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Posted: 4 years ago
#21

loving this plot... please tag me when you update

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dee10

loving this plot... please tag me when you update

Thank you 😊 Sure

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Loving the plot update soon

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Sorry for the delay guys. Actually i have joined my first job last week. I did not get time to complete this story.


Mean while every one wants to know what happened in hospital where jasmine admitted. You all wonder for a small cut in hand why all these drama. Actually this all planned by jasmine.


Part 5


Jasmine well aware about her family members. She knows she can get fatah back only fools them by emotional black mail. One of her friend's dad serves as doctor in the nearest hospital of her house. She emotionally blackmail her friend to get her friend's help. Her friend falls in her trap. She pleads her dad to help jasmine as its about her life. At last friend's dad agrees to help jasmine. According to their plan friend's dad act as jasmine is in critical stage but actually it is not true. She cut her hand slightly and pour color to show it as a big cut. She knows that her family will support her if she does like this.


(This is what happened in hospital where jasmine is admitted)

Jasmine asked doctor to inform her family that she gets conscious and also asked him to tell them that she is weak, she is mentally disturb, dont stress her, etc. Doctor is not happy to playing with her family's emotion but he dont have any choice. So he said all this to sandus whatever jasmine said. Without knowing jasmine evil planning everyone gets worried hearing doctor's word. Everyone rushed inside the ward to see jasmine. Seeing all them jasmine started to cry. Her eyes searched for fatah. She expect fatah will come crying first. She gets shocked for not seeing him there. Then she tought may be he went somewhere because he could not see her like this. She thought this is the right time to start my acting. She sobbed and said am really sorry, i did not want to hurt you all. I tried my self to be happy but i could not. I dont love gippy. I just act because i want fatah to move on with tejo. Everyone gets shocked. Mummy asked what are you saying jassu. Why did you do like this? Seeing her concern jasmine thought her plan is working. Jasmine further said haa mammi, you all know how much fatah loves me and he got married to tejo only for his family's reputation. I know i did very big mistake by ran away from wedding. I was just angry at that time. I did not know this will happen. But due to me tejo had to get married to fatah. I was broken but i was late. I dont want tejo to live in loveless marriage. I knew fatah won't move on with tejo easily. But i want tejo to be happy. I did not have any choise. Thats why i acted to love gippy because i knew fatha will move on with tejo if he starts to hate me. She sobbs. Everyone fell in her emotional trap again. Beeji starts to scolded jasmine. Why did you di this jasmine beta, its not necessary to get them unite while hurting yourself. Jasmine said, i thought i will make them perfect but i could not marry gippy. I tried much but i could not forget fatah. I can't spoil gippy's life for my shake. Thats y i decided to end my life. If am dead, tejo amd fatah will live peacefully but i failed. Now fatah knows that i still love him. I heard his confession. I am sorry... I snatched tejo's life. After knowing truth, fatah will not accept tejo. What did I do? she starts to cry loudly to get them fully under her control. Everyone gets worried to see her like this. Without thinking of tejo's life, beeji told, dong worry jassu beta, dont do this again. We cant loose you. We will talk with virks and get your fatah to you. You are such a good sister, you think about tejo, when yòu and fatah ars still love esch other, we cant keep you both apart. We will unite you both. Jasmine got happy seeing her plan worked successfully. She kept her face sadly and aska tejo??? Everulyone got silent, mummiji told no need to worry jasmine, we rae here nah, we will make tejo to understand. She won't come in between you and fatah. She is living your life, so she will back off. So dont worry beta. Take rest. Jasmine asked where is fatah? Everyone recalled the incident and how fatah ran away shouting tejo. Mamma ji started to tell but beeji stoped and told he went nearest temple to pray for you. He will come beta. Now yoy take rest. Everyone came out the ward, and looked beeji with questioning look. By seeing their faces, she told jasmine is not well. Still she is worrying about tejo and fatah. I dont want her to get stressed saying the fight between abhi and fatah. Now we all know fatah and jasmine love each other. We have to unite them otherwise we may lose our jassu again. I dont want her to hurt. Mummi ji asked what about tejo? Where is she? I did not see her here also. What if is she not ready to break the marriage? Everyone has mixed reaction. Beeji said we all get her married to fatah. But tejo and fatah are friends. We will tell jasmine sacrifice to tejo, she cant live with fatah. She has to leave him. Once jasmine get discharged we will talk to virk. Fatah mom hates tejo, she will definitely accept this for her son's sake.


