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Posted: 4 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: ValleyOfPeace

Ro mat...šŸ–¤

I wanted a story that showed her feelings for him.

Shiva’s accident was much demanded after all.

And also Raavi’s feelings


Par Aise? Shiva ka accident kyun chaiye tha tumhe toh pata hai na?! But this is too late. Oh man, I have been crying for the past few minutes!ā¤ļøšŸ˜¢šŸ˜¢šŸ˜¢


Maybe one of these days when I am strong enough, I'll read the whole story instead of its and bits. Love you! ā¤ļø

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Posted: 4 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes


Par Aise? Shiva ka accident kyun chaiye tha tumhe toh pata hai na?! But this is too late. Oh man, I have been crying for the past few minutes!ā¤ļøšŸ˜¢šŸ˜¢šŸ˜¢


Maybe one of these days when I am strong enough, I'll read the whole story instead of its and bits. Love you! ā¤ļø

Awww Hails don’t cry like that please??

Smile!

There will be an epilogue too and it may cheer up up somewhatšŸšŸ

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Posted: 4 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: barbieflora

Made it to the end without peeping but boy, did that break my heart!

I need time to process this.....

Aww Kia!

Be strongšŸ–¤šŸ–¤šŸ–¤

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Posted: 4 years ago
#44

I could only read this because I really enjoy your writing, otherwise this was too painful - way too painful

it felt as if my shiva, the show shiva, and not some AU version died and that really hard

wow I actually have tension in my heart and tears in my eyes, that's how effective and good your writing is

the part that hit the hardest was - "She had seen him being lifted on his brothers shoulders and depart from their lives forever" - I kept believing it wasn't true until then but that single line made it is so real 😭😭

amazing writing momzi, but dil toot gaya šŸ’”

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Posted: 4 years ago
#45

Nooooooo.. Oh I am cryingggg....That was🄺🄺🄺🄺 You write it so beautifully that I could just literally feel it. Such tragic ending gives me goosebumps 🄺🄺 You are an awesome writeršŸ’—šŸ’—šŸ’—šŸ’—šŸ’—šŸ’—šŸ’—


Now please compensate for this. Write a happy ending OS one now😌

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Posted: 4 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: SlytherInMe.

I could only read this because I really enjoy your writing, otherwise this was too painful - way too painful

it felt as if my shiva, the show shiva, and not some AU version died and that really hard

wow I actually have tension in my heart and tears in my eyes, that's how effective and good your writing is

the part that hit the hardest was - "She had seen him being lifted on his brothers shoulders and depart from their lives forever" - I kept believing it wasn't true until then but that single line made it is so real 😭😭

amazing writing momzi, but dil toot gaya šŸ’”

Aww baccha please don’t cry!

He is still alive in the show okay?

This is just a fanficšŸ–¤šŸ–¤

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Posted: 4 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: Yooooo

Nooooooo.. Oh I am cryingggg....That was🄺🄺🄺🄺 You write it so beautifully that I could just literally feel it. Such tragic ending gives me goosebumps 🄺🄺 You are an awesome writeršŸ’—šŸ’—šŸ’—šŸ’—šŸ’—šŸ’—šŸ’—


Now please compensate for this. Write a happy ending OS one now😌


No no no dont cry!

If all of u cry

IF will flood...

Thank you soo much.

And yes I will be writing an OS with happy ending soon. I had already decided that before posting thisšŸ–¤

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Posted: 4 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: ValleyOfPeace

Awww Hails don’t cry like that please??

Smile!

There will be an epilogue too and it may cheer up up somewhatšŸšŸ

It's really hard. I have seen back to back 4 deaths just this year in my family. With one of them dying in my arms. This show was something for me to hold onto to not fall into any unwanted places. And this is probably very silly, but Shiva's one of my fav characters here and seeing him go as well just opened that dam.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#49

It triggered some painful thoughts. My Mom was widowed within two months of her marriage, and she went into similar lunacy for two years till life happened again to her in the form of her husband’s best friend. My Baba!

Very realistic! And beautiful

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Posted: 4 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

It's really hard. I have seen back to back 4 deaths just this year in my family. With one of them dying in my arms. This show was something for me to hold onto to not fall into any unwanted places. And this is probably very silly, but Shiva's one of my fav characters here and seeing him go as well just opened that dam.

Hails I am sorry for ua lossšŸ–¤

It’s not silly. Please be strong.

I will make the epilogue better for you okay?

I love u!

He is alive in the show. Please smilešŸ–¤

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