RaghVi FS - Your eyes don't lie (Part 2 updated on page 109) - Page 14

Originally posted by: ReemShah

This was short but really good

the reason behind the divorce is phone call--and my mind is conjuring ideas on who could that person be and what he told

I think the person on phone says that Mandaar is alive but Idk why the caller could have scared her...

waiting for the next update

thanks for the tag❤️

Tried creating some suspense there hehe😆

Hmm, let's see😉

The next chapter would be uploaded soon!❤️💙

So she is dying. NP. life death is just a concept. But don't save her at the end.

Good write and crisp addition without fluff. The length was apt just try reducing gap between posting two chapters.

Originally posted by: Trista101

Thanks a lot for your feedback! ❤️

Yeah, a phone call with a lot of mystery

Lol I can't wait to answer them all. Let's peel the layers off!😆

Yep. Lets peel them off.

Don't make us wait too much. 😈

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

Yep. Lets peel them off.

Don't make us wait too much. 😈

Originally posted by: Trista101

Is that a threat😆

If you will give us fast updates then it's a threat. 😆

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

If you will give us fast updates then it's a threat. 😆

Originally posted by: Trista101

Lol okay, I wouldn't like dying early🤣

Most people wouldn't Trista.

But as always I say, pressure writing is trash 🤣

Please continue soon...

Finally, here!

A lovely update Trista. So, another layer added. 🧅

6 months, a thank-you celeb that turned chaotic. The phone call. Who is on the other end? What is the news shared? 👀

Raghav wasnt in this chapter, but he was centrally there in the convo the 2 women had. Or the one for who the cake was put up.

Theories are aplenty. Lets wait for another chapter. 🤞🏻

Made an engaging read, Trista. And waiting to know more. ❤️

You mentioned of an update soon. Where are you? Alls well?