Short story on 14 july episode- MADAM!

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This is not the same that happened in the episode

A twist in the tale!


MADAM!


He was not happy when gippy held her arm She was his lover once a upon a time till her sister came between them

Fateh ! Yeh chudi pyari hai na

Tejo said excitedly as she showed him

He nodded in agreement still not paying attention as his mind was diverted towards jasmin and gippy 's candid conversation

How could she do this to me!

How could she marry him!


Oh ! He's burning in jealousy

Plan working!

She smirked as she held gippy's hand resting on her arm placing it on her waist instead

He couldnt take it

And just then


Madam!

A stranger's voice from behind walking friendly towards tejo!

He turned immediately to look into the stranger's direction pronouncing a title to his wife very sweetly

Madam! He stood very closely towards tejo

Apko yeh chudi suit nehin karti!

Aap humarey sath aiyeh hum aap ko achi wali dikha tey hai!

The stranger is a small business owner hardly in his thirties and smart personality

Tejo replied politely

Humari shopping ho geyi hai!

Madam!

Abhi toh bahut kuch baki hai!

The stranger replied with weird smile on his face


His dark eyes set on the tall fair and young seller thinking what is he upto with that bahut kuch baki hai!

So he interrupted instantly

Irrk nehin chahiye!

Shopping ho geyi hain!

The strange smiled mischieviously

Arey sir humey madam ko lejaney di jiye na !

Madam ki achi si shopping karwaengey!

He was upset with that guy's tone and words

What is he upto!

To his surprise tejo gave in to the stranger's mysterious request which irritated him

Fateh ! Main dekh ker ati hun!

Jasmin tum chalo ji sath main!

Jasmin refused to tag along as she was getting the wonderful opportunity to burn fateh more as he was alone now

As soon as tejo left with that guy just a few steps ahead approximately 50 metres away towards his retail , jasmin started getting closer to gippy and chatting

Kya gippy tumney to mujhey tandha bhi nehin pilaya !

She was eyeing him to see if he was affected as her jealousy mission was working well but his dark eyes were set on his

Wife!

What is he upto!

Talking so sweetly!

He was watching them very closely

The stranger stood very closely next to tejo brushing his shoulders against hers showing off the different variety of chudi to which she responded excitedly

Yeh chudi baechraha hai ya tackle kar raha hain!

He was getting more closer

Brushing his shoulders against hers

Madam!

Main apko chudi pehnadun pls!


Now this is too much!

He frowned

What's going on!

Yeh sala chudi bechraha hai ya kuch aur chakkar chela reha hai!


Gippy i miss u so much!

Jasmin comimg more closer to her groom to be who replied

Oh! How sweet!

Jasmin was irritated as fateh was still watching tejo and the stranger

paying no attention to her!

Fateh ! Lets go get some fresh juice while tejo is still shopping!

Gippy suggested

He didnt reply

His dark eyes still set on the stranger who was being over friendly with his wife and it was making him feel annoyed and uncomfortable

Just then he held tejo's hand to put the chuddi for her

his fingers touching and feeling the soft skin


This is too much!

How dare he hold her hand !

Fateh moved forward furiously ouf of sudden that shocked gippy and jasmin

Kahan ja raha hain!

Gippy's confused voice from behind

He took fast forward steps and held tejo's hand tightly which surprised her at once and at the same time snatched the chuddi from the stranger's hands

Lao main pehnata hun !

Meri wife hai toh mey pehna deta hun !

Ok!

He replied sharply


The stranger was taken aback with fateh's rudeness saying

Sir ap humey disturb ker rehey ho!

Hum madam ko achey sey pehnadetey hain !

Humey malum ho jai ga na key madam ko fit aati hai yah nehin!

Now this is too much!

He fumed

Tu betai ga meri biwi ki kelai ka measurement!

Tejo interferred trying to calm him

Fateh its ok !

Woh apna kam ker raha hain!


Sir ap aek kam kero app vo nariyal waley key pas jaker juice pilo!

Dimag thenda ho jaiga!

Aur aap juice piyo mezey sey!

Aur humey bhi thoda sa lene do!


Before he could reply gippy interrupted pulling his hand

Chalo fateh juice petey hain!

Bahut pias legi hain!


She was trying to grab his attention once again as he was distracted a while ago and her mission was failing which annoyed her to the core

Is chudi waley ko bhi abhi aana tha

Gippy kya hum aek hi straw sey peley!

Vo kya hai na pyar bedhta hain!

She watched him

No response!

Damn!


He held the glass of juice without taking a single sip with his eyes still fixed on the stranger who was all over his wife with madam yeh madam vo brushing his shoulders against hers and squeezing her hands touching and feeling the soft skin in pretense to help her wear the bangles

And she is so sweet and innocent not aware of his dirty intentions


As minutes passed she was getting restless as he was not paying any more attention to her since the entry of the stranger

Tejo purchased three set of bangles

He was relieved

Its over now!

Then stood up angrily dropping the glass of juice on the ground when the seller said excitedly

Madam humarey pas na ladies lingeries bhi hai!

Tejo replied happily

Acha dikhao zera !

Irrrk lekin madam apka size kya hai!

Tejo was trying to recall confused a little

Vo kya hai na shadi sey pehley meri mummy merey liye leti thi!

Shadi key baad toh kebhi li nehin abhi tak!

The seller stated excitedly

No problem madam hum abhi measurement le lete hain!

Ap zera andher ayiyeh uss kamrey main!


Before tejo could reply

The very fuming husband rushed forward took her into his arms and ran to his car driving off speedily

With the stranger shouting behind

Madam! Madam!


Jasmin was speechless

Mission jealousy didnt complete fully


A simple question

What if at the time jasmin was making fateh jealous and suddenly a stranger behaves very sweetly towards tejo what will fateh's reaction be!

Will he be jealous of jasmin with gippy or

Tejo with the stranger

My answer is already in the fiction


Reason for the fiction

No matter what tejo will always be his first priority !

Why

She resides in his subconscious mind which he is not aware of

And to move into her direction a trigger is required

He will be distracted from jasmin there and then who resides in his conscious side

And will later get back to her again when the effect of the subconscious triggers are over

Thats why he is bouncing between both and once he has realised that he has fallen for tejo then he will settle down fully

No more clashes between the two minds

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Posted: 4 years ago
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awesome OS! Fateh burning in jealousy for Tejo is always a delight!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Thank you for writing this 🥺 seeing Fateh be jealous for Tejo while ignoring Meanjolika is a delight! 🤩

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Posted: 4 years ago
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It will be a treat if they bring it onscreen

Fateh jealous for tejo instead of jasmin

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aniash

It will be a treat if they bring it onscreen

Fateh jealous for tejo instead of jasmin


Exactly, it is one of the tracks that we all are looking forward to.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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i fee the same. if someone comes along in Tejo's life, Fateh will lose it 🤣

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