Echo [RaghVi OS] ft. Mandar - Page 2

Originally posted by: Avneel07

Wonderful reading. Loved it🥰

Thanks a ton for reading 🤗

Originally posted by: masin

Mygoodness! This was a very, very interesting read! 👏

This is the version of Mandaar I was hoping to see in the show. Someone who is truly so lost that he first needs to gather all the missing pieces of the puzzle before he jumps back into his short-lived relationship with Pallavi. Someone, who as a man, understands how another man behaves when he has feelings for a woman. Someone who doesn't need to be afraid of the ex-don of Hyderabad, but someone who has enough self-respect to not have the hots for another man's woman. Someone who doesn't need to befriend nor hate Raghav, but rather someone who understands that the dynamics between all three of them have shifted and it's best if he maintains his distance.

His comment to Raghav about Pallavi deserving 100% of someone's heart and time was restrained and appropriate. I liked that he spoke his mind within his boundaries and didn't overstep just because he "had Pallavi first".

Loved how you weaved Pallavi and Raghav's conversation into Raghav and Mandaar's conversation. It would make for a quite a visual treat on screen! The way Raghav bounced back into his banter with Pallavi without a thought about her ex in the room was adorable. It wasn't that he was trying to flag her, but that's just how he naturally is with her and around her. Also loved how Raghav couldn't bear to call Sanki VD "uncle" 😆. Goes to show that while he's smitten by Pallavi, he's not exactly ready to adopt her parents as his own - a very Raghav Rao thought-process that you captured so subtly and beautifully! ❤️❤️

exactly

this is what i wanted to watch in the show ❤

par trp dal ke tadke ne sara zayka kharab kat diya 🤣

For once I found mandar like normal.....😆

It's good that you were able to put creepiness out....

I loved it❤️

Aww I can't believe story can go like this also. I mean love mandar's character here. He is not that much creepy here.

Raghav Rao as always wonderful character

Really you have written so beautifully❤️

Wow Tannu ! I never thought I could enjoy Mandaar and Raghav interaction 😲

But you made it possible 🤣

I loved the story. Everyone is so nice and cordial to each other here 😆

Loved your take 🤗

Lovely OS ! 😳

Oh bhai i love the way Mandar ka character how gonna play in your OS written in description and their conversation plus that some telugu accent words you used are so Raghav Rao style re 🤣🤣 and Mandar Raghav conversation i like you wrote it in subtle way

And last but the not the list you are indirectly promoting your favorite song ECHO in such a way that your os too enhances 👍🏼👍🏼 and thank you so much for the dm thank god i saw warna miss ho jata yaar 🤗🤗

Thank you so much for the PM otherwise I would have missed this gem.❤️

Absolutely love this. I’m glad past doesn’t have to be butchered to accommodate present. Seemed like a fresh take on the show. I loved the dynamic between Raghav and Mandhaar and how Pallavi comes in between. Lovely.

Hope to read more from you. Not asking for a continuation though, so don’t come at me😆

Originally posted by: MissWiseUnicorn

This was amazing!!👏

I really loved your take on their equation and the part where Mandar and Raghav mutually agreed that Pallavi deserves the best was my favourite!

Thank you so much for reading 🤗

So glad you liked that bit 🙋‍♀️

Always think the decision should rest with Pallavi 💕

Nice Story. Loved It Keep Writing.

Originally posted by: SONIA441

Wow! Loved this breath of fresh air for all the 3 characters🤗

I like how the conversations flowed from one direction to another freely in a single place - the Living Room of the D-Nivas - like a One-Act Play & I love those.

And I hope we could get this AU actually on the screen😆

Thank you so much for reading 🤗

Yes, having them all in one place independantly does make it seem like a play 😇

I would love if it does translate onscreen, but it is tough under current circumstances 🙋‍♀️