Tejrik os : Tu pyaar hai kisi aur ki tujhe chata koi aur hain

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Posted: 4 years ago
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He stood there watching her dance in the rain ,splashing in the puddles caused by rain. She let out a full throttled laugh as mud clung onto her clothes . The anklets on her feet shining bright as the sun adorning and adding beauty to the mesmerising scene. He could have written an ode at that moment detailing her every moment ,her every move as she glowed with happiness as she became one with her first love.

This had always been a topic of argument between them, she loved the rain while he disliked it to the core . To her it brought new life, hope of a new beginning washing away past worries and cries. While to him it only made the ground wet ,atmosphere cloudy leaving no chance of enjoying a much needed walk . As the streets where too muddled and filled with frogs and unwanted creatures.

It now had been two years since they were married living each moment to the fullest, loving each other to bits often leaving the world to wonder how could two people be so in love.

She was the one who made him realise his worth, making him want to rise and grow as he had for ever lived in the shadows of his elder brother waiting to be noticed, waiting to be appreciated but that moment never came as to his family he was never good enough. He loved music found solace in it but to his family it was a waste of time.

He remembered how he had first met Tejo the love of his life, she had walked into the empty classroom mistaking it to be the drama department. She had stood there clapping at the end of his performance bringing him out of his trance. She had been his first audience his first ever admirer who told him he had a voice so divine that even the gods could stop for a moment to relish his voice. That was the first time he ever felt wanted, worthy of attention. He had stood there looking at her as she praised his music. He had lost sight of the world around him, coming to the state of being oblivious of what's around.

They had become friends after that day, sharing thoughts and dreams fighting and laughing while anchoring each others lives. To him she was his first love, the most beautiful girl he'd ever had laid eyes on. He gathered all his courage and had decided to go and express tell her how he felt as he was drawn to her flame, inspired by her fire as she set his heart ablaze leading him burn with desire.

To him the scariest thing he had ever encountered was not a ghost or a monster but was losing his love to his ever charasmatic and handsome brother. Who smirked at him watching him crumble as he snatched away the one thing he had solely possessed. He witnessed his heart break letting out a cry . As he watched her walk away into the arms of his brother.

To his brother it was only a game to be won, a point to be proven that he was always the more desired. He watched from afar as she broke having understood she had been a bait to get back at her sister who had apparently rejected his proposal.

She had reduced to a lifeless being hurt understanding she had only been a pawn, who was no longer needed. She had begged him to take her back, but his brother flung her away saying he was done with her. She sat humiliated scattered with emotions wavering all around.

He stood there silently crying watching her hurt knowing the pain of losing one's love. He wanted to gather her in his arms letting her know that he was there and would not let her fall.

When he could take it no more he had gone to her and wiped her tears and firmly pulled at her hand, she first reluctant looked at him with hurt in her eyes. Pain that he knew too well ,it was that of a shattered belief once known. He drew her out of her shell, bringing her out her grief . He told her how with time her heart would heal, the tears would slowly recede . The unrequited hope melting away as the pain would one day cease to exist. Even though it had not gone as they had planned it was time to move on and stand. That the world keeps on moving so should they as they could grow stronger holding each others hands.

She tried but failed breaking at each step but he didn't give up stood like a wall ready her to catch her every time she failed. Try to forget ur past and listen to me for a second he whispered as he slowly touched his forehead to hers. And said Tejo kaur Sandhu hear me out to what i am going to say as this is the first and the last time I'm ever going to express. I'm not going anywhere. I won't leave ,I am going to be here every time u need. U can doubt me. U can push me away thinking I'd leave anyway but it will never be true. As no matter how many million reasons there are for me to leave .... Ur the only reason for me to stay. As I Amrik singh virk am in love with u . I will respect your ur choice even if it breaks my heart, I'll never force myself on u or beg for ur love. I'll never ask u to do anything that is against ur wish. Because that is how much I love u. Choosing ur happiness over mine as forced loved can never last . As he confessed she leaned in claiming his lips with hers saying I love u and will always be urs. You might not be my first love but ur none like my first and ur love is better and second to none.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Wow.

That's a very AU version.

A new take. It was good to read it


- niki

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Thanks Niki I appreciate ur comment. Thanks I for one always wondered why and what was it that made amrik hate Tejo so much. It couldn't have been just that slap . So I decided to give depth to his character which we see lacking in the show. In the show he is just a pawn, who'll be sacrificed to keep the fire between the lead pair ablaze . So I decided to use this pawn to bring the king down as u never know who'll be the reason for ur checkmate. I had decided to keep it limited to two chapters but might add one more to it.

PS read my other work too if u ever get time love entwined is different too not about fatejo in focus but a different twist to the same story with an addition of a different character. I have posted couple of os and ff about fatejo hope u enjoy them.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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I kinda like Shraddha think that maybe amrik does have a big time crush or love for tejo

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