Echo [RaghVi OS] ft. Mandar - Page 3

Originally posted by: ReemShah

this was something new and a complete neutral take on the 3's relationship with each other

none of them connected with the other---all of them co-existing

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Yes, it is amazing when everyone can coexist and have their own vibe 😁

Originally posted by: Sunaina7

exactly

this is what i wanted to watch in the show ❤

par trp dal ke tadke ne sara zayka kharab kat diya 🤣

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I have rewritten it my way 😇

Originally posted by: TheRoadNotTaken

For once I found mandar like normal.....😆

It's good that you were able to put creepiness out....

I loved it❤️

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Yes, the characterisation has been toned down and made into someone you can root for 😇

Originally posted by: Me000w

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Yes, the characterisation has been toned down and made into someone you can root for 😇

Originally posted by: Bhavisweet03

Aww I can't believe story can go like this also. I mean love mandar's character here. He is not that much creepy here.

Raghav Rao as always wonderful character

Really you have written so beautifully❤️

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Glad you liked it 😳

Mandar was made more relatable in my version, he knows he cannot get the girl anymore, but he wants to make sure the other guy is good for her too 😇

Raghav is as usual his own self 😆

Pallavi is more chill and confident 👍🏼

Originally posted by: OceanicHeart.

Wow Tannu ! I never thought I could enjoy Mandaar and Raghav interaction 😲

But you made it possible 🤣

I loved the story. Everyone is so nice and cordial to each other here 😆

Loved your take 🤗

Lovely OS ! 😳

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I think there is a lot of potential for Raghav and Mandar in the trio other than fighting it out 😇

Pallavi is also not just a tool, the difference in their approach is more evident: While Mandar views her with the lens of the past, Raghav is more concerned about her future, so they fit perfectly 👍🏼

Originally posted by: Vivirti_Suvian2

Oh bhai i love the way Mandar ka character how gonna play in your OS written in description and their conversation plus that some telugu accent words you used are so Raghav Rao style re 🤣🤣 and Mandar Raghav conversation i like you wrote it in subtle way

And last but the not the list you are indirectly promoting your favorite song ECHO in such a way that your os too enhances 👍🏼👍🏼 and thank you so much for the dm thank god i saw warna miss ho jata yaar 🤗🤗

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The trio getting a chance to be shown in a positive light, how much I'd love to see that too 😳

Telugu? I dint Google Translate anything in the OS dearie 😳

I have written two Marathi lines 😆

Yes, I take any chance to promote music ❤️

Originally posted by: hapc

Thank you so much for the PM otherwise I would have missed this gem.❤️

Absolutely love this. I’m glad past doesn’t have to be butchered to accommodate present. Seemed like a fresh take on the show. I loved the dynamic between Raghav and Mandhaar and how Pallavi comes in between. Lovely.

Hope to read more from you. Not asking for a continuation though, so don’t come at me😆

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Everyone has their own part to play in the other's life, and noone is overstaying their time.

Bas itna sa khwaab hai 😆

The timed entrances was to signify how they do not actually have any other bone of contention tbh, it is only Pallavi who is the link between them 👍🏼

Yipeeee!! I have a few other pieces I have written, they can be found in the MHRW Reader's Gallery if interested 😳

Haha, I wont come at you even if you ask for one, coz I'm stubborn enough to just not write that 😈

Originally posted by: SilverBell

Nice Story. Loved It Keep Writing.

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Glad you liked it!! 😇

Originally posted by: TheRoadNotTaken

a wishful notion😆

The beauty of writing an AU piece means you get to play around the characters and make them act in accordance to what you want them to be, rather than what they are onscreen 😈😎👍🏼