....kuch khurafati krke aaya h kya" krish teased him

He gave him death glare.

"Bol na shiva"

"Voh..bhabi cha...charger haan charger dhund raha tha" shiva said with forced smile.

Raavi arrive everyone looked at her, she looked at him for a moment, than take the blessing from maa.

"Bau saras lage che" suman said taking ballaiyaan.

"Raavi bhaut pyari dikh rahi h ekdum somnath ki sbse sundar ladki" dhara said

Raavi smiled at her statement.

"Shiva bhabhi kesi lag rahi h" krish asked Shiva

"Chipkaliyon ki beauty queen aaj chayyi hui h" he said with bright smile.

"Ohhooo" krish scream

His scream make him came back on his senses and he realised what he said.

"Yeh krish na" he murmured

"Kya hua krish ese kyu chilaya" everyone asked

"Voh.."

"Voh bhabhi meine isko ek plan btaya h isliye itni zor se khushi m chilaya yeh" Shiva said in between.

"This is too much...!! Ap logo ko jana h toh jao na par muje nahi jana"

"Rishita yeh kya bol rhi ho" said dev trying to cover up

Shiva find this point as opportunity and he didn't want to lose it at any cost.

He said in between

"Arey..!! Dev tu gussa kyu kar raha bhabhi ko nahi jana toh rhene de , raavi h na inke sath ruk jayegi"

Raavi looked at him in shocked...

"Shiva yeh tu kya bol raha h rishita jana pdega sabko" dhara said

"Mei kahi nahi jaungi " rishita said and runs towards the room

Raavi here is arranging the matkas on palki, shiva come and said

"Tu nahi jayegi, bhabhi mei isko apne sath lekar nahi jaunga"

"Kyu shiva, mei jaungi" she said angrily

"Nahi jayegi, mannat meri h mera jana zaruri h tera nahi"

"Shiva...ab tera mera kuch nahi h mannat teri h matlab meri h...agar tu jayega toh mei bhi jaungi that's final..!!"

He is angrily looking at her and said "kitni ziddi h"

Meanwhile dev pacify rishita.

"Bhabhi rishita bhi chlegi" he said with smile..

"Wow matlab ab toh koi bahana nahi h muje saath na lejane ka" raavi said in teasing manner.

Shiva looked at her widened eyes.

"Ab bas bhi karo gurne wala game bd m khel lena" krish said and laughed.

All the member laughed at them and pray

"In dono ke beech sab thik ho jaye"..!!





Hey you lovelies, this is first part of this ff..❤️

Hope you all like it


Love,

S_Verma



Edited by S_Verma - 4 years ago
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Loved it ❤️

Shiva's concern for his phoolkumari 😍

Update the next part soonishhh ❤️

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Can't wait for you two write more ... I have more confidence in you than Shilpa Choubey .. tujhse se toh kamaskam ShiVi ki umeeed rakh sakti hoon😆


Chal ab ache se eik hayyyyaaa dhakka maar ke Raavi ko pahaadi se gira de khaai mein ☺️🤣

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Such a sweet start! ShiVi moment was HOT! ☺️

Shiva can’t ignore Raavi 😆

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Awwwwwsome chapter ❤❤


Cont soon🤗

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Originally posted by: barkhaa_tpm

Can't wait for you two write more ... I have more confidence in you than Shilpa Choubey .. tujhse se toh kamaskam ShiVi ki umeeed rakh sakti hoon😆


Chal ab ache se eik hayyyyaaa dhakka maar ke Raavi ko pahaadi se gira de khaai mein ☺️🤣


Umeed rakho barkhaa bhar bhar ke....sbki umeedein puri ho jayengi🤣

Pahadi mei ya fr jungle u know wht i mean🤣❤️

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PART-2



They all go the temple place take blessing for lord meanwhile anita and mami also arrived.

Anita also bring her matka and claim it to be the mannat matka for suman maa..!!

The pandyas don't like this but didn't utter a word.

