Wounds - An Udariyaan OS - Page 2

Originally posted by: Niroo

Nicely written. I always thought that somewhere down the lane Jasmin and Tejo would be back to what they were again. But I guess we are not that lucky. Lol

But it is nice to see if this was the story how it would sound.

Please do write more stories on FaTejo if you could.

Thank you so much 😊 I am glad you liked it ❤️ Sure, I would do

Originally posted by: BammyPooa

This is good! So lovely to see Chameli being protective about Tejo for once.

Thank you so much 😊 I am glad you liked it ❤️ Sisters are like that only. Me and my sister fight almost every time we talk, but we are very protective and can never hate each other. I don't know why the makers are hell bent on butchering the pure sister's bonding in this drama 😕

Originally posted by: vivpri

Jasso! Of course, that's the nickname. To write this OS, I read the wiki page and saw some weekly rewinds where I learnt the Jasmine's nickname - Jasso. But when I finally started to write this up, I forgot her pet name. Hence, wrote with her original name itself. However, I felt the story was not good enough because sisters talk almost by calling pet names only. Hence, whenever Tejo called Jasmine, it felt so wrong.

Thank you so much 😊 I am glad you liked my OS

Yes, I am a big fan of K-dramas and I love Park Seo Jun, Hwang Jung-eum and many more. I guess I already watched She was pretty at least 20 times now ❤️ 😃

My sis two days back binged She Was Pretty!!! I am also a huge fan of Hwang Jung Eum due to Kill Me Heal Me and Secret Love!!!

Originally posted by: Shraddha6789

Yeah it is pretty good really surprising when I read the line of Jasmin frantically opening her zip i like gayi Bhais pani main and yeh ab khud kya Pura tabela lakar jayegi paani main but as I read further I was like oh Teri yaha toh Jasmin achi hain kahi natak toh Nahi kar rahi but then at the end I was really happy and felt maaza aa gaaya. Felt good to see her actually acting like a sister and not the Mona darling she is on the show. 😊😊😊 plz write more would love to read more of ur works.

Thank you so much 😊 I am glad you like it ❤️ I write her in a positive light since I don't want any negativity in my first ever written udariyaan OS 😃 Sure, I would do 👍🏼

Originally posted by: Show86

Wonderful. Such a light hearted moment. If only we could get this in place of the 💩 we are getting every week.

Jasmin here is so much true to her character that was introduced in the beginning. Sadly...itv main bina vamp ke story hi nahi badti.

Thank you so much 😊 I am glad you liked it ❤️ So true words, I agree.

Originally posted by: lovereading14

very well written! Loved Jasmine more for a few seconds than I could ever love her while watching the show!

Thank you so much 😊 I am very glad you liked it ❤️

beautiful os

loved sister's bonding here

wish jasmine could have like this in show

Originally posted by: poo_j

Yes..Jasso..Fateh lovingly calls her that so many people here avoid it and call Chameli..😆Keep writing on FaTejo if you can!!! 😃

My sis two days back binged She Was Pretty!!! I am also a huge fan of Hwang Jung Eum due to Kill Me Heal Me and Secret Love!!!

OMG! 🤗 Those two are my favorites too. I love the hero of those dramas. He is very talented. They have insane chemistry. I loved even the chemistry of Ji Sung & Park Seo-joon in Kill Me Heal Me 🤣