Present- Virks house:

Mahi is crying seeing photos taken with tejo. She recalls every moments spent witb tejo. She misses tejo and worries for her. She prays god to keep her tejo safe. She is angry with fatah. She did not expect that her brother will stoop this much low. She wonders how could he betray his wife tejo who is a pillar for him, who stands with him always, who encourages him to follow his dreams, who gives all the rights of the husband to him, who gives priority to him always. Thinking her brother's ill deed she feels disgusted. She gets anger. She remembers that evening when tejo shared her happiness with her, tejo happily told her that her brother finally moved on with her, he finally accepted me as his wife. She said happily hugging mahi with tears in her eyes. Mahi get happy hearing all this and starts to tease her bhabi. Both played like a kids. Recalling all this mahi starts to breath heavily. She could digest the truth that her bhai betrayed her bhabhi after doing all this to tejo. She holds the chair for support, she loses her balance to starts to fall but before she falls down amrik holds her on the right time. He gets panic seeing her condition. He knows that mahi loves tejo a lot. Seeing her reaction in hall, he uunderstood mahi is totally broken down with the fact. Thats why he comes searching her. He makes mahi sit in beds. And soothing her back to make her relax. Mahi gets back to normal. Seeing amrik, she laughs and asks you are happy now, right,? You always wanted this one. You hate tejo without any single reason. You always wanted your so called friend to become your bhabhi. Now go and bring your jasmine here. She says all this with disgusting look. She asks him to leave, i dont want to see your face. From today, i dont own any brothers. I hate you both. Go and praise your brother for what he has done with tejo. Go and bring your jasmine. You hate tejo, what did she to do, but you are better than him, from start you hate tejo but he, i feel suffocated seeing him. I dont know where is my bhabi.. she again says bhabii and laughs no bhabi when i dont have any bhai how i can call her bhabii, she is my di, she crys holding the photo frame of tejo, caresses the frames and asks where are you di, please come back, no no you dont need to come here, you dont deserve to be here. Atleast call me di, you know nah i love you. I could not imagine you when you learned their bitter truth. How could you handle? I know you are brave girl. Mahi sobs. Seeing mahi amrik heart breaks. Her hands starts to shiver. She starts to panic. And says if anything happened to her? If she took any wrong move? Mahi keeps saying all this again and again. Amrik tells her nothing will happen to tejo but she is not listening him. He shouts nothing will happen to bhabhii, she is strong. Nothing will happen to her. Do you understand? He shakes mahi and shouts. Mahi gets surprised hearing him that he addressee tejo as bhabi for the first time. She lifts her head to see him and shocked seeing him in tears. She wonders and asks you are crying for di? Amrik gets shocked and touch his face and feel the tears. He moves from there. He takes the frame in his hand and his tears falls on the frame. Mahi could not beleive her eyes. Seeing amrik reaction. She slowly moves near to him and keeps her hand in his shoulders and asks you hate her, then what is this? Why are you crying? Amrik turns nd says i hated her but long ago my hatred faded away. I did not express it only but i started to accept her. Mahi gets confused at a time surprised. Seeing her confused face, he says i dont know why i hate her may be she is too perfect, or too loving. When she get married to fatah i felt she took jasmine place. I got angry because i knew fatah love jasmine.i thought she came in between to them. But after days passing, i starts to see her true nature. She never failed to impress me every single day by her loving nature. I could not accept her because my mind was not ready to accept het. I felt happy whenever she tool care of fatah, she always care for him. My hearts alwsys said to accept her but my friendhip with jasmine always stopped me to accept her. But one day....... he stops.... Mahi was listening all this with wide