The panditji follow the ritual for the matkas and ask them to take the paalki on the shoulder.

Shiva, dev, krish looked at each other and cheer "har har mahadev". They went down and put the paalki on shoulder, the matka are hang with paalki, they are filled with holy water which have to be on lord shiva.

They all are joying walking and chant "har har mahadev" "Jai somnath"

Raavi is dropping flowers on the track and rishita is sweeping it.

Just behind them shiva dev and krish are walking along with suman, dhara, gautam, anita and mami.

Shiva is looking at raavi and she is happy. They all are laughing and giggling together.

"Acha ab jab hum mannat maagne ja hi rhe toh puri toh hogi hi voh for sure , toh kyu na chalte chalte baby ka naam hi decide krle" krish said with excitement

"Haan chal bta kya rakhenge veeru pratap" dev said

" Nahi dev naam lamba hona chahiye " krish said

" lamba toh anaconda pandya rakh le" said shiva

They all laughed at shiva statement.

"Tum sab logo ko kuch nahi pata kitne purane purane naam sochte ho naam toh modern hona chahiye...kyu raavi??"

Raavi who is lost in her thoughts suddenly choked

"Hn..haan bilkul ofcourse modern hi hone chahiye"

She hesitate and looked at shiva who is already looking at him, she started fixing her hair to avoid his gaze.

"Dev hum kya rakhenge apne bacho ka naam" rishita said

"Jo tum bolo" dev said caressing her cheek

"Haan bola dusra petticot chaap bola..." suman said and laughed.

Krish giggled and asked in teasing manner

"Vese shiva and bhabhi apne bhi kuch socha h ya nahi"

"Rudra and Raashi" they both by themselves, smiled, sense something and look at each other, they shared a moment with eyes and look away by realising the surrounding.

He bang krish head "aey gadheda zyda bolega na toh bhaut marunga"

"Arey meine kya galat bola, sb muje hi marte h"

Everyone laughed out hard.

Raavi and rishita exchange the activities, now is sweeping and only short distance is left.

After sometimes raavi feels ache in her waist, she stretch her body in order to get some relief, shiva notice that and felt bad

"Bola na tah meine ki mat aa par yeh gadhedi sunti hi kaha h meri"

She tucked the pallu on her waist and twisted it, in order to feel better but she didn't know what did she do.

She show the piece of flesh to a predator. His eyes fall on her white, skinny, smooth skin. He wanted to grab it and pinch it to tease her.

He had a hard time to control himself but still manage to do it.

He said to divert his mind

"Aey phoolkumari 25kms chalna h sookh ke gir gyi na toh tujhe mei nahi uthane wla"

"Tu meri chinta mat kar shiva...!! Tu bs apna dhyan kar muje kuch nahi hoga or agr gir bhi gyi toh khud jaungi tujhe toh vese bhi dianasour lagti hu na" she said furiously

He smirked at her.

"Tu has kyu raha h" she said making a pout

"Kyu...ab m has bhi nahi sakta"

"Par tu..."

"Aree aree kyu lad rahe ho dekho sab aage nikal gye or tum dono yahi ho jaldi aao vha us dhabe pr bethe h sab" he said and run

Shiva looked at her "chal jaldi"

He walked fastly raavi tries to meet his speed but couldn't . After few seconds he is vanish from her eyes.

She is looking for him suddenly her angle twisted and she fall wincing in pain.

"Shiva" she scream but he couldn't hear.

Shiva reached on dhaba, he stretch his body and take a deep breath.

"Arey shiva" dhara said

"Ji bhabhi"

"Ra..raavi kaha h??"

He got confused with the dhara's question

"Bhabhi aap yeh kya puch rahe ho yahi toh mere...he turned around but raavi was not there.

His heart bumping fast, his throat becomes dry he find difficult in swallowing.

"Shiva raavi kaha h" she asked again

"Aey shiva tu fr lada tha kya raavi se" suman asked

"Bhabhi abhi toh tere sath hi thi fir kaha chali gyi" krish said

Everyone is asking about raavi and doubting him that he did something.

