Unspeakable: Fatejo SS

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Posted: 4 years ago
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So there is a bit of divergence here, in my universe where Fateh is hugging Tejo, and remembering Chameli. I do not know yet, whether it's two shot...or a short story. But in my universe, this is happening


Tejo was busy in something when Fateh suddenly came and hugged her desperately. She was shocked at first, until now they had hugged twice only, and both of them were in extraordinary circumstances. However this felt a bit intimate. Her heart skipped a bit as Fateh clutched her closer and buried his face in her hair.

"Is it a dream?" Tejo could not believe it still. She shivered as she felt Fateh's hand sliding down and resting on her waist, and felt him pulling her closer. She never realised until now just how tiny she was as she felt his hand completely envelop her waist.

"Jasmine..."

These words broke her trance. Her breath was caught in her throat.

She pushed him and backed off...she wanted to say so much but only thing she could utter was... 'How dare you?' in a breaking voice and quickly ran into the bathroom and shut it.

She broke down. She had compromised with everything, trying to make the best of her situation, but this crossed a limit. Does he think he can get away with everything? She's tolerated his anger, his tantrums, his pain and despair... but this. Does he think he can fu#k me while thinking about Jasmine?

Tejo got into the bath tub and let the warm water submerge her as hot tears flowed across her cheeks.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bluekohl

So there is a bit of divergence here, in my universe where Fateh is hugging Tejo, and remembering Chameli. I do not know yet, whether it's two shot...or a short story. But in my universe, this is happening


Tejo was busy in something when Fateh suddenly came and hugged her desperately. She was shocked at first, until now they had hugged twice only, and both of them were in extraordinary circumstances. However this felt a bit intimate. Her heart skipped a bit as Fateh clutched her closer and buried his face in her hair.

"Is it a dream?" Tejo could not believe it still. She shivered as she felt Fateh's hand sliding down and resting on her waist, and felt him pulling her closer. She never realised until now just how tiny she was as she felt his hand completely envelop her waist.

"Jasmine..."

These words broke her trance. Her breath was caught in her throat.

She pushed him and backed off...she wanted to say so much but only thing she could utter was... 'How dare you?' in a breaking voice and quickly ran into the bathroom and shut it.

She broke down. She had compromised with everything, trying to make the best of her situation, but this crossed a limit. Does he think he can get away with everything? She's tolerated his anger, his tantrums, his pain and despair... but this. Does he think he can fu#k me while thinking about Jasmine?

Tejo got into the bath tub and let the warm water submerge her as hot tears flowed across her cheeks.


woah...the audacity. Well since this is your ss/ts I know Tejo will give it back to Fateh! Please continue!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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wow, liked the concept, that Fateh actually blurted Chameli's name instead of just dreaming of her and liked Tejo's response as well. Please continue 😍

I was actually hoping something similar in today's episode, not like this but he should have shared his emotional turmoil with Tejo, then only mamiji's revelation would have had more impact. But then again its ITV. 🤔

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Thank you so much Bluekohl. I was literally seething when the episode aired and this scene popped up. Thank you so much for making it better by writing your own take 👏

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Posted: 4 years ago
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😍😍😍😍😍


Aur likho na... please.

Mujhse control nahi ho raha hain.

I am just waiting for the angst to hit the fan😈

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