open mouth, and she asks one days, what happened, she asks with curiosity. He says, one day, dad and bhabhi were talking in balcony i was going to my room then i hear my name in their conversation. I thought she is complaining aboout me to dad for trobling her. So i decided to overhear the conversio and hide behind the pillar. My dad is scolding me for being useless, jobless, careless, but she stops my dad and defend me, she praises me and tells dont worry papa, amrik is little playful but he is much talented. He is interested in accounting. She asks papa why dont we appoint him in accounting dept. I am sure he will become responsible person and it is his dream. I gets shocked listeing her. I wondered how did she know me this much. I never give her needed respectm i always hurt her but she worries about me, she defends me. From that day, my hatred towards her comes to end. Mahi asks when this happened. Amrik replies two months back. Mahi asks if you stopped to hate her then why you always fought with fatah? He says for her. Mahi asks for jasmine? He smiles and says for tejo bhabi. Mahi gets shocked. Understanding her questioning look he says, i wanted to know whats is fatah's heart. I wanted to know that does he loves jasmine or he wants to move on with tejo bhabi. Mahi says i dont understand. Amrik says, you know i love fatah and my friend jasmine equally. Thats why i wanted them to unite and fought with fatah in beginning but after got to know about tejo bhabhi i start to love my bhabhi as equal to fatah and jasmine. I want tejo to have better life. I felt that she deserves every happiness for her loving soul. Thats y i wanted to know what is in fatah's heart. If he loves jasmine, how will he give the love to tejo. She deserves to be love. I thought tejo and fatah were together as friends.Tejo cant live life long without love. In case fatah loves jasmine, what will happen to tejo, i thought to free her from this loveless marraige because I wanted her to be happy. But everytime i fought with fatah i wanted to hear his love confession for tejo but he never said so. Believe me mahi, i really did not have any idea about fatah and tejo taken their relationship into next level until you said in hall. I shocked hearing this. I did not expect fatah will stoop low like this. She fooled tejo. I dont know how is she? I know she is strong but she loved fatah more than anything. I am afraid. Mahi hugs him and cries, i tthought you are bad person but i did not know you worried for her life. Even i did not think about her. Yoy thought of her. I am proud of yoy bhai. I beleived fatah but he broke my trust. I dont know where is my di now? She starts to sob. Amrik hugs her tightly and says yoy know nah, she is a warrior, for her pure soul nothing will happen to her. We will find our di. Mahi asks di? Amrik says even i donf have a brother then she is my di nah, she nods and hugs him. Both cries. Amrik thinks somehow i consoled mahi. But how i can console me witjout knowing about tejo. Asks where are you di? I hope yoh are okay and safe. He prays god to safeguards his di.


Hospital:

Tejo sleeps peacefully in vickram's arms.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#25

I could not write it properly. Sorry for that

Edited by RamMeera - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#26

Beautiful update.MAKE jasfa rot in hell.No shame,no guilt still playing with Tejo emotions.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#27

Very interesting take on amrik and yea kinda believeable

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Posted: 3 years ago
#28

This is awesome. Amrik ne toh dil jeet liya. I hope Vikram makes JasFa life a living hell along with the entire Sandhus. They don't deserve a daughter like Tejo.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#29

Yup, am planning a twist 🙊🙊🙊🙊 but dont know whether you will like it or not.🙈

Edited by RamMeera - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: AnjuRish

Very interesting take on amrik and yea kinda believeable

Actually i dont want him to be a negative charater here because already there are lot😒 entire sandhu 🙊 i want entire virk to support tejo🥳

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