My imagination : part 12 updated

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hi all, am silent reader. Actually i *was* fatejo fan but after now a days i stopped watching this serial as i don't like the story plot. So i imagined so story. I am not a writer. I just put my idea here. If anyone can build a story from it from write it 😍.


I add new character here. His name is vikram. He is childhood friend of tejo. He loves her more than anything. Year back, tejo fought with him and asked him to not come back.


Flashback: Vikram was in india. 4 yrs back he went london and he came to see tejo for every special days. He does not like jasmine and sandhu family because he know about jasmine and also notices family always support jasmine. Year back, when he came to meet tejo, he warned tejo but tejo did not listen him then they fought. Tejo loves jasmine and family so she could not tolerate and end his friendship. When he left he again warned her that one day her heart will break by jasmine only as he know the true colors of jasmine.


Story:

Tejo hears the cofession of fatah in hospital, he openly tell shandhu family that he loves jasmine and will love her forever (he does not think about tejo once when he confess, he almost forgot that he has wife named tejo.) Sandhus get shock but they keep quite (tejo's bro and maami is not there). Tejo's heart break. But she does not react there. She just leave the hospital and go to virk house. She take only her educational related files leaving mangalsutra and leave there (No one there when she left). When she walking in the road lifeless, vikram's words echos in her ear. She just remember all happy moments and fatah. She take her mobile and drop a message (sorry) to vikram. She feels guilty for hurt the person who always think about her. She fails to notice a vehicle and it hits her (not a major accident). She falls and gets unconsious. The people nearby take her to hospital.


Vikram intro:

Huge building, in one big conference hall meeting is happening. There he is Vikram. You can imagine suitable intro😪. His phone beeps. He see the name and get happy 😍 he shout finally she messaged me. Clients get shock his behaviour because they never see him this much happy. He opens the message the see sorry. He is confused and shocked at the same time. He decides to call tejo and dial her. In accident spot phone is ringing. And one person answers it. Without hearing the other person vikram shout tejo finally i received your message. But sorryyy.. what happened tejo.. are you alright.. he asks in one. Other person says sir sorry, but the girl who has this phone met with an accident. Others taken her to xy hospital. After hearing this, vikram almost faint. He rushes to hospital like a mad man. He keeps saying nothing will happen to my tejo. Nothing. God plz save her.


He runs into hospital nd asks about tejo. When run fast to ICU but stop in mid. He is afraid to see her in ICU bed after a year. He compose himself and take slow steps to towards the room and see her through glass. His heart beat stops there seeing her like this. Doctor comes out and asks are you her husband? Vikram stumbles hearing that asks tejo married? Doctor asks who are you? Vikram doesnot respond. In vikram's mind there are lots of questions. Married? Who is her husband? Etc. Doc asks again and vikram comes out of his world and says am her frind. Doctor says nothing to worry. We will shift her to normal ward in few minutes. You can meet her. But i think her mental condition is not good. Take care of her. He leaves. Vikram dont know how to react after big revelation. He walks near tejo and see her.


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May i continue????

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hey it seems so interesting please continue

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Please please continue!

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Really nice. Please continue 😊

Thanks

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Posted: 4 years ago
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😇😇😇 sure, update by tomorrow 🙈

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Part 2


Vikram sees his tejo laying unconsciously. He sees her after a year. Only he knows how much he misses her from the day she left him. Not a single day passed without her memory for him. He always waited for this day but he does not expect this kind of reunion. Vikram slowly takes his hand near her but stops in mid seeing her vermilon but notices that she is not wearing mangalsutra. He wonders what happened to her. After hesitation he keeps his hand on her head and says i dont know what happened to you but i feel something is wrong. Wake up tej please see, your vicky is here. He can't stop his tears. He cant see her like this. He runs out of the room to control himself from burst out. He remembers their old days and fight. He wonders how she met with accident as he knows that tejo always take proper care while crossing roads or walking in road. He wants to punish the person who is respinsible for her state. He dials his PA and find the CCTV footage where tejo met with accident.