But his mind is in not state to hear them, he dropped the cup of tea and run to find her.

"Hum sab bhi jate h" dev said

"Nahi dev ruk ja shiva gya h na voh lekar aayega raavi ko tum sab fikar mat karo" dhara said

He run run and run...

What if she lands in trouble??

What if someone is teasing her??

What if janardhan no no no...??

She will be fine...she will be fine Shiva...!!

Several thoughts like this is revolving in his mind and he is trying to calm himself.

He reached the place where they were and he noticed raavi sitting on the track with her hands on the ankle.

He immediately stop after looking at her and a smile of relief flashed on his face. Tears dropping from his eyes , he ruffled the hairs.

And starting taking steps towards her, she is crying miserably. She is in so much pain.

He went down and put his hand on her and look at her.

She feel his touch without looking at her. Her heart filled with pleasure, she smiles with tearfull eyes "tu...tu a..aa gya shiva" she murmured and look at her.

He place his hand on her cheeks, cupped it and swipe his tears with thumb.

"Shiva" she said in low tune

He put a finger on her lips, she look at him in shocked. He got up and took her in his arms.

His hand is holding her one hand on waist and other in between the knees. Her hand is tangled around his neck and she is continuously staring at her.

"Shiva tu mujhse kitni bhi dur jane ki koshish kare mujhe mushkil me dekhkar tu aa hi jata h, teri yahi baat toh mujhe achi lagti h, tu apni biwi se bhaut......" she stop in between...realized wht she said moments before and smile.

"Raavi tu yeh kya soch rahi h...doobi" she by herself.

"Kya kuch kaha tune" he asked

She nodded no and just smile.

He make her sit on the bench "has kya rahi h gadhedi dhyan nahi de sakti thi kya"

"Tu muje daant kar raha h dekh na kitna bada accident hogya mera, or tujhe toh mei dianasour lgti thi na ab kese utha liya tune"

"Phoolkumari h tu fookh marenge na udh jayegi ab Bakwass band karegi dikha kaha lagi"

She smile at his statement and forward her leg to show him ankle, he took her leg in his hand and went to check whether there is no swelling or didn't she hurt herself much.

"Matar jesa dimag kiska h na dikh gya" he said massaging her ankle.

His touch create a sensation in her body, she is shivering a little but still manage to said

"Shi...shiva mei thik hu"

He looked at her, she is avoiding his gaze. He is admiring her completely lost in her beauty. He took his hand forward and grabbed her chin to make her look into his eyes and yet she did.

They both are drown in each other. Shiva felt his insecurities is vanished for a moment he didn't want to remember that, he just want her.

His raavi, His chipkali, His wife.

Raavi is trying to understand whats in his mind why he is distancing him from her. She want to read his eyes deeply.

His hand slowly towards her neck and she hissed and close her eyes.

He started remember the moments they spend together the moment when they dance, when she feed him mirchi wala aam, when they both accidentally fall on bed.

Here raavi felt that her blood was flowing very fast in vains...her heart is bumping out it seems like for the another next moment it will fell on the ground. She places her hand on his and cluck it tightly.

Tears from shiva's eyes are on the way to flow, they both are completely lost in each other.

Suddenly he squeezed her ankle unintentionally and she winced in pain.

Their moment broke.

"I m so sorry voh jaanbuz kar nahi kiya"

"Sorry raavi"

And started massaging it faster, as he don't want her in pain.

"Its okay shiva m thik hu" raavi said with smile

He nodded at her with satisfaction and krish arrive heavily breathing

"Acha hua tum dono mil gye jaldi chalo bhaut badi problem ho gyi h"


Shiva and raavi are so in love but afraid to admit it.

Shiva insecurities is haunting him and Raavi's is trying to understand him.






Hey lovelies...this is the second part.❤️

Sorry for the short update next part will not be short like this..🤣

Love,

S_Verma ❤️


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