fatejo short story - THE COINCIDENCE!

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Fellow friends

As i was having my tea break with taza chai dimaag ki tazgi bedhaiye my brains started working again. One more thought came so this story with my tea break

Only one story and at the end i have written the reason for the fiction. U can leave ur comments. I will surely reply once i am free

Tq for reading

Deep appreciation

Fatejo fans a treat for u guys

Hope makers bring this onscreen somehow


Story on upcoming

THE COINCIDENCE!


5pm sunday sandhus residence

She was talking to her friend on the phone standing at the roof top when she realised a pair of eyes were staring at her. Frightened she rushed towards the living room where her family was seated enjoying tea with hot samosas

Jasmin samosa khale !

Sati's sweet voice that calmed her down a little bringing to her two samosas on a small plate with a cup of tea. They were tasty but she couldnt enjoy them fully as her mind was occupied with that pair of eyes watching her closely

The guy in the red t shirt and black jeans!

For the past three days he was everywhere she went to with her friends so much so that the latter started teasing her

Tera neya ashique after fateh!

Fateh!

No one can take his place!

Annoyed she told them to be quiet


9 am monday university campus

There he was finally dropping her sister off at the entrance. She was admiring him from far but later was disturbed when she saw that guy with the red shirt again who was watching her very closely from the front gate

Click!

He took a picture of her still standing far away to which she became furious and ran towards him for a confrontation

Enough is enough!

Who are u !

Why are u following me !

She screamed angrily to that deep dark eyes staring hard at her sweet face . He was silent and then gave a weird smile putting his hand forward to her mouth with a hankerchief

That awful smell that went into her nostrils which made her passed out seconds later

Jasmin sandhu was kidnapped by a stalker!

Who was mesmerised with her beauty


7pm sandhus residence

Sati was restless as jasmin was still not home yet.

She must have gone to her friend's place!

Biji calmed her down

None of the other sandhus were worried as if they want her to disappear in thin air to which dilraj made a joke

Alian bhaiya ney kidnap karliya!

Three hours passed. Rang all her friends but all stated the same

She never came to our place!

Dolly then said

Make a police report!

Harman had to make the police report as rupi was not keen to search for her and stated sarcastically

Acha hai bhella tel geyi!

News of jasmin missing travelled all around the village with her posters on every wall

Virks were glad

May she remained disappeared!

Surprisingly none of the sandhus had any heartattacks except for sati crying nonstop with dolly and biji consoling her

Motherly feelings!

Tejo was devastated!

Her darling sister disappeared

Frantically searching for her with viraj and his friends

Where is fateh singh virk?

Fateh was nowhere in the house and virks thought like a pagal ashique must be searching his lady love

Naah !

Fateh singh virk was not at all in the search mission!

Where was he ?

He was at buzo's place playing video games the whole day while enjoying a pizza treat by the latter

Buzo was happy and ordered piza to celebrate

The disappearance of jasmin sandhus !

Fateh was not at all affected and he was quite surprised with his own reaction to which buzo smiled to himself

He has moved on without he himself realising it!

Ring!!

Mili kya !

Tejo's frantic voice on the phone

Fateh replied

Abhi dundh rehey hey!

Dont worry ok!

She will be fine!

Little did she know that he was lying to her

Fateh instructed her to go looking with viraj meanwhile he will pick buzo and they will join the search party later .

He lied blatantly!

Wanted to get away

Ur sister u find !

Went to buzo's place and indulge himself in video games instead and put up there the whole day

Cant go home na then mahi the bhabki ki chamchi will complain to tejo that he did nothing

Stay here stay safe!

Otherwise face the wrath of biwi!

Little did he know that he was going to have difficulty to digest his pizza when after two hours viraj's frantic voice on the phone

Fateh!

Fateh annoyed

Mill geyi kya !

Viraj nervous

Nehin kho geyi!

Fateh relieved

Still missing . Very good but seconds later stood up horrified when viraj's shaky voice continued

Tejo kidnap ho geyi!

Kya ! He screamed loudly couldnt believe his ears

Viraj explained that as he and tejo were searching for jasmin a black van approached with five men rushing out and ambushed then taking tejo away!

Fateh ran towardds his bike and rode speedily on the roads frantically searching for her with buzo tagging along and screaming on top of his lungs to which fateh paid no attention to

Arey kidnap hui hai aesey road mey nehin mil sakti samja kar !

Kidnapper phone karega!

After two hours kushbeer rang buzo as fateh was not picking up and instructed them to return immediately as the kidnappers had called . Tejo was kidnapped by the opponent political party insisting kushbeer to resign from his position and refrain from taking part into the next elections warning that tejo would be killed if he disobeyed to their demands

Kushbeer gave in easily on the spot that he will do as instructed and tejo should be returned safely. They could not inform anyone including the authorities as well otherwise tejo's life wpuld not be spared.

Fateh seated in his room at the bedside torn into pieces crying badly hugging tejo's photo frame tightly against his chest with buzo and mahi consoling him

Helpless!

If only i knew where were u i wont be waiting here for u to return!

Pls come home fast !

Rupi and biji sufferec heartattacks on the spot with both admitted to the ICU

Within 24 hours both sisters gone missing!

God ! Whats happening!

Well the lord wanted to put some sense into a husband"s mind that the one embedded in his heart was his precious wife and on the surface was his ex lover

That husband didnt understand the language of his heart clearly that he always thought that he loved the one that was on the surface as that was visible to him and unfortunately missing the details of the one living in it that was invisible

So time to wake him up from his slumber!

As the minutes passed he was devastated moving to and fro the living room watching the front door for her safe return and running towards the cordless phone hung at the wall the minute it rang thinking it could be tejo wanting to speak to him

Virks were surprised with his reaction .

Didnt expect that he cared for tejo that much !

Three hours later they heard the bad news

Tejo was admitted to a hospital

Shot!

She apparently managed to escape from the kidnappers but in the process got shot . Taken by a stranger to the hospital

Her condition was very critical and doctors stated chances to survive very slim!

He felt his head spinning as he dropped weakly on his knees

Thats it!

Bas itna sath tha!

Nooooo!

She cant leave me !

I cant live without her!

I love her!

Virks and sandhus were shocked as he blurted out the three magical words

Did tejo virk survive!

Definitely!

It was all a plan

Mastermind revealed

Upperwala!

The God!

Reason

It's time he understand the one who resides in his heart ignoring the one on the surface

What happened to the one on the surface !

Jasmin sandhu was still not found !

The police in the mission to track the stalker!

The upperwala said

Let her remain disappeared for a while longer!

Well she needs to sow her seeds !

Will parcel her home after the husband confesses to the wife first and not before that!


Reason for this fiction

If u want to get 100 percent confirmation that fateh singh virk has moved on from jasmin sandhu and had fallen for tejo virk

Very simple

Get both disappeared !

U will get ur answer

The coincidence!























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Posted: 4 years ago
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Loved it! I started writing an OS today as well and my god did we have similar ideas 😆

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Oyy hoye back with a bang. Taaza ole na kar diya apna kamal. Hope u write more.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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your stories are my only hope considering the current track. How dare they both use Tejo for their personal gain?😡

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