Aftee sometimes he gets the footage. He plays that in his mobile. There she walks like zombie, lifelessly. Her face does not show any expressions. Her face shows that she is broken. Then the accident happens. Vikram gets shocked to see the footage. He never saw her like this much broken before. He wonders what happened actually. Why she looked so broken. He assumes her family should be the reason for this thats why she sent me the sorry message. He don't want to contact her family due the assumption. He never like them but he always respect and love tejo's brother because vikram finds the love pours on tejo by her brother is pure. He decides to call him. But there is no answer. That time nurse asks him to finish the formalities and inform that tejo will get conscious by evening.


Mean time in hospital where jasmine is admitted.

(in this story maami and abhi were not present when jasmine cut her wrist as jasmine planned and sent them away so her plan will work exactly) both got news and rushed to hospital. Maami told everything to abhi before coming to hospital. But abhi told he trusts fatah, he won't break his tejo's trust. And further he told fatah will only show sympathy to jasmine but he will never accept her as he is husband of tejo and he will never leave selfless tejo for selfish jasmine. When both come to hospital, fatah is not there because he went to pray for his jasmine😏😒. Both get happy because fatah might be left with tejo. Others also keep quiet and they are afraid to open up the confession because they know maami and abhi will get angry. (They only woery about their anger, even now they dont get bothet about tejo. They all forget tejo and worry about jasmine.) Doctor comes and inform that jasmine is shifted to normal ward. But asks to go inside after 1 hr. Maami and abhi frustrates with jasmine and wonder how she could do this with her sister. They determine to teach her a lesson without knowing the fatah confession. There he comes running and shouting is my jasmine okay? Can I see? I want to see her and tell her that still i love her. He shouts 😑 Maami and abhi get shock hearing all these nonsense. Abhi cant tolerate this and turn fatah and hold his shirt collar angrily😡 and ask how dare you fatah??? Fatah get shock seeing abhi this much angry. Fatah asks what happened to you abhi? Abhi laughed and asked scarsitically what happened to me? Seriously? What happened to you? Why are talking nonsense? You love jasmine?? What is this all???? Fatah gets cobfused by these question but even now he dont get any idea about tejo who is alwsys there for him to support. Fatah says i love jasmine. She is everything to me. She ready to die for me. I did a big mistake thats why she is in this hospital. He keeps talking blah blah blah blah.... Abhi and maami see him with disgusting look. Abhi shout fatah to stop and asked so you love jasmine? Ha ha... so who is tejo ? Hearing tejo's name fatah's eye widened. His breath stops. He murmurs tejo, my wife ....


His eyes start to search tejo. He dont find her. He asks abhi where is tejo? Abhi gets angry and shout i never met a disgusting person like you in my life. You are asking me wherevl is tejo? I know jasmine can stoop this much low to satisfy her ego but you😡 you are worse than her. My tejo loves you. She supports you. She saves you and your family from humiliation by marrying you. If yoy cant love why you gave hope to her. You used her to overcome the pain which gave by your beloved😒 jasmine. When jasmine left you, you got tejo and when jasmine came back you threw it her like garbage. After seeiñg you with my tejo i thought you deserves tejo but now am saying you dont desaerve her. How could you fall so low? You dont deserve to be a man. You are wosrt person. You threw her like toy. When you need, you keep her now you left her. Disgusting... i dont know where is my tejo, i dont know whether she got to know her sister's and husband's true color. I hope she is okay. Rather doing all these, you two could kill her by your hands.


Fatah shouts noooo... please stop. I cant hear further.. pls stop.. i never wsnted to hurt. I forgot her ... am sorry... Tejo... she must be in home. I will go to her and explain her. Saying this fatah runs outside and he remembers every moments he spent with tejo, how she supports always, how she believes him,... guilt is getting over him.. he blamed himself for breaking her trust. He thinks whether she knows about cinfession. What she will think of me, will she hate me??


Abhi gets a call, he cuts call but again calls are coming. He answers , its vikram.. he rushed to maami and take her with him and leaves hospital immediately.

Edited by RamMeera - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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I just love this, please continue Vikram (i am imaging raghav)

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Plz do continue dea..

Waiting for next part❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Loving it 😍 waiting for next part 😎

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: healtheworld

I just love this, please continue Vikram (i am imaging raghav)

Same here... raghav rao 😊

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